Kalon #1950 by kolyakun

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Kalon #1950

Postby kolyakun » Mon Aug 30, 2021 5:16 am

traits wrote:[nr] sclera
[s] hair, shine
[c] fur, tail
[uc] ears, pupil, fur
[r] missing eye, goop, body shine


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though it must follow one prompt- How did they lose their eye?

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Re: Kalon #1950

Postby epilogue » Mon Aug 30, 2021 5:17 am

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Re: Kalon #1950

Postby jinkori » Mon Aug 30, 2021 5:21 am

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kalon name: nuri
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Re: Kalon #1950

Postby justamindset » Mon Aug 30, 2021 5:35 am

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Re: Kalon #1950

Postby PleaserOfCrowds » Mon Aug 30, 2021 5:50 am



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kalon name: Loki
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I. AFTERMATH
The last thing Loki remembers is the ship that they plummeted from, and the betrayal that they should’ve seen coming.

Loki remembers the bright flash of thunder illuminating the traitor’s shine as they fought each other, with the crew they grew up fighting the traitor’s allies. The traitor was none other than their former lifelong partner in crime, the same one they tried to rescue from his captors.

But by the time Loki had finally reached Scarlet, it was far too late for the former pirate, as his affiliations changed beyond recognition. The wisecracking pirate Loki knew was no more as Scarlet failed to recognize them even after they pleaded for him to listen. As Loki took a blow from Scarlet’s sword, the last things they saw was his harsh glare, a knight with four arms by his side and a taller kalon who looked horrified as they plummeted into the freezing waters down below. Everything seemed to move in slow motion as they slowly felt a sharp pain on the side of their face, the realization and the horror of the traitor as the ship went up in flames. With the cold shock of hitting the water, they were snapped into unconsciousness and the cold realization that it was all over in an instant.

It wasn’t supposed to end that way.



II. AFTERLIFE

As Loki opened up their eye, they felt a strange and overflowing energy course through their body.

Slowly and hazily they got up, examining their surroundings as they took it all in. On the surface they were standing in was a surface of eerily calm and endless, reflective ocean with the night sky blanketing the abyss. Slowly, they looked down at their reflection and found that what stared back of them was something so unlike them.

Their eye was closed over from what Loki assumed was from the fight, but somewhere in their mind they knew that the strange goop that they now had was something divine and unnatural, and it was overflowing out of them. Their shine was now in the shape of a snake; a animal Loki despised. It couldn’t be them that they had to be staring back, right? This unsightly appearance of theirs, it couldn’t be..?

“I realize that it may come a bit of a shock, but I recommend you get comfortable with your new appearance,” a voice spoke out of nowhere.

Looking up, Loki saw another kalon slowly make their way towards them. A chill shook down their spine as they just knew that stranger making their way towards them wasn’t someone from this world, nor mortal of all. In their presence, it felt as if the kalon in front of Loki was made of pure energy.

“I apologize for the sudden modifications, but there was no way of saving you otherwise,” they spoke. Loki felt that the monotonous voice of the stranger was mocking them, their apathy seeming unsympathetic to them.

“What… What have you done to me?!” Loki yelled at them. “Why?! I don’t want this!”

“You’re too interesting for your fate to end like this, the child of a legendary pirate king to be slain like this. I can sense that you have a burning desire to get back and make him pay, am I right?” their voice sent a cold chill down Loki’s throat as the stranger sneered. “I’ve saved your life, haven’t I? I’m doing you a favor by entertaining someone like you.”

“What do you want?!” Loki snapped back.

“Well? Your eye that’s closed over. An eye for a second chance of life seems like a small price to pay, don’t you think..?” The stranger smiled at them. “It’s not like it will be functional if it does open back up. I’ve had others pay more for a second chance, so why not give up something that lacks use to you?”

“… You know what? Sure. Take it.” Loki responded. They felt like they couldn’t stand to be around the stranger anymore, especially what felt like an eternity. “Return me to my crew at once,” they demanded.

“Excellent choice, my friend,” they nodded. “Once I return you, I expect you carry out your purpose and perform. Don’t disappoint me.”

“Purpose?” Loki questioned, but nothing could prepare them what the stranger said next.

“An eye for an eye as they all say, Loki. I’ll always be looking over you, if you do a good job I might even let you see your beloved father again…” the stranger grinned. “I will be retuning you now so until we meet again once you’ve used up your chance”

“My.. father?! I-wait!” Loki yelled, but in an instant they were knocked out again…

III. FALLOUT

They’d promised to stay by his side. Hell, it was one of the few times that Loki felt they were truly honest and they both knew each other better than anyone else.

They were partners in crime, siblings in crime since the day they met. Together with their ragtag family they’d picked up along the way, together they ruled the seas through terror and destruction. It was always the two of them, having the time of their lives as they lived day by day on the edge. They were inseparable. Life was perfect the way it was, until Scarlet was captured in the chaos of a mission.

Even from before they were born, Loki was destined to be the king of pirates like their father had been. Scarlet was to be their right hand man, their voice of reason, their sibling.

Everything was perfect, until the queen and her knight interfered.

IV. RETRIBUTION

The next time Loki awoke was in the wreck of their former ship, washed up on shore as a a heavy thunderstorm brought down rains that fell in sheets. Their crew, nowhere to be found. They were alone, trapped beneath the collapsed wreck.

Slowly but surely they forced their way out of the wreck, their fur waterlogged and cold as Loki stumbled around the shore. Nobody was there, but in the distance they were certain they saw a large castle looming in the distance. They looked into a puddle nearby, and sure enough they had the changes present. Even as they thought about it, it haunted Loki. But now was not the time to think about a dying dream. In Loki’s heart, all they wanted was revenge on the people that took their adoptive brother and their father away from them as Loki was certain the kingdom had something to do with it. Even more so on Scarlet, who had betrayed them beyond belief. They knew what they had to do.

Using their own goop, Loki healed themselves with the divine energy coursing through it and healed the empty eye to be completely closed. Somehow in them, they knew that their goop would be toxic to anyone but them like the venom of a snake. Perhaps it was the “stranger” who subtlety gave them their instincts. Their thoughts were not on the missing crew, nor the interaction of the stranger that chilled their spine, or the mention of their father or their worries. Perhaps it was the “stranger” suppressing those thoughts.

Instead, Loki heard a mantra in their head echoing what they needed to do. Their legacy and life ended by their scorned partner in crime, Loki was supposed to be dead. But instead, their anger revitalized them with the help of a stranger. Now they were going to set things right, once and for all.

An eye for an eye.

Somewhere in Loki’s mind, they dreaded facing their former friend again. But their father, would he be proud of them? As they slowly made their way into the kingdom, they started to feel a sense that they made a massive mistake…




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Re: Kalon #1950

Postby skywalker, » Mon Aug 30, 2021 5:53 am

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Re: Kalon #1950

Postby Cyrano » Mon Aug 30, 2021 6:14 am

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kalon name: Krishna Echos

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"She used to believe she was the curer of ignorance in mortals; she was sent to share her wisdom and help them understand the errors in their ways. They too could be as holy if they just tried.
Unfortunately the mortals did not understand this, and instead were only interested in how she glittered; the gold that she was draped in and how she shone in the sun. They were not interested in what she had to teach but only in riches. The bitterness inside her grew as they used the knowledge he had gifted them to gain power, and as the power consumed the mortals her bitterness consumed her.
Her heart became less open and her refinement turned to misery. Her heart began to rot.
Higher powers looked down on her with lack of mercy and compassion and they took what was her prize, her only truly loved possession, her eye leaving only her divine nature.
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Re: Kalon #1950

Postby wishbone! » Mon Aug 30, 2021 6:27 am

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Re: Kalon #1950

Postby cecro » Mon Aug 30, 2021 6:37 am

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kalon name: Lorai
form: writing and art
-1 (WRITING)-
Syrup padded through the woods, unsure of her surroundings. She had never been there before, her feet shaking and her mind thinking of only one thing; death may be awaiting. As she padded through, a wolf leaped from the side, tackling her. She stepped back in fear, trying to run. The wolf chased her, and she was cornered into a cave. The wolf then slashed her eye, ripping it out. She managed to escape, but she needed to find a river, fast.
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She managed to wash off the blood, but she knew that she would not be able to see in that eye, never again. Her fur stood on end and she was breathing fast, but she tried to calm herself down and found the proper resources to at least soothe the pain.
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Re: Kalon #1950

Postby Dewy Feathers » Mon Aug 30, 2021 7:00 am

user + id: Dewy Feathers 998285
kalon name: Andra (Greek name meaning strong and brave.)
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#2 the beast
#3 the truth
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Andra swung around another sword. “Too light.” She said. The small kalon helping her nodded and scampered out of the room. He came back, dragging two more swords. The first one had a hilt carved with roses and vines. Andra swung it. She frowned. “I don’t like this one.” She picked up the next sword. It was plain, but sharp. Andra swung it around. “It’s perfect.” She said, and the small kalon nodded. He led her through torch-lit walls and several rooms, until she was standing on a dais in front of a gilded mirror. A few more kalons came into the room. They poked and measured and whispered and wrote notes. Andra stood there for a few hours, before they finally talked to her. “Do you want leather armor and a cape?” An old, grumpy kalon said. Andra nodded. They showed her to a chair and bookshelf while they disappeared into the back room.
It had been forever and there was no news on the armor. Andra couldn’t stand this silence or the waiting for much longer. Almost as an answer to her frustration, the door opened and Andra looked up. A kalon wearing a long, hooded cloak came in. The two kalons in the room broke into wide smiles. “Hi!” Andra said. “Hello Andra! I brought some ribbons back.” The kalon tossed two yellow ribbons to the seat. Andra caught them and quickly tied her long, red hair up. “So, why are you here?” The mysterious kalon asked. “I’m waiting for my armor.” Said Andra. “I’ve got my sword already. What’s yours?” The kalon held up their sword. It was a long, thick blade. The hilt was carved with dragons holding up the sharp, curved metal. A large, shiny, blue rock glowed in the center. “You always were a show-off.” Said Andra, looking at it. She hefted hers up. It was plain and simple, except for a few small pink and red rocks in the hilt. A door creaked open, and two kalons came from the back room, carrying armor and a cape. And Andra took them, her cloaked friend called out “General wants you on the front lines against the darkness today!” before he was pushed onto the dais and Andra pushed out.
Andra finished buckling up the armor. It was light, strong, and expertly crafted. She stood there, admiring it in the torchlight for a second, before she tied on her cape, and slid the sword into the sheath on her back. She pulled out the extra ribbon her friend had given her, and tied it around her tail. She would need to cut her blood-red hair later, but later wasn’t today, and later wasn’t soon. She had jobs to do, and she needed to make sure The Darkness was vanquished before she went on with her life. The Darkness had surrounded the kingdom, and the only thing still standing was the castle. All the surviving villagers had come here for refuge, and the Darkness now surrounded it. It was the middle of summer, but the sun had disappeared, covered by fog and shadows. The Darkness took many forms, and they were bent on destroying the kingdom, forever. Andra sighed. There was almost no food left. It was better not to dwell on it, and do something about this problem. Andra ran down twisting halls and through many rooms, before she stood in front of the large oak doors at the entrance to the castle. She could hear howls and screams and roars outside. Andra closed her eyes for a second, and thought of her childhood home. Then she pushed open the doors, and into the battlefront.
All around her, she could see death. Shadows and nightmarish creatures were being defeated, but more took their place, killing noble warriors and familiar faces. The champion of the battlefield was a large, bear-like creature, but three times the size. It had triangular scales, all different sizes. Large spikes covered its back. As Andra stared at it, the thing stood on its back legs and roared. The trees were flattened and several soldiers fled in terror. More covered their ears and The Darkness descended on them. Andra couldn’t hear much from where she stood. She could see her cloaked friend hiding in a grove of trees, defending himself against smaller shadows. Several kalons rushed to her. “Go back!” “It’s useless!” “Just give up.” “We won't win.” She could see the sad, defeated look in their eyes. It was up to her to defeat the shadow, or the kingdom would be defeated. She sighed, unsheathed her sword, and started running.
Andra let out a fierce battle cry as she rushed towards the bear-like Shadow. She leaped towards its face, slicing it with the sword. The beast howled in pain, purple goop pouring down. Andra tucked and rolled, stopping by a large paw. She sliced it, dodged, and jumped again. She flipped over the creature, stabbed it with the sword, and rolled away. The thing showed no sign of stopping, and Andra was getting tired. The beast swiped its massive paw. Andra barely dodged it, and it ripped out some of her hair. She winced in pain, and the beast hit her again. It threw her into a pine tree. Andra heard a crack! and her head throbbed. She could close her eyes, maybe for just one second. She heard a sharp cry and several more kalon calling her name. It hurts. She thought. It hurts so much. I need to sleep. I just need to close my eyes. The beast roared again. She could see shapes wielding swords and bows and all sorts of weapons. Her cloaked friends came up to her. “Andra!” He said. It sounded too quiet with the ringing in her ears. “Andra I need you to wake up. Come on!” Andra felt nothing. “I can’t.” Andra whispered. “No! Andra wake up! WAKE UP” Andra closed her eyes. She could hear the beast roar and the clanging of steel against scales. Andra shook her head. She had to get up. She stumbled to her feet, reaching for her sword. She held it, looking for the beast. It was closer to her. She stabbed and slashed at its claws. It was too tough. It picked her up again, and roared in her face. It threw her. She felt sick. Sick and so, so tired. The creature roared again and clawed her. Andra blacked out.
She could hear muffled voices. It was impossible to make out the words. She knew her friend was there. They were arguing. Andra fell back asleep.
Andra was barely conscious. She heard shuffling and quiet words. She fell back asleep.
Andra woke up fully when a strange kalon walked in. She shifted around and raised her head. “Oh! You’re awake! Andra’s awake!” Several more kalons crowded around her. “Move!” Her friend called. A gap opened in the crowd, and a kalon bounded through. “Andra!” He said, coming to her side. “Where are we?” She whispered. Her friend sighed. It’s a long story. Maybe too much for you to deal with right now.” Andra sat up. “Ok, I’m ready now. What happened?” Her friend sighed again. “I knew you wouldn’t say no. Do one thing for me. Look in the mirror.” Andra grabbed the mirror from her friend. She tilted it from side to side. “When did I lose my eye?! I think that’s a pretty big thing I should’ve known!! Why didn’t you tell me? When did it happen? How long has it been? WHERE AM I?!?” At this outburst from Andra, a couple of kalons around her scooted away. Her friend sighed again. “I’ll tell you the story.
“Let’s start when the beast. It had knocked you out, and I was trying to wake you. I had to lead smaller Shadows away. When you did wake up, the beast was by you. It threw you again and roared and then slashed your face. You blacked out again. I carried you away from the castle, and bandaged you with stuff from my bag. The beast killed many more kalons.” Her friend had stopped talking and stood there for a minute.
“We hid. We found more kalons and they joined us. I carried you away from the castle. We left, Andra. We’re in the forest now.” Andra stared at him for a second. “I’m going back to the castle. Show me the way. I’m going.” Andra pushed past him. She grabbed a bag, her sword and some food. She swept through the camp, like a bad-tempered storm. The scowl on her face cleared a path through the kalons. “Andra, wait! I need to explain!” “WHAT Talos?! You left the castle! You’re a deserter! I’m going back, and you can’t stop me!” “No, Andra, ANDRA!” Andra had reached a cliff overlooking the castle. “No…” She whispered. The kingdom had fallen. That must’ve been the last Shadow, the final champion. It was all her fault. She would have fought harder, been faster, been stronger, if she knew what would happen. Talos came up beside her. Andra had collapsed. “Is this, are we all that’s left of the realm?” It was too hard to think about. She was crying, tears running down her face. “Was it all for nothing? Did I lose an eye, for nothing?” Talos bent down by her. “It was a sacrifice. You helped us survive. We will survive Andra. We have to.”
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