Sorry for the delay! These three contests were tough to judge, and I haven't had much time/ability to concentrate and give you guys the level-headed judging you all deserve. <3
Congrats! I'll update everything up front shortly. That first line was what really won me over, in the end. xD
SurgeFire wrote:Username;; SurgeFire
Cat Name;; Burnetfur
Gender;; Female
Age;; 21 Moons
Clan;; AsterClanRank;; Warrior
Prompt;;Hey! I wouldn't say I'm prone to getting lost, but it's a big world out here, and...
Though, one time as an apprentice, I did venture a little too far...
"I think... I'm lost." I muttered to myself, paws trembling from exhaustion. To be honest, the patrol was boring, and I couldn't handle myself! I got distracted, chased a butterfly, and... I couldn't find the others anywhere.
Just look for a dark fluffball... Rainfang has to be somewhere, it's not that hard. I trudged through the woods, but everything seemed so unfamiliar. I think I've gone over our marking lines. This isn't good!
It was getting late and cold, and still no sign of any familiar cats. I suppose it's time to find a place to rest.... am I really that far?
"Kitty. Where are you going?" Oh no. Another cat, perched on a tree... Their tail twitched in amusement. "A little too far from home, are you?"
"I'm not... far from home! This is my territory!" I arched my back and hissed at the other cat - although slightly afraid of him.
"I've been here for many moons - and I must say, you are quite far. I know a Clan cat when I see one. Hey. Call me Dezz. I'm not here to get you lost, you hear? I'll get you back." though he purred, and added, "I never thought a day would come where I'd help a Clan cat go back to their own Clan... Haha."
"Hey! You're just assuming things! I know where to go - I don't need a rouge's help!" I retorted, stepping back.
"Hey, okay. You don't want my help? That's okay. I'll just leave you here." he curled back on the branch, peering down at Burnetpaw. "I'm waiting for you, kitty."
"I- uh-" I blinked, knowing that I couldn't win - I'd get lost again. But I couldn't let this 'Dezz' win! "Yeah! I don't need some stranger's help."
"...so. About that help?" It was dead of night, and Burnetpaw was dead tired. I had collapsed on the ground - afraid that I was farther then before.
"Urrrgh. Don't get me lost, Dezz." I said apprehensively. "You haven't won! I've just never been here!"
"Of course."
We traveled through the forest - the loner was much... kinder than I expected. He didn't rub it in my face - too much. Though he seemed to relish the fact that he was helping a Clan cat. Soon, I found myself back in my own territory - I never quite relished the scent of AsterClan until now.
"I suppose we're parting?" I called back to him. "You know, maybe one day I'll help you!"
"Maybe." he looked back curiously. "Though I do know more than you may think."
Curious. What a mysterious cat.[460/500]
I hope you don't mind the references ovnwrnio I just found it humorous you actually lost the cat and I got... inspiredSorry if there's any surprise third-person I lost track at the end and edited most of them out