good luck everybody. I'm super nervous for this beautiful cet aa ;7;
ugh i edited a couple minutes late, I'm sorry. I was looking for typos and doing some paranoid last minute additions/adjustments.


Despite the fact that both forms were a work in progress, I still absolutely adored the start of a strong character development and the ideas put into the forms! ;o;; <33
WOWEE honestly, I loved every concept incorporated into the story and the meaning behind the vines struck me especially hard. :"O I adored the way the story was laid out and told- there was never a dull moment in the text and it was a very interesting read! I especially enjoyed the way you incorporated Hamon's backstory into the story- it was a very creative way to include it, and it really added to the unsettling feel (and fluidity) of your form while also showing strong character!
JESus omg I was caught completely off-guard by your form!! It was absolutely remarkable in both story telling and development in Aulelio's character and backstory.. :"O You're an incredibly talented writer and I loved reading through every bit of your form! Most notably, I found it especially captivating that you slowly introduced Aulelio's character throughout the story through his vivid telling of the story from origins to "downfall" through a deceitful 'gift'. It was eerily suspenseful, and the idea of Livio slowly revealing himself to be the traitor who brings Aulelio to his current state was a bit of a shock ngl ;0;; I was stunned AND SHOOk by your form good gosh. I honestly really felt you gave Aulelio the "spark of life"- your story was so well written that it was quite clear to imagine everything going on!
For runner up winners: If you decide to claim, let me know (otherwise you get 3 stubs)! In accordance to the golden vines, let me know of another metal that you'd like to see replace the gold! (Or if you would prefer gold, still,, uh,, a different shade of gold? omg) - That also goes for the yellows on this 'cet! Let me know of any color (besides yellow of course) to replace it on your RU. :0 Last but not least, of course, for the traits- you are free to pick any (compatible) traits of what your RU can have and you're free to suggest anything.
If you guys accept, I'll most likely have the RUs done in at max a week from the time claimed!
JHGFDSASDFGH ok first off,, I WAS SERIOUSLY IMPRESSED WHEN I READ THROUGH YOUR FORM!! HECK.
The development of Luciano's character was absolutely incredible- it gave remarkable strength to the story while providing background information and remained believable and fluid all throughout from the time of him having once been a part of the real world as a "dangerous man" to living in Limbo as the now steadfast leader of unruly circus spirits. Alongside the explanation of the hellish world he's doomed to (I absolutely loved the ideas and creativity that went into building up the sheer image and atmosphere of Limbo throughout your form!), the buildup from beginning to end was especially wonderful and I loved that it ended on nearly the same note it started but with a much stronger tone of fear, desperation, and defeat with trying to catch that kiddo.. yIKES. The artworks throughout your form were also incredibly helpful in picturing Luciano's ominous "home" & life - as well as being quite gorgeous as well! You definitely gave Luciano the "spark" of life through strong words and art to make a clear, interesting, and terrifying character, heck,,,
Congratulations!

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