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Re: Owl

Postby arturia » Sun May 20, 2012 1:32 pm

It's nice, but I have a few things ~

~ The head is an odd shape
~ The legs are bent awkwardly
~ The eyes are two different sizes
~ The body is to roundish, the chest part should thicker and the stomach part a bit thinner
~ The wings are too round as well, they should connect better with the owl's body
~ The head is sort of tilted too

Not trying to be mean either.
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Re: Owl

Postby RPFLightMyFire » Sun May 20, 2012 1:41 pm

I'm actually very glad you tell me these things. It will help me to be better next time I draw!(:
i used to have a neat signature just like i used to think i had my life put together lol
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