[nio]

this cat looks like a warm cup of hot cocoa with whipped cream <3

to win this cat, tell me a short story about them! max 200 words.

ends 10th december 12am pst [4pm my time]

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[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Cat Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b]
[b]Clan:[/b] (Please link)
[b]Age:[/b] (1 year or above)
[b]Prompt:[/b]

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Name: Riel -> Thistlelight
Gender: male
Rank: lead healer
Clan: Falls of Eden
Description: chocolate classic tabby with medium white and amber eyes.
Age: 25 moons
Edits: [NR] long fur, fluffy tail
Owner: Vivika

[Lex.]

Username: Lex.
Cat Name: Sunflower
Gender: Female
Rank: Warrior
Clan: (Please link)
Age: 30 moons
Prompt:

It was a sunny day. Sunflower woke up that morning feeling good, like she could take on the world. She and her mate Frogrunner went on patrol together, admiring the beautiful territory. Some would say they didn't accomplish much, just drinking in the sights and smells of this spring day, but Sunflower disagrees. Time is never wasted when it's spent with a loved one.

[SilentMelody]

Username: SilentMelody
Cat Name: Dipperfeather
Gender: transmale
Rank: caregiver
Clan: Shoreclan
Age: 18 moons
Prompt:

[sunny-skies]

Username: sunny-skies
Cat Name:
Gender:
Rank:
Clan: (Please link)
Age: (1 year or above)
Prompt:

dropping out!! gl to everyone else!

[0Zero0]

Username: 0Zero0
Cat Name: MapleDew
Gender: Female
Rank: Warrior [Captain]
*Leader to all the other warriors
Clan: Peak Clan
Age: 14 moons (1 year)
Prompt:

Not a single scar on this cat's body, yet she has fought hundreds of battles despite her young age. It's the skill she carries and why the she-cat has been entrusted with such an important job. Maple carries her tail high, and tries her hardest not to show her fears. Many call her brave, cunning, reliable, and many other noteworthy things. She carries the clan's hearts, words, and health behind her with every step, but is always afraid of that one ledge that will crumble.

"What's wrong?" A small kitten glowered up at the warrior, not understanding the situation so clearly.

The two of them were in the training feild staring down at a small creature a few feet away. It's pink nose shifting about in fear, and shuffling about on the mountains floor. "It..." Maple shivered. "It knows we're here. It's planning something."

The kitten's confusion was clear as it looked up at the frightened warrior, and then back at the mouse. "Are you afraid of mice?"

Maple retorted loudly to the apprentice. "Don't be ridiculous!" thus causing the mouse to skitter away. There went lunch. If it were a fox Maple would do fine, but the prey put the mentor in deep fear.

[205 words] (will shave a few off if requested)

[beebun]

Username: Coraly
Cat Name: tbd
Gender: female
Rank: warrior
Clan: FoxyClan
Age: 19 moons
Prompt:
mark w/ the discovery of twoleg hot cocoa (wippp)

[faelyn]

username: faelyn
cat name: jaromir (ro) "meaning; spring peace"
gender: male
rank: villager -> knight
clan: the shore of dreams
age: nineteen moons
prompt:
they had eyes of silver, and voices of gold.
voices that held a medley of promises. beautiful words that spoke of the secrets he longed to know.

“your imagination is playing with you, ro.” the villagers would say.
“i can hear them. the wind.. ”

maybe, they were right about him.
he was foolish. naive. maybe, he did have his head in the clouds.

he didn’t care.
he would stop at nothing to see his sisters, again.

because, today was the day.
they promised. the spirits would show him the way.
he had been loyal to them. he had betrayed everything and everyone.

night had fallen, with the symphony of mystic voices to match. the wind was singing.
but, the first note hit hard.

“we have one more wish, jaromir. ”
“i’ll do whatever it takes.”
“good. a small sacrifice for something so.... precious.”
“is our oath still true? will you show me where they went?”
“we keep our word, your sisters are waiting.”
“tell me.”
“kill your brother.”

his heart ached.
claws glinting with ivory shades as they slithered like serpents. deceptive and lethal.
the gamble of fates were settled….

and, the skies were already painted scarlet with blood.
(#200! <3)

[Vivika]

Username: Vivika
Cat Name: Riel >> Thistlelight
Gender: Male
Rank: Lead healer
Clan: Falls of Eden
Age: Twenty-five moons
Prompt:

“You okay?” Riel applied the last of the salve, brows furrowed. The kit snuggled close, sending a relieved chuckle bubbling through him. “We’ll see your mother soon,” he promised. For now, he’d delay. She’d witnessed enough--

A silver-tom barged in, paws thundering against the stone cavern. Callan, captain of the King’s forces. A whimper shattered the silence as another was shoved forward. The kit’s mother.

His heart dropped.

“Last chance,” the captain hissed. “The location of the rebellion. Or the kit dies.”

"I told you---I don't know."

Riel swallowed. “Captain, there’s no need to involve the kit,” he murmured, shielding the kit from view. "She's--”

“Step aside, healer.” A lunge forward, claws unsheathed, canines flashing...

He didn’t think.

One step to block the blow. One strike for the neck.
Crimson flashed. The thud of a fallen warrior. Chest unmoving. Still.

Stars, what had he done?
Scarlet stained his paws. Paws sworn to revere all life.

His chest tightened. He'd swore an oath to heal, to remain neutral… to never cause harm.
He’d just killed a cat. Committed treason.

Not now. He drew a breath, steeling himself.

“We must leave. There’s a place...” His gaze rose. “They call it Eden.”

// #199 words, with a healer who broke their oath. <33

[nio]

oh man these were all so good??? you guys did amazing with only 200 words to go with!!

the winner of stars #551 is Vivika! congrats! your story had me on the edge of my seat!! Riel did the right thing protecting the kit <3

faelyn gets an HM for their gorgeous writing and 0Zero0 gets an HM because i really enjoyed their story. <3

thank you for entering everyone!

[faelyn]

congrats viv! <3 i adored riel, he's so sweet.
ooh, thank you, nio for the hm! ^^ i'm so glad you enjoyed my story, i loved writing it!