Are you looking for critique? If so I suggest using a smaller brush size and using the smoothing tool. I usually put the size of my lines at either two or three. I set the opacitiy at 198, and I set the smoothing tool at 76-81. Hope this helps^^
I was just trying to help thats all, I no things are meant to be put together for a reason in a way, I just didnt know if this was one of those times. I do love the concept though