Re: Rise | #0700

Postby Desmond » Wed Jun 06, 2018 8:21 am

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Cat Name;; O'o-Maka [Bird-Eye]

Gender;; Female

Age;; 32 moons

Clan;; PikakeClan

Rank;; Warrior

Eye Colour;; O'o is bi-eyed. The eye touched by the black base is the color of the sun shining through dark, rich blueberry honey - a smokey dark amber-orange-brown that recalls the sweet scent of harvest and festivities in the autumn air. The eye surrounded by the amber cream is a lighter, slightly sunnier shade of bright yellow - one that echoes the blooming life of spring, as well as the staring, clever eyes of the intelligent crow.

Scars;; O'o's single scar crosses diagonally over her right eye, outward from her nose - it breaks in the middle over her (thankfully unharmed) eye.

How did they get the scars;; The scar was received after a battle with an angry feral goat that crossed paths with her while wandering the western side of Kaua'i, on a journey she was sent on by Alala-Hoku. The sharp horns slashed at her face in the middle of a would-be-devastating head thrash that left the animal's neck vulnerable to her attack; while she earned a single scar, the goat's wounds were far more serious.

Extras;;
Originally from a farm on the island of Kaua'i, O'o knows her way around mankind's buffoonery, and she has gotten a sense for when the mice are plentiful or sparse in the fields, and when the machines - be they for planting, irrigation, or harvesting - start up. This doesn't really help her on the island that PikakeClan has set up, but it does help her have a closer eye on the change of the seasons - when to watch for foul weather, when prey is overabundant, and when it's time to watch out for falling coconuts from the fruitful trees. She has a seemingly paranormal sense when it comes to such things, which is an absolute boon for such a small, exposed clan.

Though she seems somewhat paranoid at times, her gift of timing and sensitivity to the changes in the weather usually lend to a feel of mystique and magic to her presence. This is only amplified by her soft, nearly hollow voice, unnervingly staring gaze, and generally quiet demeanor. These qualities do make for some fantastic storytelling, though, and she is still a formidable opponent when she is riled into battle. She finds no joy in fighting, preferring to only do so in short, quick bursts as necessary, but she falters to opponents with endurance, and enough mettle to withstand or avoid her initial - and typically final - furious whallops.

O'o also holds a precious, dear secret close to her heart. Squirreled away in the island's thick jungle, near the great metal beast of the island, she has helped a little feathered friend build a nest. A member of a species that is considered by mankind to be extinct, 'Ike followed O'o to the island when she joined the clan, and settled where the pair could stay close. She ensures that he will not be bothered by the hunting parties, and he gives her much-needed company when the other cats just can't take her strange nature. He is also the source of many of the island's strangest noises - his call is like a disjointed, sad flute, and when it echoes against the rusting metal hull of the ship's carcass, the clan sees it as a worrisome sign from the dead or the deity that they believe protects the island.

Only... O'o knows better. And her calm reaction only makes her all the more special, in the eyes of the Clan.
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Re: Rise | #0700

Postby Nero The Corgi King » Thu Jun 07, 2018 2:17 am

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Re: Rise | #0700

Postby spirittai1 » Thu Jun 07, 2018 3:41 pm

    forgot about this oops
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Re: Rise | #0700

Postby Sunnyside » Fri Jun 08, 2018 7:41 am

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Username;; Sunnyside
Cat Name;; Deadshadow
Gender;; tom
Age;; 20 moons
Clan;; Cliffclan
Rank;; warrior
Eye Colour;; A deep
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Scars;; Two small scars and one medium; a small one on the inside of the right foreleg, a nick in his left ear, and medium sized scar on his back.


Tʜᴇ Sᴄᴀʀs;;
Deadshadow was born into a clan of ruthless, coldhearted cats; Stormclan. At his birth, his mother immediately recognized something was different about this kit, something unnatural. Terrified about what this dark omen could mean for the clan, the queen immediately disowned him, but not before dubbing him Deadkit. The queen was on her way to abandon the kit to die, when one of the higher ups in the clan, Darkivy, intercepted her. Upon seeing the kit, Darkivy was immediately intrigued. She convinced the queen to hand over the unwanted kit, and with permission of the leader, raised the kit herself in isolation from the rest of the clan.

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Deadkit's training started much earlier than most kits', even by this clan's standards. He was to be a very special warrior, and as such, his brainwashing, er, training, needed to start as soon as possible. At 2 moons old, Darkivy began filling his mind with promises of being the hero of a clan who didn't even know he existed, of having everything he could possibly want. The respect of his clanmates, who all looked at him as if he were a monster, the love of a mother who had abandoned him. That he would be the strongest cat the world had ever known; he could have it all. As long as he listened to her.

She taught him how to lie, how to manipulate and gain the trust of others. But above all else, she taught him to be loyal to her alone. Every failed lie was met with a strike across the face- he learned fast, especially after he lost a chunk of his ear to her claws.
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At 4 moons, he began his physical training. He was taught how to hunt, and protect himself like any other apprentice as Darkivy kept up his mental training. By the time he was 9 moons old, Darkivy upped the ante, and started teaching him very specialized moves- how to camouflage with the surroundings, hiding imperceptibly in the shadows, and kill moves that would chill most normal cats to the bone. But Deadpaw was no normal cat. In the last two moons of his training, Darkivy made sure he perfected his physical lies, that is how to convincingly fight poorly so outsiders wouldn't suspect his specialized training.

Finally, at 15 moons old, his training was technically complete, and he was given the name Deadshadow. He didn't get a formal ceremony like a normal clan cat; just a meeting with the high ranks of Stormclan. Something about protecting his mission... the clan couldn't know about him until after he succeeded. Darkivy instructed him to hold out his right foreleg. Once he did so, she carved a small crescent deep into the inside of his leg, permanently marking him as a special warrior of Stormclan.
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Moons passed as he waited for the mission he'd been promised; the one that, once it was complete, would allow him to finally rejoin Stormclan and be accepted. The one that would make him a hero. Until then, he was sequestered in a den, by himself, on the edge of Stormclan territory. It was a lonely existence, the only thing he looked forward to were Darkivy's daily visits to make sure his training was still sharp.

Then, finally, one day it happened; Darkivy showed up at his den, and told him to follow her. They traveled a whole day's journey, deep into unknown territory. As they travelled, Darkivy filled him in on his mission. The target was a new clan called Cliffclan; they'd heard tale of the clan from a passing rogue whom they'd intercepted crossing Stormclan territory. Deadshadow was to infiltrate their ranks, and find out all that he could about this new clan, and report his findings back to Darkivy. If all went to plan, Stormclan would take over Cliffclan using their inside cat. This is what he'd been training his entire life for.

At sundown that night, Darkivy informed him that this is where she would leave him; Cliffclan was about half a day's journey south. They would meet again at this spot in 3 moons. There was one final thing to take care of before she left.... That's when she leapt at him, claws extended. He froze, as he was trained to never attack a high rank of Stormclan, except in training sessions. Darkivy sunk her claws into his pelt, leaving him covered in scratches, one particularly deep one on his back. After a few minutes, Darkivy sat back and admired her handiwork. Deadshadow had his teeth grit in pain, though he didn't dare let out any whimpers as blood trickled down his pelt. "Now go bring glory to your clan."
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Deadshadow stumbled in the direction Darkivy had sent him, hoping he found Cliffclan quickly enough. And sure enough, just as Darkivy said, about half a day later, he crossed the scent markers into the territory he only had to assume belonged to Cliffclan. He made his way as deep into the territory as he could before he finally collapsed from the blood loss and pain.

It wasn't long after that, that a calico she-cat appeared, moving warily towards him before calling out in panic and running towards him; "Rowanflame! Come quickly! There's someone hurt over here!" Sniffing him frantically, she spoke to him "It's alright, we've got you now. You're safe with Cliffclan." Success.

He was brought back to their camp, where a cat named Mothwatcher treated his wounds. The calico, he later learned was named Buzzardcry, came to visit him regularly. She was peculiar, and insisted that he keep a bird skull by his nest- something about them warding off death? He wasn't sure. He started to get close to Buzzardcry over the weeks he spent healing, learning as much as he could about Cliffclan. When asked about his story, Deadshadow lied through his teeth and spun her a sad tale on how he'd been kicked out of every place he'd tried to call home because he was a 'monster'. Of course, she had no reason not to believe him.

Over the next few moons, Deadshadow wove himself into the fabric of Cliffclan life. He joined patrols, hunted for others, and even helped fight back a fox that got a little too close to camp for the clan's liking. Here he was welcomed and respected, despite how he looked. Daily, he had to keep reminding himself that this wasn't his real home, that these weren't his clanmates. He couldn't forget his mission; his training. But as time wore on, it became increasingly difficult, especially as he and Buzzardcry grew closer... As the three moon mark approaches, Deadshadow has to decide where his loyalties really lie. Will he be a spy, or just continue blissfully living in his lies?
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Re: Rise | #0700

Postby .Foxtrot. » Fri Jun 15, 2018 8:17 am

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Gender;; Tom
Age;; 31 moons
Clan;; Mourningclan
Rank;; Beta [Deputy]

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Re: Rise | #0700

Postby Zarouhi » Fri Jun 15, 2018 9:55 am

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Cat Name;; Twistedwhisker
Gender;; Female
Age;; 42 moons
Clan;; AshenClan
Rank;; Warrior

Eye Colour;; Twistedwhisker's eyes are a bit odd, to say the least. In our terms, she has a condition called iris melanosis, a relatively common condition in middle aged to older cats where they get dark spots in their eyes as they age. Her right eye is mostly affected by these "freckles," dotting her pale, dusty yellow eyes like mud unceremoniously splattered across her face and it was never really able to wash off. Much like this.
Scars;; Most of her scars are on her face, the poor girl. One is one that crosses the bridge of her nose diagonally and then twists down and cuts into her muzzle to the edge of her lip. The others are scattered burn speck scars that spread up across the bridge of her nose and under her right eye, much like freckles in a sense, but instead of dark, reveal the soft pink flesh underneath.
How did they get the scars;; It's not a beautiful or overwhelming story. As a younger cat, the forest she was living in caught fire in the dry season due to a lightning strike. She was running from the flames when a burning tree branch fell in front of her, digging into her face and sending flickers of flame and embers up at her. She escaped and healed, and has had the scars ever since.
Extras;; She's tall, scrawny, scruffy, and unbelievably lanky. Almost looks near malnourished, even though she assures anyone quite rudely that she's well and fine. Her face scars that extend to her muzzle have made her whiskers grow back kinked and scraggly, and are the origin of her warrior name.
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Re: Rise | #0700

Postby Guest » Tue Jun 26, 2018 6:37 am

    This contest is now closed for judging.

    Only two forms are counted as they are the only ones to follow the rules and be complete.
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Re: Rise | #0700

Postby Yuroshi » Tue Jun 26, 2018 4:23 pm

Whoa for some reason I thought this ended July first. Oh well, good luck to you guys!! I read the forms and they're awesome!
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Re: Rise | #0700

Postby Guest » Sun Jul 15, 2018 7:28 am

    I am on Mobile right now so the cat will be editted when I am on laptop.

    Firstly, thank you so much for the patience from those participating in this contest. I know I passed the results of this onto you guys a little bit ago to ease the wait, I just needed some personal time given certain circumstances.
    So now it's officially official! Congrats to Des, who gets to take the lovely 700 O'o-Maka into his clan!

    Place, hit me up off-site, I would love to offer you art if you are interested as a runner up prize. Doesn't have to be rise related c:

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Cat Name;; O'o-Maka [Bird-Eye]

Gender;; Female

Age;; 32 moons

Clan;; PikakeClan

Rank;; Warrior

Eye Colour;; O'o is bi-eyed. The eye touched by the black base is the color of the sun shining through dark, rich blueberry honey - a smokey dark amber-orange-brown that recalls the sweet scent of harvest and festivities in the autumn air. The eye surrounded by the amber cream is a lighter, slightly sunnier shade of bright yellow - one that echoes the blooming life of spring, as well as the staring, clever eyes of the intelligent crow.

Scars;; O'o's single scar crosses diagonally over her right eye, outward from her nose - it breaks in the middle over her (thankfully unharmed) eye.

How did they get the scars;; The scar was received after a battle with an angry feral goat that crossed paths with her while wandering the western side of Kaua'i, on a journey she was sent on by Alala-Hoku. The sharp horns slashed at her face in the middle of a would-be-devastating head thrash that left the animal's neck vulnerable to her attack; while she earned a single scar, the goat's wounds were far more serious.

Extras;;
Originally from a farm on the island of Kaua'i, O'o knows her way around mankind's buffoonery, and she has gotten a sense for when the mice are plentiful or sparse in the fields, and when the machines - be they for planting, irrigation, or harvesting - start up. This doesn't really help her on the island that PikakeClan has set up, but it does help her have a closer eye on the change of the seasons - when to watch for foul weather, when prey is overabundant, and when it's time to watch out for falling coconuts from the fruitful trees. She has a seemingly paranormal sense when it comes to such things, which is an absolute boon for such a small, exposed clan.

Though she seems somewhat paranoid at times, her gift of timing and sensitivity to the changes in the weather usually lend to a feel of mystique and magic to her presence. This is only amplified by her soft, nearly hollow voice, unnervingly staring gaze, and generally quiet demeanor. These qualities do make for some fantastic storytelling, though, and she is still a formidable opponent when she is riled into battle. She finds no joy in fighting, preferring to only do so in short, quick bursts as necessary, but she falters to opponents with endurance, and enough mettle to withstand or avoid her initial - and typically final - furious whallops.

O'o also holds a precious, dear secret close to her heart. Squirreled away in the island's thick jungle, near the great metal beast of the island, she has helped a little feathered friend build a nest. A member of a species that is considered by mankind to be extinct, 'Ike followed O'o to the island when she joined the clan, and settled where the pair could stay close. She ensures that he will not be bothered by the hunting parties, and he gives her much-needed company when the other cats just can't take her strange nature. He is also the source of many of the island's strangest noises - his call is like a disjointed, sad flute, and when it echoes against the rusting metal hull of the ship's carcass, the clan sees it as a worrisome sign from the dead or the deity that they believe protects the island.

Only... O'o knows better. And her calm reaction only makes her all the more special, in the eyes of the Clan.
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