[Divantae]

Usernumber (not username!): 758258
Kalon name: Asuka
Poem:
Metal clangs awoke with a start,
Uneasiness edging lips to part,
To seek the attacker, intruder,
Yet hollowness of her room's bones pursued her.

Wind's breath shrieked against bars,
Flighty hum of bristling cars.
Ghosts of her past's quarrels,
Reviving against her better laurels.

Slumber eluded her crusted eyes,
Darting instead to chastise.
Racking up her supposed crimes,
Those she couldn't repay in lifetimes.

Hear! A sound from yonder there,
Some light stirring in cauldron of air.
A brushing of wings, a flutter,
Allured her to the window's shutter.

Let free a snowy dove,
Catching a net of stars above.
Caressing the wind beneath its wings,
A kind of reassurance its beating brings.

She didn't have to herself punish,
Among colossal clouds she could simply vanish.
To soar high above the boundaries many fear,
For she had no life left here.

This tiny dove came to rest,
Shaping and creating its own nest.
To perch upon arms of willow tree,
To fly was to be free.

[Cloasiii]

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𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐮𝐥𝐭𝐬 !!
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Thank you to everyone that entered, I hope you all enjoyed writing your poems as much as I did reading them. ;v;

I'm awarding HMs to:

StarDustCrusader (751421)
lil. (981422)
~The Original Alice~ (206113)
Ivytea (368630)
Ucanthandleme (809102)

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I am awarding a Runner-Up kalon to Divantae (758258) !!

I feel like there was a very intentional thematic shift from the beginning of the poem to the end -- the first line, "Metal clangs awoke with a start," is an abrupt start to a poem that ends with the line "To fly was to be free." I really like it! I'll be designing you a RU based on this theme. c:
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The winner of this kalon is:

Ki-Mono !!
(92093)

Your poem has a very tasty disgruntled energy that I think works well for Chanel's design; it makes for a wonderfully dynamic character. I'm very happy to congratulate you on winning Chanel! <3



Thank you again everyone for participating in this comp -- it was amazing being a guest artist for the first time for this wonderful community :>

[Audria]

Thank you so much for the HM, Cloasii!! I loved the prompt and im glad you enjoyed reading it.
Congrats to both Ki-Mono and Divantae as well, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your forms as well!! ♥️

[Divantae]

Congratulations Ki-Mono and the HM winners! I quite love these poem prompts and everyone's poems are nice. Thanks for the RU as well!

[Ki-Mono]

JFNKEHNITHUKHNSFIHE ARE YOU SERIOUS???????
This is the first time I've ever won a Kalon!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

[Strange_Atoms]

thanks for the hm! I love the name you chose Ki-Mono!!