Rise | #2812 by Goner.

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Rise | #2812

Postby Goner. » Mon Dec 30, 2019 1:46 am

Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!


This cat may not be traded until: March 2nd, 2020.
There is a 2 month cooldown after each ownership change.
For a transfer to be official, both parties must post on this cat's page. The original owner must post in the archive.

This cat has found a twoleg kit around your clans' territory! how do they react?
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End Date: January 1st, 11:59pm EST.

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    Username: ienrir
    Cat Name: mirepaw (mirestride)
    Clan: cryptclan
    Rank: apprentice

    Gender: female
    Age: 7 moons
    Description: Brown color point with a white chest and blue eyes.

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    Siblings: None Living

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Re: Rise | #2812

Postby Trickz » Mon Dec 30, 2019 1:55 am

Username: ThunderCry04
Cat Name: Smokepaw (Smokeberry)
Clan: RuinClan
Rank: Apprentice

Gender: Male
Age: 9 Moons

Prompt: (364 Words)
Clouds filled the sky, light and puffy. It was a wonderful day, the Spring air making the grass in the meadow sing and the river hum its bubbly tune, filling Smokepaw's ears with a lovely sound of natural harmony. Nothing was wrong with today, it was perfect. Bees were buzzing, collecting nectar from the wildflowers that speckled the plain, and prey was running wild. It was the perfect season.

At least, that's what Smokepaw thought until he saw a human and his kid, fishing at the river's edge. Humans were a common sight for RuinClan, living so close to a human village, but nobody really liked seeing them this close to the camp. Frustration and fear flared through Smokepaw's senses and he scooted closer, wanting to keep a close eye on the human and its kit incase they ventured in the direction of RuinClan's camp.

Smokepaw didn't realize how close he got, however, and was shocked when another human kit he didn't even see scooped him up, yelping in satisfaction. Terror filled Smokepaw and he lashed and thrived, trying to get free, but the girl held on fast, eventually holding his scruff and he lost control of his body, falling still, fear still making his heart race.

The boy and his father came rushing over, exclaiming in shock and fear, and the grown human yelled at the female kit. Tears welled in her eyes as she tugged Smokepaw close in a hug, loosening her grip on his scruff, and seeing his chance, he lashed out with teeth and claws. He snagged the soft flesh on her cheek, drawing flood, and she screamed in pain, dropping him hard. He was winded for a few minutes but the yelling of the man arose him and he got to his paws, racing away with blurry eyes, stumbling every few steps as he regained his breath.

The man stopped following once they neared the woods, but Smokepaw didn't want to risk leading him to the clan's camp, just in case they were still watching him from somewhere in the shadows. He went hunting near Saber's Peak, uneasiness still flooding his body at the experience he had just had.
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Re: Rise | #2812

Postby .sins. » Mon Dec 30, 2019 3:31 am

Username: .sins.
Cat Name: Featherpaw
Clan: Strawberryclan
Rank: Learner

Gender: male
Age: 6 moons

Prompt:
      Featherkit whimpered shyly as his nose was pointed towards his father’s chest. The white patch against the pitch black of the rest of his coat. The crunch of snow beneath his father’s paws not indicating where they could be heading.
      β€œRemember to use your nose. Once you smell a clan cat, follow it, trust in your own steps and nose,” his fathers words rang out to him, his mother having stayed back in the camp, not able to take another learner. He mewled in cold, only to feel his fathers warm breath pass over his scruff.
      Dropped in the snow his father flicked his tail tip. β€œI will be watching over you tonight,” a nod of his head, the small kit turned around, jaws open for a scent.

      Maybe he had been following a different scent after crossing a path, but the kit trudged along, pausing as the high pitched squeals passed over his ears. Something splattered in front of him, causing him to flatten himself to the white before him. β€˜Twolegs!’ he mewed to himself, hearing his father behind him trying to get him to walk away. His kit curiosity made him stay, watching as their fat paws grabbed at snow and attempted to toss it at the others it was with. Not even noticing the two dark cats in the snow, their energy just like kits in the nursery. Heading his father’s words finally, he turned around and back towards his father, who pointed him in the direction of the camp again, resuming his challenge to find a mentor.
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Re: Rise | #2812

Postby CloudDraws16 » Mon Dec 30, 2019 5:14 am

Username: CloudDraws16
Cat Name: Smokepaw (-haze)
Clan: RoseClan
Rank: Apprentice

Gender: Male
Age: 6 moons

Prompt:
Smokepaw had just become an apprentice under their leader, Hazelstar. He favored the small tom, whom was found as an abandoned kit at only 3 moons. With Hazelstar as his mentor, he figured that with hard work and determination, the apprentice would become relatively popular among the clan.

The brown tom approached his mentor. "Hazelstar," He asked. "can I go out into the forest, alone?" Hazelstar stared, somewhat astonished by his request. "No. You are still so young, sending you out would be a risk." Bowing his head, Smokepaw started to leave. "Don't try to get ahead of yourself!" His mentor added.

However, instead of following his mentor's instructions, Smokepaw left camp. It wasn't to hard, with it being a rainy day and most of the warriors staying in camp. The tom decided to hunt, catching only a rain-drowned shrew before coming close to the river. It was slightly flooded, but was still manageable to get across using the bridge. Picking up his prey, he started towards it, startled to find a small kitty-pet dozing.

"In this weather? You must be crazy." He muttered to himself. The kitty-pet awoke, eyes wide with fear at seeing another cat watching him. "You must be one of those warriors! I'm so so sorry! Please let me leave with my life! I didn't mean any harm!"

Smokepaw thought, with a slight grin, how easily this cat was fooled. "You dare sleep in RoseClan territory! You may leave with your life, if you wish, but not without a scar to remember me." At that, he lunged. The kitty-pet raced from the river, slipping on the wet grass. Smokepaw wasn't very skilled at fighting yet, only knowing one move. However, the fright had been enough for the small cat to fall into the river, drowning.

"Oh StarClan, what have I done! I just wanted to prove myself. No, no, no! Hazelstar will be so disappointed when he hear's about this.."
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Re: Rise | #2812

Postby jay. » Mon Dec 30, 2019 5:19 am

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Re: Rise | #2812

Postby Zephara » Mon Dec 30, 2019 8:56 am

Res...
Feel free to send over a pm or trade, I’m interested in anything that’s on my wl. I also sporadically participate in user-made adoption centers.
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Re: Rise | #2812

Postby Dragonheart48 » Tue Dec 31, 2019 1:22 am

Username: Dragonheart48
Cat Name: Wolfheart
Clan: Shatteredclan
Rank: Deputy

Gender: Mtf Trans
Age: 8 Moons

Prompt:
Wolfpaw leaped through the woods laughing when her thunderous paw steps sent leaves flying up in great bunches. Her mentor, Flamestep, yowled for her to stay with him on patrol but the young cat was lost to her euphoria. She was supposed to be practicing for her hunting exam but the she-cat had little care about the results anyways. Her goal was to be a fighter and then from there work her way up to being a sentinel one of her clan's great protectors, so using her hunting practice as a time to relax a little wasn't a hard decision to make. Her climb would only be that much harder if she was selected for the hunters her battle training would be put on hold and she'd accomplish her dreams.

It turns out a young she-cat lost in her own head about her dreams for the future breeds the perfect recipe for a never before seen threat getting a hold of her. The creature struck like nothing she'd been taught to predict tearing her off the ground by the scruff of her neck and spinning her around to disorient her. The two-legged monster was making some garbled screaming noise while it started running her body swinging weightlessly in its grasp. Wolfpaw couldn't bring herself to move frozen in fear and unsure of how to counter this unfamiliar creature with a strength she could barely begin to believe.

Her fur was standing on end and her paws were shaking as the grip of the creature tightened and she was swung around violently to be faced with an even larger one of these monsters. The young apprentice had no idea what the creature before her was, her mentor, her clan, even her fearless powerful leader had never said anything about the ones who walked on two legs. She couldn't think or breathe when one of its strange limbs was reaching towards her these long thin things curling towards her like claws coming closer and closer towards her face.

She steeled her resolve, unsheathing her claws and baring her teeth with the mightiest growl she could muster swinging a powerful swipe at the outstretched hand. The creature pulled itself back a loud noise echoing out of it and the one holding her suddenly let go sending her crashing to the floor. She yowled in pain curling into a ball instinctively to protect herself while her mind was screaming desperately at her legs to start moving. The bigger one let out an angry roar as it swung one of its powerful legs at the apprentice and something finally clicked her body rocketing forwards. She ran into the forest as fast as her short legs could carry her taking a long path back to her home to stop any of the creatures from following her home. Her mentor was livid, yelling at her for running off without telling anyone where she was going but at least her clan was safe from those monsters.

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Re: Rise | #2812

Postby ienrir » Tue Dec 31, 2019 8:25 am

Username: ienrir
Cat Name: mirepaw (mirestride)
Clan: cryptclan
Rank: apprentice

Gender: female
Age: 7 moons

Prompt:

"Hey kitty, hey come here kitty."


The pale cat slinked from the shadows, each paw-step more hesitant than the last. The gentle cooing stirred up memories she'd left buried; brief flashes of warm nights in her two-leg's nest, days spent curled by her human's feet. She could remember so clearly, how her elderly human had called her just as softly, just as sweet. Saved her from the cold claws of death, their skinny fingers kneading her fur with practiced ease. The image pulled at her heart, a dull ache she'd thought was long forgotten. Her paws seemed to carry her forward; a passenger to her heart's desires. She was a warrior, a wild cat... and still some part of her longed for the life she'd left behind.

The two-leg kit held out a paw, beckoning, and it took everything in her not to press her flank against it in a familiar caress. Like a kittypet. The shame raised her hackles and she hissed at the two-leg kit in punishment. They had no right to be here. No right make their gentle 'tsk tsk's as though they were her human. Her human had passed away rocking gently, like a river current. She'd lay in their lap until the swaying slowly creaked to a stop. Strangers had pried her from them when the sun rose.

Her eyes narrowed as he held food out with a tentative paw, an offering of peace, friendship. That wasn't enough to tame her rising hackles. She had lost his closest kin, but the clan were her family now. The brush of their pelts against her own, the rasp of their tongues cleaning her matted pelt; they brought her the comfort she'd been starved for. She owed them everything. She wouldn't risk this two-leg kit taking it all away with one fell swoop of their arms. She wasn't a kittypet anymore. At least that's what she told herself as the kit's hand found it's way between her ears; the caress stirring feelings of warmth she'd tried to hide away. Just a moment more. She pleaded with herself, allowing the two-legs fingers to scratch behind her ears just a moment longer... before she tore away and darted back to the safety of the undergrowth.
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Re: Rise | #2812

Postby Goner. » Fri Jan 03, 2020 9:38 am

congrats! the story you wrote made me tear up, it was so sweet~

ienrir wrote:Username: ienrir
Cat Name: mirepaw (mirestride)
Clan: cryptclan
Rank: apprentice

Gender: female
Age: 7 moons

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