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HECKING HECK, I first wanna say that your form was absolutely i n c r e d i b l e. The legend, the background, the suspense- the development and care you put into Salem's individual was remarkable, and the creativity you put into every idea you included was awesome! ; o ; I was on edge throughout the entirety of your form- from wondering how Salem might keep her identity a secret to how her quest to be freed from her curse would unfold. You are definitely a very talented writer. ♡
Honestly, I was seriously impressed by your form! The overall development from beginning to end was phenomenal, and it flowed especially well in what definitely gave Dullahan and his intense adventure the "spark of life". I really especially loved that you used the main prompt to introduce what he was about to get himself into! The events tied nicely together throughout the stories, and it was quite the nerve-wracking journey he's gone through! Your form was extremely well written and the ideas that you incorporated in the stories were creative and certainly reflected importance that kept the plot fresh and interesting- I loved that none of the details were really left behind and his character was true to the many changes he's gone through. That said, I especially enjoyed the change in character he's gone through- and it was very well done, from a small innocent kiddo to a powerful, loyal king of the marshes. ALSO THE TENSION WITH REJECTING THE DEAL!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
The end especially left me with goosebumps and... Feels. So many feels. ; o ;;; Oh gosh.
Also, apart from your writing, the artworks were gorgeous and certainly complimented the story!
Congratulations on Dullahan, again!

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