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Redline for lolpeaceoutlol <3 by kavlri

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Redline for lolpeaceoutlol <3

Postby kavlri » Sat Mar 10, 2012 2:49 am

I really have to say, you've improve so much from the last time.., er , I couldn't remember when ><

Anyway, here are something that I want to point out;
-The head size, compare to the body, is a bit too big, try to make them smaller
-The muzzle(mouth) is too thick which makes the head look bigger
-The position of the eye should moves forward a bit, with smaller size. I draw a little eye on the corner to show how I personally draw eyes.
-Make the neck a bit longer
-Bigger ears
-Try to define the fingers on the paws more clearly, the foot there is what I usually draw paws
-Knee level is the same as the elbow, also try to make them show out a bit more
-I'm not sure how often wolves lift their tail, so I just drawn them with their tail down
-You might want to sketch before you line the lines too, I left my sketch layer therein green so you can see how I sketch before lining.

Please note that this is not the most accurate red-line, I too still need practice. ^^ Hope this help though.
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Re: Redline for lolpeaceoutlol <3

Postby Green Arrow » Sat Mar 10, 2012 4:54 am

Still need practice... Pffft. This is brilliant ^^ Just got some tips to help with the way I draw eyes 8D
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Re: Redline for lolpeaceoutlol <3

Postby lolpeaceoutlol » Sat Mar 10, 2012 11:06 am

thank you so much Peace&Colby, i really appreciate it. Yea i have improved quite a bit i guess. =) Thank you for all the tips, it really helps me a bunch.
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Re: Redline for lolpeaceoutlol <3

Postby Novie Kenari » Sat Mar 10, 2012 11:35 am

looks good peace ^^
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