[Vluwu]

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[Vluwu]

Username
▸Blukitty53◂
Name
▸Obscurity◂
Gender
▸Female◂

☠ Two large viscets stand on each side of you. a third behind you. You are being taken to that pack. You're already shaking. you've heard the tales of this one. Why were you so dumb to venture so close to the border? Who knows what they will do to you. The one to your left nudges you, "Try not to shake so much. She can already smell fear, dont encourage it." You gulp. This can not be good. as you venture closer, you can hear viscets fighting and barking at eachother. It almost sounded like a war was going on. The viscets around you laughed in pity. "Its how we train. how do you think we get so strong? In your hope, she will accept you." We reach an entrance. The two on your left disperse and the one on behind you catches up to your left and whispers "whatever you do, dont make eye contact, dont stare."

☠ You almost see plea in this viscets eyes. at the viscet turns to return to his own chores, you see a long scar from his shoulder to his ankle. You gulp again before two new viscets take you towards the center of the camp. You find dangerous eyes looking at you. some laughing at you in a way. You look up as a new shade takes over you. Its a huge curve of stone, the tip slowly curving into itself towards you. at the top sits the alpha herself. She smiles as she looks down at you. you avert your eyes, trying too keep your heart rate at bay.

☠ She raised an eyebrow, "What is this pitiful excuse of a viscet. What's he doing here in front of me?" No one spoke up. you continued to look away. "Well?" Her voice thundered. Training stopped, eyes on you. You sigh. "I'm incredibly sorry, My all vonruable and coated with embarrassment." she squinted with a smile, her horns as if moving towards you. "My dear, why may you be so afraid? would you not want to train with us? become powerful to defeat those alien viscets." I shivered. She meant the ones who wielded the elements. "I.. am too weak to join you, miss. I would do no good in your powerful pack." She laughed. "You fool. That is why we feed and train to find glory!"
Her laugh continued, as if insane. Some viscets seemed to back away slightly. You stood fridged, at loss of what to do. you almost fell over at the sudden thud in front of you. She had jumped down from the high stone. You looked up, instant regret hit you. Eyes angry and almost seeming to stream shadow. Her paw raised and she knocked you down to the dead grass and mold with unforgettable force. "Come on. Attack me!" Everyone's eyes widened. The pack had not seen this since...

☠ You hauled yourself back up, a new hindering on your side. But you had to ignore it. No way you could back out of this. You stared into her eyes, fear disappearing from you suddenly. She stared right back, before a sudden smile appeared on her face. "wow. Didn't know you had that in you." she laughed again, but throwing her head back. You were so confused. What do you do? you suddenly charge at her when she seems distracted. You bite into her arm. She instantly flips you over with her teeth to your neck and pushes you to the ground. "You really do have a death wish." she growled through your fur. "Yet, a very strong will to live... not bad." She looked up and called to be what seemed a medic. "Heal them up. tell them their new occupation and rules." She smiled at you. "Welcome. Enjoy your stay. Might as well, since you can't leave." She gave you one last look.. appearing to be a smirk, yet covered with an emotion you've never seen before. She suddenly Jumped back onto the huge pillar and climbed swiftly to the top. Sudden awe escaped you. She really was all that mighty. She looked back down at you, her eyes still steaming that sort of mist. A sudden chill went down your spine.

☠ the medic tells you to follow. This will be your new life. This.. Corrupt pack life. But, you couldn't help but admit. The idea of being more powerful than others made you smile. [720 words]

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*Fire,* Obscurity shot up and looked around the den frantically. They Left! She noticed her brother cowering in the back of the cave, his face horror-stricken. "They left us!" She hurried over to him and picked him up by the scruff. She looked around, there was no exit- except; She jumped through the flames, trying to shelter her younger brother as much as possible. It hurt, so much. She felt the heat burn her pelt, embers bit her fur like millions of fire ants. She looked around frantically, a way to get out of the burning forest. With haste she ran through a small gap, her lungs screaming for air as black smoke filled them. Her eyes widened in fear thinking she wouldn't make it. Just making her way out of the flames, she froze. They were here, looking at her with displeased looks. She didn't know what to think at first. Why didn't they tell me?! Why did they leave me, us, there?! She put her brother down and stood defensively in front of them. Obscurity's mother couldn't suppress a laugh, “What, Are you going to fight us? Too bad you woke up too soon. Now give me your brother.” She was in astonishment, “You expect me to give you a soul that you left to die?!- You left us too die!” Obscurity, Outrages, screeched loudly and leaped at her mother, tearing at her face and trying to get to her neck. Her mother was so drawn back, she was pinned easily. An earsplitting scream seemed to ager the flames even more as obscurity sank her teeth into her mother's neck. the flames danced around rapidly as if seeming not know what to do. Almost immediately her father leapt at her, sinking his own teeth into Obscurity’s back. In great pain from the new bite, she let go of her mother and turned to her father, sparring with him. Her father was forced closer and closer to the fire, Just about to burn, he reached up and drew his claws across obscuritys' face. The burning, immense pain made her fall and writhe in pain on the ash-coated ground. He laughed, his eyes seeming with triumph as he inched closer to his daughter. Just before he was about to taunt and strike, He was immediately cut from his words as a shadowy figure hit him too the ground. He wriggled around, trying to get back up, but this thing had him pinned there. Obscurity watched as flames grew closer, starting to take over her father. She looked around and over; to see her younger brother, staring at the scene in terror. Gritting her teeth she stood up through the pain and hurried over to him, picking him up as gently as she could before running away from the flames. Her fathers screams and the hungry fire was quiet to her in comparison to the whimpers of her brother.

⦓ Chapter one ⦔ - Understanding
"There, there." My eyes opened, Seeing my mother for the first time as I fell out of my egg. She smiled, her eyes glossy. "You're here. Finally here." She picked me up gently and hugged me. I didn't quite understand this emotion, but I hugged her back. A new warmth filled my heart and I squealed with joy. She pinned her ears against her head in disgust in a slight moment, eyeing the front of the cave. I looked to see a tall, dark figure standing outside holding something in his jaws. My mother put me down gently into the nest before starting to bicker. "You missed her hatching! How could you!" The newcomer growled, dropping the hare at her feet. "Sorry I was trying to hunt food for us. I won't do it anymore if you don't want me too then. Where is our daughter anyway?" My mother kept her ears pinned before stepping to the side. I felt a sudden tension in the air as he stared at me. "That cannot be it. Shes so.. weak, frail. No way that could be my daughter."

My mother barked angrily at him. "Shut up. she just hatched! Give her some time." I felt myself cower at the loud words. He laughed at me. I felt tears roll onto my cheeks. "She May-be my daughter but I shall never treat her as one. I will care for her as I love you, Lio. But this thing is a disgrace to our family line." My mother picked up the hare and walked towards me and sat down in the nest, curling her tail around me to keep me warm. "Whatever you say, Neor." she said quietly before beginning to eat the hare. I watched as Neor huffed and left the den to find more food. I began to drink my mother's milk. Still nieve, not understanding the beginning of a downward spiral my life will become.

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My ears flicked as I could hear arguing from outside, Sitting up and yawning I stretched. Its been a few months now, and mother has become more and more distant from me. I stayed quiet, trying to listen to them. But as hard as I tried, I couldn't pick up their speech from my small ears. I sighed and lay back down, looking at my paws, tired of this cave. I looked back up to the mouth of the cave. I wanted to know what was out there, in the forest. I jumped back into the wall of the cave in fear as a sudden burst of fire covered the mouth of the cave. Neor was thrown to the floor, his side now home to a large burn scar. He growled as he got back up. I could hear my mother apologizing. He pinned his ears before walking off to find more food. I ran into my nest and pretended to sleep, hoping my mother wouldn't realize. But instead of walking into the cave, I heard her walk off in an opposite direction. Soon her pawsteps faded away. I was left alone. At least, so I thought. I stood up and walked, or so crawled, to the cave entrance, looking at the outside. I fell backward as a small bug had landed on my nose. Tilting my head, looking up, seeing a black moth. I reached up to touch it, but it fluttered away. I sudden feeling of sadness overcame me as I watched it leave. Please stay. Yet, it still fluttered away. I sighed, before letting my eyes fall back to the outside. "One day I'll be strong enough to go and get food for myself."

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I was given the name Fair. I didn't exactly like that name, I didn't get it, but I guessed I could live with it. A month passed, and I was finally allowed outside the cave. My mother grew more tired and unsettling. My father was away much more. The more they say each other, the more they had fought. I would spend a lot of my time away from the cave, usually chatting with myself or some butterfly catching. But, after one very stressful day, I had a very obscure dream.

"Hello?" I called out, All I could see is red. It wasn't too bright, not too dark, just red. It seemed like I was floating, yet I could walk perfectly fine. it was so... strange. Within a heartbeat, I was surrounded by nothingness. It was like I was closing my eyes, but I swear I wasn't! I screamed and reached out; before waking up in cold sweat.

I lifted my small body and looked around, my mother not here, but my father. He was standing by the entrance, looking out into the dark forest. I tucked my tail before walking over to him. "Papa?" He looked down at me with an unamused look. "Yes?" I gulped at his rash tone, "I'm scared. I had a bad dream" He scoffed back at my complaint. "Nightmares make you stronger, kiddo. Listen to them. Invite them." I tilted my head, "W-what do you mean?" He glared at me with a snarl, making me recoil to the ground with fear. He scoffed again. "Coward. Nightmares would do you good." He lifted his chin up in disgust, before getting up to walk away. "Go back to sleep," Before I could regain my stance and ask him anything else, he was already gone. I sighed, Walking back too my nest. Curling up against the cold, I started to nod off again.

Something seemed to call me. I lifted my head with rebuttle, Looking around with a small yawn. I looked out of the cave, a sudden feeling of fear spiked my chest. were those eyes? I blinked, they seemed to vanish. "Child." I shrieked and jumped out of my nest, Running from the noise suddenly behind me. "Oh dear, I didn't mean to scare you," A huge smog of dark red smoke covered my path, a pair of glowing red eyes in the center. I tripped over myself trying to fall away from it again. "Get away!" I screamed. "Oh, hush hush. I'm not here to hurt you, dear. I'm here to help you!" The smoke started to shape into a viscet.. walking closer. My heart raced, fear stretching out into every part of my body. "W-what?" The thing laughed a little. "Adorable! come here, I have a secret to tell you," It motioned its arms for me to come closer. I didn't have anywhere else to go anyway. I stepped forward, a grin seeping onto its makeshift face. "Oh honey, I'm not that scary! Here," Once I was close enough, The smog started to turn into something else.. "see! All nice and soft. you seemed so cold over there in that dead grass," I Snuggled next to the new black sheep. "Why are you here?" It laughed a little. "Well dear, You need help! I'm here to help you. You are very lucky to have me, you know." I gave it an odd look of confusion. "Fair, every day you would call out too me. You were so scared- you have yet to know the true feeling of trust. Your Parents are no help too you, heck, they are questioning if they should try and abandon you.. such a shame. You have so much potential." I Shivered as it continued. "I'm here to take care of you. Raise you to be strong- You will become something you never knew you would." Its eyes beamed down into mine. "If you trust me."


Chapter two - Rebellious
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Chapter three - Runaway
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Chapter four - Control
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Chapter five - Power
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[list][b]Chapter one -[/b]
[color=transparent].......[/color] I ran as fast as I could, I couldn’t, wouldn’t, let the flames catch me.  A wave of relief took over me as a saw a river up ahead, the other side untouched by the fire. I started Heading towards it as my life depended on it.  Reaching the bank I didn't hesitate. Steppng in I held my head as high as I could and swam across, trying my best not to get Alcide cold. Reaching the other side I put my brother down gently, before collapsing and starting to hack from the remaining smoke in my lungs.   I looked around, there were some other viscets around too.  Some were terrified as others looked in horror as their home was destroyed.  One approached me, “Are.. you alright?”  All I could do was shake my head.  The stranger sighed, “You look pretty rough there.  How about your son?” I looked over to Alcide. He looked like he was shaking, but from fear.   I moved closer to him and wrapped my tail around him. “They can't hurt you anymore, I promise,” I murmured. I looked around, Almost everyone's attention was on me now.  I guessed my scars and burns stood out. "He's my brother.. Not my son." I said quietly under my breath as I licked the top of his head, trying to clean him off and calm him down the best I could.

[color=transparent].......[/color]After my brothers shaking has slowed down, I stood up to gather the attention of the other viscets around. “Look at what they have done!” The all murmured, some confused, I could tell some thought I was crazy. “Them, the ‘Powerful’ ones. The ones who bare the elements in their own paws! Don't you see, they’ve destroyed our home! Who knows what will happen next! Who will stand up to them?” they were all skeptical of me, I knew it. But one spoke up, “I've met one before, they tried to kill me too. They took my daughter from me.” another nodded, “My sister was killed in one of their fires,” more and more started to agree.  The crowd began to chatter among themselves.  Their voices began to rise over the distant crackle of the fire, sounding more angry and fearful by the second.  “We can’t allow this to happen any longer!” I shouted over them.  They grew silent and turned their attention to me.  This made me feel… empowered. One of them walked in frount of the crowd. “I follow you. What is your name?” I was slightly drawn back by what they had said. [i]follow…?[/i] “My name is Obscurity.” another stepped up. “Obscurity, please help us. We have no home, we need a leader.” [i]l-leader?![/i]  They started to beg of me.  I was in some state of shock, but, I would do my pest to help them as I could.   I needed this to protect Alcide, and with others by my side, it would ensure his safety. “Alright, but first we need to find a place to sleep for the rest of the night, let's go.” I looked back to Alcide. I crouched down, “Are you ok to walk, or would you like to be carried?” He looked up to me with sad, tired eyes. I tried to give him a gentle smile, before reaching out and picking him up by the scruff.  I looked back too the rest of the group, before continuing into the forest.  I could hear the patter of footsteps behind me, they were following me, a new leader of a pack.
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[color=transparent]..........[/color]We found a closed clearing where we all decided was a good spot for the night. I put Alcide down gently careful not to wake him, and lay down myself for I was already exhausted and in pain.  I let my eyes drift away into another nightmare, the events from the night replaying in my head, but… the shadow creature was emphasized.  They were similar to the ones she had dreamed about from when she was younger, but she didn't think much of it.

[b]Chapter two-[/b]
- is trying to learn how to lead. It's somewhat overwhelming. still being only like a year old and such.
- Nightmares get worse.
- After the fire is put out by rain/natural causes obscurity decides to bring the pack thought the river and investigate the burned forest. She finds more hurt viscets and 'recruite them' with the rest of the pack. and if any had and belongings they would try to find them.  Many found their homes burned down really bad ig. stff happens ig and i donno some start to contiue to talk about how bad gardians are.
- The sun starts to set and they find another clearing to sleep in. One of the viscets is like "You need a den because you are leader" and shes like "what?" and all the others agree and shes like "well idk guys mabey" if we find a nice campsite.
- nightmares yey

[b]Chapter three-[/b] x

[b]Chapter four-[/b] x

[b]Chapter five-[/b] x [/list]


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“I remember how badly I was treated by them, monsters, I never believed I was their own. They treated me like a disgrace; I was worthless in their eyes. They only focused on keeping me alive for the first part of my life, until they became more arrogant and only fed themselves, never protecting me from danger. The same for my helpless brother; I was the one who truly raised him. I figured out how to hunt for myself and to protect him from harm. They simply watched, watched as I was given scars from the wild beasts that roamed the forests. When I finally thought I was good enough to leave, I told them. I told them I would take Alcide and leave them to their own wicked lives. They wouldn't let me take him. I tried, but when I had they would fight me and make me too weak to travel. So I had no other choice but to stay trapped within their cluches. After that, I changed my name to Obscurity- It's what it I was. I had no idea why they had named me fairly, it was a false name they gave me. To mock me most likely. Only when Alcide was getting old enough to learn to talk, was when they had tried to kill us. With their demonic flame powers, that need to be rid of this world. I can’t believe they expected me to sleep through the cries of my brother like they do. They got what they deserved, dying how they thought I would of.”

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“My pride, joy, and love. If anyone touches him I'll rip them to shreds. wip.”

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“They truely saved me. wip.”

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