Re: Rise | #1714

Postby ataraxic_gone » Thu May 09, 2019 1:29 pm

    Username;; dewly_noted
    Cat Name;; JuniperPaw
    Gender;; male
    Age;; 6 moons
    Clan;; BeachClan
    Rank;; trainee

    Prompt;;
    Just off of the tide pools, settled somewhere between the surge channel and the long stretch of open beach lies a particular spot with a particular sight. In this special place you can lower your eyes to the water and if you hold still and quiet you will see something magic. The water's seem completely still but the longer you wait the more the ocean comes alive. Small flickers of life light up the ocean water and soon a show is performed for the eyes of the patient.

    The first, most bold sea creatures were the small tiny fish, too greedy and willing to step into the light in order to pluck plant growth from the side of rocks. They were mostly insignificant, silver in colour, almost transparent in some places. Baby fish getting by on looking nonthreatening and boring. Their movements were speedy and they interacted with each element of their home like it was a bomb that they were constantly trying to defuse.

    Then came the more flashy fish, larger than the tiny fish with colours that shined bright and true, much like the small shifting forms of starfish, crawling along the floor, movements slow and precise, just like the hunting crouch the land hunters use. If you waited long enough, if you were patient, you could watch them travel away into the deeper waters never to be seen again.
    Sea sponges and sea urchins moved much like the star fish, gentle and slow, beauty to the patient eyes.

    Juniper has been sneaking out to this place every day for months, it's special only for his eyes, after all no-one else has the patience to wait and watch to see the beauty that is hidden in every inch of the world they live in. Juniper has always been patient. [301/500]
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Re: Rise | #1714

Postby Ravendarus » Thu May 09, 2019 2:04 pm

Username: Ravendarus
Name: Skypaw (Skyleaper)
Gender: Tom
Clan: Echoclan
Age: 8 moons
Rank: Apprentice

Prompt:
Skypaw sneaks out of camp all the time to head over to the hunters grotto where the tallest trees are in the territory. He has a secret place where he goes everyday to practice his jumping, he is getting better and better everyday though he often gets hurt. The trees were thick and the small area was hidden from view, he would always slip into the river to hide his scent so others won't find him. Today was the day... he was going to do it... he was going to fly. He looked up the branch of his favourite tree, an old oak tree that still stood tall with pride, he climbed up and gazed around his kingdom, the trees were close enough together that he could crawl around the branches and sneak through the forest if he really wanted to. The branches were thick enough that he could lay down without worrying about falling, and the center of the tree had a nice groove in it that he could make a small nest in and keep secret things in. Cool rocks and feathers, neat looking flowers and leaves. He even comes there to eat prey in secret. His precious secret home away from home, his clan doesn't really understand him much so he doesn't mind getting away.

He sighed happily and walked along the branches softly and purred gently, as he sprawled out over the branches and licked his paw, he looked around knowing he would have to return again before his mentor would want to take him out again for a patrol or training. So he got up and ran across the branches, he would do it today, he would fly! He yowled out happily as he flew off the branch once he pushed off however he didn't get far, he fell to the ground in a bush he yelped surprised and hissed softly as he got up and shook off the leaves and sighed, "Okay not today..." He said, and looked around, the bushes, soft grass and flowers around the area that kept him sheltered were the only things keeping him from hurting himself to much. This small little grotto in the forest that he loved to come to everyday, was his secret and no one else knew about it and he wanted to keep it that way. A secret for only him to enjoy as he slipped out of the bushes and through the river waiting on the other side before he headed back through the forest back to Echoclan camp, Softfeather purred, "There you are! Ready to go?" She asked and blinked, "You are soaking wet... did you leave camp again?" She asked, "Yea just outside at the stream, I wanted to get a drink." He purred happily. "Alright let's get started on patrol then we can train." She said softly. He smiled and ran after her eagerly ready to start his day.

Extra:
Skypaw is the strangest cat you will ever meet, he's a dreamer, has a one-track mind, and can't pay attention to anything without spacing out in a daydream about his goal in life, a fantasy world of his own creation. Skypaw knows he is a cat, he loves his clan, he's amazingly loyal and will defend his clan at all costs, but there is a different part of him as well. Skypaw believes he was meant to be a bird, he loves the sky and finds in the most awesome thing in the world, he is completely obsessed with it, he is always trying to find ways to fly, jumping from trees only to fall and land on his paws, he never gets hurt expect for minor sprains and twists but other then that he is fine. He loves watching birds fly and wishes to join them, he wants to fly so badly and kiss the ground goodbye and soar above the clouds higher then any bird, and will often dream of flight and racing the wind. Skypaw has devoted his whole life to pursuing his impossible dream, he will never give up on it and will push to reach his goal. Oddly enough Skypaw knows 'how to speak to the birds' around him and will often chirp randomly at times though he knows no other cat can understand him, and because of his belief he refuses to eat bird, truthfully he can't speak bird.
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Re: Rise | #1714

Postby Goner. » Thu May 09, 2019 9:59 pm

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Re: Rise | #1714

Postby Goner. » Thu May 09, 2019 10:42 pm

Congrats Kazin with Hickorypaw!
Your story was so heartwarming to me and beautifully written, as well. Fireflies have a special place in my heart for personal reasons and because of this, I gotta give this little baby to you! Congrats again!

Kazin wrote:
    Username: Kazin
    Name: Hickorypaw
    Gender: tom
    Clan: Zephyrclan
    Age: 6 moons
    Rank: apprentice

    Prompt: A small heart thudding in a chest. Wide eyes, careful that he wasn't going to be seen. The thrill of sneaking out, the possibility that he would get caught... It was always nerve-wracking for the young cat. Nonetheless, he would always sneak out. The thought of what he was about to see was too great not to.

    Slinking around the camp, sticking to the shadows and darting between dens, Hickorypaw was out of the camp in a flash. He had practiced a lot at this, always thinking about the best ways to get out of camp if he needed to. Escape plans were his favorite, and strategy was definitely his strong suit.

    The forest air was warm, and Hickorypaw allowed himself to stop and scent the air. The smell of the dirt, the recent rain, and the faint smell of cats that were now sleeping in the clan's camp were all drifting in Hickorypaw's senses. It was a beautiful night, and there should be a magnificent sight waiting for him.

    Hickorypaw picked up his pace, running silently through the woods to reach his favorite spot. It was simple, and many cats had seen it in the daylight. An open field, unremarkable in the sun; most cats ignored the presence of this open space, preferring to keep to the canopy of trees. But Hickorypaw knew better. He knew the sight that he would get rewarded with. The small cat sat down just on the edge of the forest, his ears alert and his eyes wide with excitement as he waited. It didn't take long for him to get what he came for, and he smiled to himself.

    The faint glow of a firefly blinked once a short distance from where the apprentice sat. The first of many. Another answered the blink with one of their own, and soon the entire field was alight with the soft glow and blinks of the fireflies. This is what Hickorypaw had been waiting for, and this is what he would gladly sneak out of camp for every single night.

    Extra: The first time Hickorypaw had seen the firefly meadow, as he called it, he was still a kit. He had slipped away from his brothers, sisters, and his mother, fed up with their constant bickering and fighting about where they should sleep, where they should settle. It wasn't the life that he wanted to live. He left them as dusk fell on a warm Greenleaf day, the light fading slowly as he put the sounds of their arguing behind him. He found himself wandering nearly all night, until the moon was starting to fall and dawn was going to threaten the horizon at any moment. His feet were tired, and he was dragging, but he didn't feel like he should stop. He felt there was something that was waiting for him if he could just keep going.

    He was rewarded with the fireflies, and he knew that he had to settle in this area. Hickorypaw feels at home with Zephyrclan, more than he ever did with his family, and it is the fireflies that made it so.
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Re: Rise | #1714

Postby Kazin » Fri May 10, 2019 4:25 am

Thank you so much! I adore fireflies as well, for so many reasons <3 Hickorypaw and his fireflies will be well taken care of!
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