[ienrir]

Username: ienrir
Cat Name: nightstalker
Clan: cryptclan
Rank: keeper

Gender: male
Age: 40 moons

Prompt:

Against the black of night, five silhouettes carved a steep path through the mountains; cracked paws leaving bloody trails against the rock face. The only sounds were ragged breaths, and the occasional whimper slipping from worn lungs.

Kittypets. Nightstalker thought disdainfully. They should have stayed in their comfy two-leg nest. Despite his scaving resentment, he couldn't help the sympathetic ache that pulled at his chest. This trek was hard even on his wild-worn paws. These cats he sworn to guide didn't have half his strength. Resolve coursed through his body and mind; the only thing that had kept him alive all these moons.

The smallest cat of the party, began to fall behind, his shaking legs pawing feebly at the mountainside as they climbed. After a few more pawsteps, the cat collapsed against the rocks. Nightstalker hissed in annoyance.

"Keep going," He called across the the others. "If we stop, we're as good as prey. Everyone keep going." With a huff, he dropped further behind the group grabbing the fallen cat by the scruff. He'd have to be strong enough for the lot of them.

[Miavinn]

closed for judging.

congrats to fish out of water on your new cat!
i really loved how the prompt was structured.
the name seemed fitting too.



[size=85]Username: fish out of water

Cat Name: heronburr

Clan: swardclan

Rank: warrior

Gender: male

Age: 21 moons

Prompt:

“What’s your greatest asset, Burr?”

Heronburr slowed his steps, trampling dry grass under his paws as he fell back in line with Cinderstar. “What do you mean?” he asked, turning to glance over her features. She walked in a swift pace, fur rippling in the short gusts of wind.

“I’m looking for a deputy.” Cinderstar responded. “So, what do you think is your best asset?”

After a moment of hesitation, Burr nodded. “My charisma. I’ve always been good at talking to others- clan-members, Mavis-star. They listen to me… and I’ve always been proud of that.” He responded. “They’ve told me I’m a natural born leader- Thorn and Rowan, I mean. They say I’m persuasive.”

Cinderstar nodded. “The clan loves you. They’re all drawn to you in a way I can’t quite put my paw on. You’re young, but you’ve got spirit.” She agreed. “I think if I didn’t know any better you’re almost-”

“Alluring?”

“Lucky.” Cinderstar chuckled. “I’ve seen you get out of night watch one too many times.” She sighed. “You’ll make a great deputy one day, kid.”

[180/200]

[happysparrow]

Congratulations!!!!!!!! <33

[fish out of water]

Thank you!! I love him so very much already <33
so excited to have won my first rise! thank you, Bim and thank you for the congrats, happysparrow!