[broker]

Lengthen the end date by a day. I'll be judging this 5:00 PM tomorrow. :]

[soul.]

ok :3 I gotta work on my story! :D

Edit: Finished mine :3

[3000feet]

Name: Eliana (means daughter of the sun)
Gender: female
Element: Sun
Personality: she loves nature and light. shes very just and hates the dark and evil. she is brave and would die for her loved ones, though she can be shy meeting new wolves once she warms up to you you'll never find a better friend
Story: She was in a beautiful and magical land of Nix, her father was a sky element kyrubi, and he mother was a light element kyrubi. She was born on a gorgeouse sunny day with a blue sky and no clouds. she was the first of her litter to stand and walk, and almost got into to trouble many times for wandering out of the den. she was always adventerouse and was the fastest and strongest of the litter. her parents were the alphes of the element pac and everyone knew that she would be the one chosen next to be alphess. One morning everyone woke up, but the sun hadnt risen! Everything was dark! Young Eliana who hadnt yet discovered her element was frightened, she hated the dark. it as dark for many days because the last sun element wolf that was supposed to raise the sun ahd passed on. There can only be one sun element wolf living on earth at once, so she was ery rare and now they had no one to raise the sun! 2 weeks passed by in pitch darkness, plants couldnt grow and prey was scarce. Eliana went to the top of the hill and started to sniffle. "I wish the sun would just come up...." she said. she looked up at the sky. "Please mister sun, come up." and suddenly, the valley began to glow with radiant light. Eliana stared in amazment, had she done that! she looked at her coat, and a bunch of golden, beautiful glowing markings had appeared! (her coat had been pure whtie before she had discovered her element) she gasped and ran to ehr parents. "Mommy daddy I raised the sun!!" she said. she showed them her maring for proof and the whole pac was amazed, another sun wolf! she quickly grew and is now the strong, confident alphess of the element pack. (hope you like it took awhile lol )

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Thanks for doing this! sehs beautiful!


A Poem
Title: Daughter of the Sun

Daughter of the sun
You glow with beauty hun
Your brilliant sunbeams shine down on earth
You'v brought us warmth since your marvolouse birth
You shine like silver, Glitter like gold
Your radiant beauty will never grow old
You sing a song of joy and fun
Oh everyday you raise the sun
Sunrise, and sundown
Your brilliant beauty is msot always around
You slumber at night till its morn
Then once again make us warm

[broker]

Your entries look great everyone! This is going to be hard... ':|

[soul.]

Should I make a personality as well? :]

[broker]

Should I make a personality as well? :]

If you'd like to. The judging is mainly focused on the story. c:

[Novva]

3000feet i don't think there supposed to have powers

[3000feet]

I honestly dont think it matters as long as I have a good story. but ill ask bonus

is it ok that she has power bonus?

[Novva]

well you would have to ask The Catalyst

[broker]

I don't see any harm in it but let me go and get the creators permission about it.