Re: Story Contest

Postby actionhero » Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:33 pm

I bet you guys could write some pretty amazing stories!
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Re: Story Contest

Postby .Coyote » Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:21 pm

O.o Woah that is alot of bumps!
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Re: Story Contest

Postby Lions » Tue Aug 30, 2011 4:37 am

I am entering! Is it okay if the story is from the humans point of view?
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Re: Story Contest

Postby Lions » Tue Aug 30, 2011 5:16 am

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My story, (I hope you dont mind if its from a human point of view :/


I wandered around the cold city of New York. I had no place to go, I had lost everything in that crash, my family my relatives, my pets. I was the only survivor. It was almost Christmas, another Christmas spent alone. The sky was light grey and soft white snowflakes fell to the ground. "I have been alone for four years." I said out loud in nothing but a whisper. I saw a large apartment building and walked over to it, I sat down on the hard cement steps. I heard some loud clanging coming from the back of the building. I jumped up in fright. New York was not the safest place for a ten year old to be alone. But I let my curiosity get to me, I walked to the back of the building to see a shadowy figure. Was it a street dog? I had sure seen plenty of those in my time out here. I took a closer look, no it was not a dog. I think it was what everyone was calling Night Walkers.
"Hi" I said in a gentle whisper.
The Night Walked seemed curious as his head was cocked. He slowly inched over to me. I looked around and noticed he had been looking through the garbage for something to eat. I pulled out a small piece of bread out of my sweatshirt pocket.
"Here, I have some food." I said ripping the bread and tossing a chunk at him.
He walked into the light and revealed his amazing coat,It was a stunning blue and what looked like a tornado or a hurricane on his shoulder. He has light grey fur mixed in with the blue and a small blue necklace that looked like a drop of water to me. He snarfed up the bread and seemed to loose as shyness as he walked right up to me and sat down next to me. I stroked his fur, it felt like silk so smooth and soft.
"I'll call you, Storm~Chaser but Storm for short." I said whispering into his large ears. I heard some one yelling at me.
"Storm go hide!" I said quietly.
I bolted off down the ally with storm at my side.
"I said go hide!" But he would not move from my side.
"Hey you, where do you think your going!" The large man yelled as he ran after me.
I raced down the ally until I came to The back of a building.
"Storm its a dead end!" I said in a panicked whisper.
The man came closer with his fists balled and and it looked like he had a knife shape bulging out of his pocket. "Please, God help me." I prayed silently.
All of the sudden Storm jumped out and growled louder than my dead dog Max had ever had, and Max was a German Shepard!
I defensively shielded me from the man that was trying to attack me.
The man lunged at Storm but Storm dodged his attack. Storm threw himself at the man and surprised him, nearly knocking the man down.
"Good boy Storm." I yelled.
The man pulled out a knife and threw it at Storm's soft fur. Storm again dodged it and grabbed it between his teeth and ran over to me, dropping it at my feet. I grabbed the knife and closed the blade and stuck it in my pocket.
Storm ran at the guy but this time the man was prepared. He sent a crushing blow to Storms side sending Storm to the ground. I held my breath in fright but then jumped up and fished out the knife from my pocket.
"You leave him alone." I shouted as I charged to the man.
"Who's going to make me? You?" He laughed and kicked Storm's motionless body.
"Yeah." I said as I jumped up and gave him a small cut in his chest, just so he would know I was not scared to use the knife on him.
I started screaming help, I was hoping the whole neighborhood would hear.
"Help!" I called over and over again. The man seemed scared so he ran back down the ally. But someone had called the cops and complained about the noise so the where standing at the end of the ally.
"Where do you think your going?" One of the officers asked.
The officer pulled him away and stuck him in a police car. The officers started walking down the ally.
"No, im not going to an orphanage." I whispered as I looked around for some way to get out. I picked up Storm and kind of teetered at his weight. I looked up and saw a ladder. I jumped up and pulled it down and grabbed the bar. I pulled myself and storm up the small ladder onto a fire escape. I sat there calmly as the officers looked around. I wouldn't breath, I was to scared they would hear me. But eventually the walked off. I looked at Storm, his eyes where open and he was moving around a little but i could tell he was in a quite a bit of pain. I carried him down the ladder and jumped to the ground. I knew there had to be a vet somewhere, for heavens sake its New York!
Storm jumped to the ground and looked around. He wobbled back and forth as he walked. I finally found a vet and walked in.
"I know its the wrong thing to do but we have to get you fixed up." I said gently to Storm outside the building.
We where going to go in get him fixed then run out while she was getting the bill ready.
I walked into the building and everyone seemed a little surprised I had a Night Walker with me.
"How may I help you?" Asked the tall brown haired lady at the front desk.
"My dog, uh Night walker got into a bit of a fight and I think he might have broken some ribs or something. She nodded and typed something up on her computer.
"Walk down that hall and when your to a door that says, Room 112 go in." She offered.
I followed her instructions and walked into the room and waited for the vet.
Finally the vet came and checked Storm out.
"Yes he has a few bruised ribs but that's all. He just needs to take it light for the next week or so."
I nodded and smiled as I walked out. Just as planned while she was writing up the bill we darted out.
I walked quickly to a small shed I called home, that was just inside the City Limits.
"Where home, Storm." I said softly as I jumped onto my bed. (Blankets are my bed)
He walked around the room and sniffed everything then found a blanket and curled up and fell asleep.


Hope that was okay.
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Re: Story Contest

Postby .Coyote » Tue Aug 30, 2011 5:20 am

pfft, it could be from a rock's perspective, as long as the main focus is that NW
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Re: Story Contest

Postby Lions » Tue Aug 30, 2011 5:22 am

Ooo, I might have to try that sometime XD
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Re: Story Contest

Postby .Coyote » Tue Aug 30, 2011 5:28 am

My sister is writing a story for her college writing class from the perspective of a napkin.
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Re: Story Contest

Postby Lions » Tue Aug 30, 2011 5:30 am

0.0
That very cool!!!!
I would have never thought of that!
But it is also kind of funny and odd ^^
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Re: Story Contest

Postby actionhero » Tue Aug 30, 2011 6:23 am

Haha yeah... Sorry about that
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Re: Story Contest

Postby actionhero » Tue Aug 30, 2011 9:09 am

Still bumping
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