Re: Rise | #1875

Postby ataraxic_gone » Tue May 28, 2019 7:39 am

    Username;; dewly_noted
    Cat Name;; Breezy Willow [formerly falcon]
    Gender;; male
    Age;; 31 moons
    Clan;; BeachClan to be fallen
    Rank;; wave runner to be ranger

    Prompt;;
    His mother had named him Falcon. He had loved that name, it had meant the world to him. It was who he was, he was Falcon. It was the very nature of his being. He loved heights, he loved hunting, he was who his name suggested. A falcon. Tribe born he knew that when the time came for his graduation the ancestors would don upon him a new name.

    He had been out on the territory, roaming, searching, trying to find that special sign as he was taught he should when the image of a willow tree caught his full attention. It's leaves whispered through the breeze and in his ears he heard his new name 'breezy willow,' He hated it. Absolutely loathed it. So when he returned to camp and it was asked of him what the ancestors had given him as name he bent the truth. 'breezy falcon'.

    The deception lasted about as long as you would have expected. The prophets called him out on his lies in less than an hour and made a revised announcement. He was Breezy Willow and the clan was to call him such. The fear his friends had for the ancestors far out weighed his discomfort with the name Breezy Willow. So despite his protest he continued to be called Breezy Willow, or Willow for short. He will carry this anger with him to the day he dies.

    The fact that the ancestors, dead people, get to mess up your name? It will always be his biggest problem with his tribe. [259/500]
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Re: Rise | #1875

Postby Wet Bread » Tue May 28, 2019 2:46 pm

Username;; Wet Bread
Cat Name;; Clamglow
Gender;; she-cat
Age;; 51 moons
Clan;; Brightclan
Rank;; warrior

Prompt;;
Clamglow's biggest issue with Brightclan is how disorganized they are. There are so many clashing personalities in the current Brightclan that she witnesses a lot of stupid fights between clanmates. Silverpeak gets mad that Skimmerwing doesn't hunt by the, 'official Brightclan developed techniques', Skimmerwing gets mad that Silverpeak expects everyone to be as serious as he is. Vervainstrike gets mad at literally everyone for everything, and Duststar has to step in to resolve these conflicts. Despite this, Duststar does nothing to get the cats to behave in a more organized and cohesive manner. It drives Clamglow crazy but Duststar just says, "I didn't create Brightclan to stifle cats from being who they are." And shrugs it off. Clamglow is a cat who lives for a routine so she goes about her daily activities and distracts herself from how messy and unreasonable her new clan is.

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Re: Rise | #1875

Postby SurgeFire » Tue May 28, 2019 9:54 pm

closed
adieu, adios! :^)
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Re: Rise | #1875

Postby SurgeFire » Wed May 29, 2019 2:12 pm

dolly wrote:Username;; dolly
Cat Name;; goosestream
Gender;; female
Age;; 43 moons
Clan;; jayclan
Rank;; warrior

Prompt;; what does jayclan do right? that would be the better question. she has the realization as she watches the third cat this moon limp towards the medicine den. she's used to the brutality, she's known nothing different, but that doesn't make it sit well. it's times like these she has to ask why?
why do they follow traditions like these? do they actually help anyone or is it just a never ending circle of violence? she could never voice it, but the seeds are planted in her mind. there is a problem within jayclan.


congrats!
i loved how you wrote it. ^^
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