[fallenfishy]

Trying to break the blue fairy flit chain!

This flit is looking pretty tattered..
I wonder what happened to them? Maybe you know?

You maybe interpret and answer this prompt any way you want!

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Username:
Name:
What happened to them?:

Edits: tail, face flowers, wings

End date is April 30th

[envious.]

Username: HailHydra
Name: Muriel
What happened to them?:

Bury me
Bury me,
I dare you.
Throw me down, cover me with dirt, stamp on my grave.
Bury me,
I dare you.
Let me drown beneath your feet.
----
Bury me
and I will grow
a seed watered with tears and hurt

Bury me,
and I will grow
crawling back to the surface
my muscles turned to bark
my weakness turned to stone.
Bury me,and I will grow
into your worst nightmare
----

(Muriel was stepped on and used, and now they strive to become their worst nightmare)

[SkyGold]

Username: SkyGold
Name: Merideth
What happened to them?:

“I - I don’t remember.” She stuttered, flinching as the lights overhead flickered. Thunder soon crackled.
“I see.” The large Flitz paused, chewing on a pen with oversized canines. “I recommend our recalling treatment. It will give me more information.” She perked her ears, thin wings shivering.
“I’ll do it.” She hastily agreed, pulling the pen from his mouth, searching for a paper to sign.
“Woah woah woah! I haven’t given you the drawback details.” He grabbed her face, stopping her rapid movements. “You will know what happened. You won’t be able to forget.”
“I won’t give up on this. I want to know.”
“Oh darling.” Picking up a bottle with a shimmering liquid inside, the large Flitz shook his head. “You have no idea what you are getting into.”
A single drop upon her tongue and she was gone.


A tear.
A sky full of tears.
Rain.
A garden of sun sets.
Fire. Roses. Vines. Thorns.
A cage of rusted metal.
Dried and dead stems of ghostly bushes forming a box.
Endless loops and mazes. Endless streams of tears. Endless flickering, dancing flames.
Her shield.
Her barrier.
Her prison.
Running on feet too slick to stand. Jumping on sodden dirt and sand.

No.

Escape.





But.


Light pain memory peace sadness rejoice cheer cry celebrate danger death.

Held in arms. Held to chest. Whispered to complete my rest.


I’m...dead.

Merideth jolted to her feet, her legs shaking immensely as she tried to remove the renewed memory. “I - I’m dead.” She whispered, dumbstruck. The large Flitz nodded, putting down the notepad and pen.
“Welcome to my world.”

[Ringo.]

Username: Ringo.
Name: Lilac
What happened to them?:

As you leave me in the dirt
With the shattered pieces of my heart.
You left me there all by myself
Thinking only about yourself.

I sat there dumbfounded
Trying to gather my thoughts.
It broke me and tore me
Until there was no way to hurt me.

Sitting there in the dirt
picking up pieces of my heart
You left me there all by myself
Mending all the pieces together alone.

My flowers began to fade
Turn a nasty brown
I was afraid
I would have to leave town

Torn and shattered
In the dirt
All by myself
Mending a broken heart.

[♡Mewlin♡]

Username: Mewlin
Name: Cayne
What happened to them?:

His world.
His perfect world.
Where no one could touch him,
and he'd live on forever.
A world most strive to be in,
but to most are unobtainable.
His world.
It came crumbling down.
Crashing.
With a wall of flames,
and a veil of haze.
It overtook his body.
Eating him from the inside out.
And preventing him from ever leaving.
Stuck now in a fiery world,
surrounded by the flames he failed to put out.
He will never leave.

(Something major happened in his life, and he was riddled with rage and blinded by fury. Unable to vent his frustrations, he took it out on himself, and paid the price for letting his anger get to him.)

[SunnyStreets]

Username: Ravenwhisper's wish
Name: twist
What happened to them?:
couldn't help it-
it was all over-
The tree was falling-

The life was gone.
Slowly c r u m b l i n g

and my tree had fallen.
torn a wing
twisted a leg
crushed. crumpled. broken.

It was a beautiful tree
a kind and gentle tree
a warm and welcoming
it turned it's back on me

it's safety was gone
I was thrust to the open
revealed to the world
wish I was hidden
I turned my back on it

[fallenfishy]

Sorry for ending this late, but it has ended now! I was swamped with finals this week.
I will judge this and announce the winner ASAP.
Any edits or new forms made after this post are not going to be judged.

[fallenfishy]

Alrighty I have judged this!
First off I’d like to award 1 FB to Ravenwhisper’s Wish. I really enjoyed the poem you wrote!
However the winner of this flit is SkyGold! Out of the ideas I had imagined for this flit, being dead was not one of them, however I found the idea very intriguing and the way you wrote it drew me in. I’m a sucker for stories with surprise endings. I can’t wait to see what you do with Meredith!

Thank you to everyone who entered! Even if you didn’t win anything, I enjoyed all of your writings <3! I wish you al luck in future competitions!