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Improvement (sort of) by EpicEquestrian

Artist EpicEquestrian [gallery]
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Improvement (sort of)

Postby EpicEquestrian » Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:19 am

This drawing is amazing (terrible.) It totally has (no) effort put into it. Aren't the lines (anything but) neat? Arent the eyes beautiful (and totally creepy)? (Fat bloated horse is...fat)

Lol. I posted this terrible picture to show you my progress. ^^ My first Oekaki, in 2009:

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So I might have improved. A little.


Alllso I painted it. And it looked so much better. (Sorry for the bad quality)

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Last edited by EpicEquestrian on Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:22 am, edited 1 time in total.
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{Hello! :3 I am Epic Equestrian, and I love ponies. And horses. And stuff... :3 I am a proud eventer and am leasing a horse in real life. It's tough love, seeing as my old horse (whom was sold) was the opposite of him. Anyways, I'm a random crazy person and we might get along so message me. :D And I also might do art Commissions. Pm me for that, too. }
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Re: Improvement (sort of)

Postby Onew~ » Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:31 am

It's good! The jowl(Jaw) just needs to be wider and shorter. Honestly, right now it looks a bit like a tube x3333 The neck could also be a bit thinner.
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Re: Improvement (sort of)

Postby strawberrykiwi » Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:35 am

It's cute!
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Re: Improvement (sort of)

Postby EpicEquestrian » Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:01 am

Thanks for your advice, Juke-Box. :)

And thank you StrawberryKiwi :D
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{Hello! :3 I am Epic Equestrian, and I love ponies. And horses. And stuff... :3 I am a proud eventer and am leasing a horse in real life. It's tough love, seeing as my old horse (whom was sold) was the opposite of him. Anyways, I'm a random crazy person and we might get along so message me. :D And I also might do art Commissions. Pm me for that, too. }
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Re: Improvement (sort of)

Postby EpicEquestrian » Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:22 am

Painted it :D
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