Re: Feather Boa #9 (CLOSED FOR JUDGING)

Postby KarKat Vantas ♋ » Thu Nov 01, 2018 12:07 pm

This is closed!!! ;v;-b
Please don't edit your forms!
I'll judge this as soon as I can!
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Re: Feather Boa #9

Postby Vexious » Sat Nov 03, 2018 11:00 am

wish you guys luck
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Re: Feather Boa #9 (WINNER)

Postby KarKat Vantas ♋ » Sun Nov 04, 2018 8:00 am

ALRIGHTY!!!

After rereading all of the forms numerous times over, I've finally come to a conclusion of who's form I found the most spooky and connectable for me:

Evils!

I found the scenario of Prometheus to be very entertaining and it really kept me interested. It was poetic and deep in the sense that the things happening to and around him meant more than what they did on the surface, and that's what really made the unsettling atmosphere stick!

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As for SoftKitten and Feather Jam:

SoftKitten, I had a hard time connecting to the character and spook factor that you were trying to portray in your form, because you used the reader (who was me, since I was reading it at the time) as the character interacting with Ryker. The problem I have with putting the reader as a character in a story is that I don't know if I'd act the same way as being portrayed. I'm sorry!

Feather Jam, I got a bit lost with your story, actually? My brain couldn't understand whether or not Ofn was the Boa of Bones and Branches, or if those eyes were, or if the eyes were Ofn? I would have liked to see some more development into the story, as I did find the concept of the eyes to be interesting.

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Thank you all for participating!! ;v;-b
I wish you all the best of luck in future competitions!!
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Re: Feather Boa #9

Postby Vexious » Sun Nov 04, 2018 8:04 am

congrats <3
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Re: Feather Boa #9

Postby Evils » Sun Nov 04, 2018 9:15 am

AAAA! owo
Thank you so much, I am so glad you liked my story!
I tried going for a more poetic stance and I'm glad it came across <3
I can't wait to further develop Prometheus, aaaAHHH!! I'm SO EXCITED! :W:<333
May I please be added? QWQ-b
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