memories taunt you

Postby steamplonk » Sun Aug 06, 2017 7:31 am

    username // steamplonk
    name // althalos renee ashdon- or just "ash"
    gender // female
    story //
    tiptiptip. the gentle click of paws on the keyboard
    echoed throughout the dark house. the viscet peered at
    her computer screen, murmuring the words she had just
    written. rubbing her bloodshot eyes, she glanced at the
    clock, and did a double take. she groaned. 5:28 am. ugh.
    she finished typing, and opened a new window- what
    appeared to be a list. she scrolled to the very bottom,
    through a long list of names, and crossed off yet another
    name. she sighed. not too many more to go.

    wip
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Re: Viscet #1692 - Open!

Postby _Alex_ » Wed Aug 16, 2017 7:04 am

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Re: Viscet #1692 - Open!

Postby Abraxis » Fri Aug 18, 2017 9:27 pm

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Name:  Laika
Gender: Female
Story:
I wriggled my toes, enjoying the feel of the warm sand between them, digging my feet deeper into the dry, yellow-white sand, I tilted back my head. It was such a beautiful August afternoon. Nothing bad could ever happen on a day like today. And what made it even better was the fact that I could share it - something rare and special in itself, as I knew only too well. I turned to the boy next to me, my face about to split wide open from the smile on it.
‘Can I kiss you?’
My smile faded. I stared at my best friend. ‘Pardon?’
‘Can I kiss you?’
‘What on earth for?’
‘Just to see what it's like,’ Comet replied.
Yeuk! I mean, Yeuk!!! I wrinkled up my nose, I couldn't help it!
‘Do you really want to?’ I asked.
Comet shrugged ‘Yeah, I do.’
‘Oh alright then.’ I wrinkled up my nose again at the prospect. ‘But make it fast!’
Comet turned to kneel beside me. I turned my head up towards his, watching with growing curiosity to see what he’d do next. I tilted my head to the left. So did he. I tilted my head to the right. Comet did the same. He was moving his head like he was my reflection or something. I put my hands on Comet’s face to keep it still and dead center.
‘D’you want me to tilt my head to the left or the right?’
I asked, impatiently.
‘Er… which way do girls usually tilt their heads when they’re being kissed?’ asked Comet.
‘Does it matter? Besides, how should I know?’ I frowned. ‘Have I ever kissed a boy before?’
‘Tilt your head to the left then.’
‘My left or your left?’
‘Er… your left.’
I did as asked. ‘Hurry up, before I get a crick in my neck.’
Comet moved his face toward my own, I kept my lips tight together, I kept my eyes wide open as I watched Comet’s face ,move towards mine. Comets golden eyes were open too. And then his lips were touching mine. How funny! I’d expected Comet’s lips to be hard, dry and scaly like a lizard’s skin. But they weren’t. They were soft. Comet closed his eyes, after a moment, I did the same.

‘That’s enough’
Comet looked at me with the strangest look on his face.
‘What’s the matter?’
‘Nothing.’
‘What are you thinking?’ I asked.
‘About you and me.’
‘What about us?’
Comet turned to look out over the sea. ‘Sometimes I wish there was just you and me and no-one else in the whole world.’
‘We’d drive each other crazy, wouldn’t we?’ I teased. At first i thought Comet wasn’t going to answer.
‘Laika, d’you ever dream about… escaping?’
‘I do….’
‘Where would you go?’
‘That's just the point,’ Comet said with a sudden bitterness. ‘This place is like the whole world and the whole world is like this place. So where could i go?’
‘This place isn’t so bad, is it? I asked, gently.
‘Depends on your point of view,’ Comet replied. ‘You're on the inside, Laika. I'm not.’
I couldn't think of an answer to that, so i didn't reply.
‘Wherever you went, i'd go with you,’ I decided.
‘Though you'd soon get bored with me.’
Comet sighed. A long, heartfelt sigh which immediately made me feel like id failed some test I hadn't even known I was taking.
‘We’d better get on with it,’ he said at last. ‘What’s the lesson for today, teacher?’,
‘Comet, you've already passed the entrance exam. Why do we still have to do this?’
‘I don't want to give them a reason to kick me out.’
‘You haven't even started school yet and already you're talking about getting kicked out?’ I was puzzled ‘You've got nothing to worry about, your in now, the school accepted you.’
‘Being in and being accepted are two different things.’
Comet shrugged. ‘Besides, I want to learn as much as I can so I don't look like a complete dunce.’
I sat up suddenly. ‘I've just had a thought, maybe you'll be in my class. Oh, I do hope so,’ I said eagerly. ‘Wouldnt that be great?’
‘You think so?’
I tried and failed, I think to keep the hurt out of my voice. ‘Don’t you?’
Comet looked at me and smiled. ‘You shouldn't answer a question with a question,’ he teased.
‘Why not?,’ I forced myself to smile back.
Taking me by surprise. Comet pushed me over onto the sand. Indignant, I scrambled up to kneel in front of him.
‘D’you mind?’ I huffed.
‘No. Not at all.’ Comet smirked.
We looked at each other and burst out laughing. I stopped laughing first
‘Comet, wouldn't…. Wouldn't you like to be in my class…?’
Comet couldn't meet my eyes. ‘It's a bit… humiliating for us noughts to be stuck in the baby class.’
‘What d’you mean? I'm not a baby.’ I jumped to my feet, scowling down at him.
‘Jeez, Laika, i'm fifteen, for heaven's sake! In six months time i'll be sixteen and they're still sticking me in with twelve and thirteen year olds. How would you like to be in a class with kids at least a year younger than you?’
Comet asked.
‘I…..well……’ I sat back down.
‘Exactly’
‘I'm turning fourteen in three weeks.’ I said, unwilling to let it drop.
‘That's not the point, and you know it.’
‘But the school explained why. You're all at least a year behind and….’
;And whose fault is that?’ Comet said with erupting bitterness. ‘Until a few years ago we were only allowed to be educated up to the age of fourteen - and in noughts only schools at that, which don't have a quarter of the money or resources that your schools have.’
I had no answer.
‘Sorry. I didn't mean to bite your head off.’
‘You didn't.’ I said. ‘Are any of your friends from your old school going to join you at Heathercrofts?’
‘No. None of them got in.’ Comet replied. ‘I wouldn't have got in either if you hadn't helped me.’
He made it sound like an accusation. I wanted to say sorry and I had no idea why.
Comet sighed. ‘Come on, wed better get to work…’
‘OK’.’ I turned and dug into my bag for my school books. ‘What d’you want to do first? Maths or History?’
‘Maths. I like maths.’

‘You should get into Maths. It's the universal language.’ Comet said.
‘Says who?’
‘Says anyone with any sense. Look at how many different languages are spoken on our planet. The only thing that doesn't change, no matter what the language, is Maths, and it's probably the same on other planets too.’
‘Pardon?’
‘That's probably how well talk to aliens from other planets when they get here or when we get to them. Well use maths.’
I stared at Comet. Sometimes when I talked to him, the seventeen months between us seemed to stretch to seventy years. ‘Are…. are you winding me up?’
Comets smile was no answer.
‘Stop it! Your giving me a headache.’ I frowned. ‘Can we just get on with Maths in my book and forget about chatting with aliens for a while?’
‘OK,’ Comet said at last. ‘But Laika, you should think above and beyond just us. You should free your mind and think about other cultures and other planets an oh, I don't know, just think about the future.’
‘I've got plenty of time to think about the future when i'm tons older and don't have much future left, thank you very much. And my mind is quite free enough.’
‘Is it?’ Comet asked slowly. ‘There's more to life than just us noughts and you crosses.’
My stomach jerked. Comets words hurt ‘Don't say that…..’
‘Don't say what?’
‘Us noughts and you crosses.’ I shook my head. ‘It makes it sound like…. Like you're in one place and i'm in another, with a huge, great wall between us.’
Comet looked across the sea. ‘Maybe we are in different places…..’

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Re: Viscet #1692 - Open!

Postby ~Ash Wolf~ » Sun Aug 20, 2017 5:47 am

Oh I'm so excited and nervous! Good luck to everyone! c:
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Re: Viscet #1692 - Open!

Postby ShadyBro » Mon Aug 21, 2017 2:24 pm

I apologize for the lateness but I have been extremely busy the past week - I promise I will judge this as soon as I have some time. You are still welcome to edit your forms until then though!
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Re: Viscet #1692 - Open!

Postby ShadyBro » Thu Aug 24, 2017 5:49 am

Yugi wrote:
Username: Yugi | Name: Vaanni | Gender: Female

Story
"Vaanni, appear," a light voice stated. There was no urgency to her voice, yet Vaanni knew that Priscilla needed her presence. Without delay, a thick, orange smoke emitted from the book that Priscilla held onto dearly, materializing the being that resided from within it. Vaanni, eyes closed, spoke no words as she knelt before Priscilla; instead, she patiently waited for her commands.

"Rise," the light voice spoke again, and thus Vaanni did just so. Once she stood fully upright, she opened her eyes, revealing beautiful black and gold colors. Even though they had known each other for many years now, Vaanni dared not to break the book's code for fear of never being able to return. The book kept her living, and while she hated to follow orders, her life depended on doing just that. But, oddly enough, with Priscilla, she did not mind being given directions, for the doll would give her the freedom that she had craved often.

"Be free," Priscilla said. How those words were a complete lie, but yet they continued to give Vaanni so much hope. The command only allowed her to act and talk however she'd like; in the end, she would still have to go back into the book once requested. Vaanni sat down next to the pink doll

"How can I help you this time, Priscilla?" Vaanni asked. Her concern was quite genuine, for she had come to understand that both of them were in the same cruel predicament.

"I fear that I'm losing myself with each passing moment, Vaanni. My memories are slowly leaving me faster each day, regardless of how I desperately try to hold onto them. I can't even remember my own child's face anymore; she's just a complete blur now," the doll said. Her airy voice and looks had betrayed her at that very moment, for she appeared much too happy than how she truly had felt. She could cry no tears, and her voice could not be wavered.

There was a heavy pause between the both of them before the mermaid-like viscet broke the silence. "All what we can do is continue to press on while trying our best to reminisce in hopes of keeping ourselves sane," Vaanni spoke wisely. "If we give up hope, we will not be able to return back to our former selves; we must persevere."

"For a wraith, you are exceptionally cheerful," Priscilla said playfully, but still appreciative of Vaanni's words. "I don't believe I ever asked you, even though you had asked me this plenty of times; why were you cursed? You don't appear to be someone who did the Gods wrong, and you do not have the abilities of a witch, per say."

"Aye, you are correct in your terms of thinking of who I am and what I've done," Vaanni said, smiling. She waved her hand around in a circular motion, conjuring more heavy orange smoke. "Why don't I just show you everything?" Before Priscilla had realized, orange mist had engulfed the two of them, causing Vaanni to disappear within it.
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The fog had soon subsided, but it was clear that Priscilla was still surrounded by it, as the view in front of her had completely changed. They were no longer hiding away in a dark forest at night; instead, Priscilla had been taken to a bright, sunny desert town, bustling with people. The cool wind from the woods still gently passed by her, causing her short hair to sway and the grains of illusionary sands to be picked up around her. "Welcome to my home," Vaanni's voice echoed throughout. "It has already been seventy-eight years since I've seen this place with my own two eyes."

Vaanni could be easily spotted amid the town's citizens, carrying a thick, ancient looking book in her arms. She wore dull, tattered clothing, as opposed to her refined, colorful silk clothes that she wore now as a wraith. She looked around suspiciously before darting off into an alleyway, sitting in the middle of wooden boxes and trash as to hide away. Vaanni opened the ancient text to a very specific page that she had marked, looking absolutely pleased with herself. She spoke as she read through it, but, while her speech was barely audible, the language was certainly one that Priscilla had never heard before.

Just like how Vaanni had summoned the smoke from her hand, the illusion that looked like her had done something similar. More orange mist filled the air around her as it flooded out from the book, creating small beings that resembled mythological creatures that danced around her. She spoke more words, this time from memory, and began to control each tiny creature, swirling them around her. It wasn't before too long that she had deemed that she was finished for now, for she quickly shut the book back to its closed position, causing all of the beings and smoke to disappear without a trace.

The illusionary Vaanni had then picked herself up and ran to the middle of the town, placing down a mat and her book as she knelt down next to it. It wasn't before long that people began to surround her, offering her money in exchange for a show. It appeared to be a usual thing, as people came up and threw down coins in front of her in a neat pile upon the rug she sat upon. However, even with her normal tongue, Priscilla still struggled to understand what Vaanni was saying, and instead began to assume that she was notifying them of how close they were to beginning the show.

After the final coin was tossed her way, Vaanni began to open the book up once again to the same page she had originally done. She gazed upon those who stood around, staying silent for a small while before ultimately beginning her reading. The same foreign tongue she used to read the ancient text could be heard once more, summoning the same mythological animals, albeit quite bigger this time. Visions of dragons, chimeras, and griffins began to dance around her while she sang. The crowd cheered on, clapping joyfully, as they watched on. Everyone, especially Vaanni appeared to be joyful. With her book in hand, she began to dance around alongside the illusions she had summoned; as the beasts danced, the ground could be seen shaking with the weight of each step they took. The audience began to dance along with Vaanni and her summons; all looked well for the time being.

But, soon, the situation began to change quickly when the skies above them began to darken. Priscilla knew what this meant all too well, as it had happened to her when she was cursed by the Gods above. The audience around Vaanni had stopped what they were doing, and stared up at the sky with fear plastered across all of their faces. Vaanni was visibly uncomfortable too, but she stood proudly with her book opened in her arms and her summoned beings by her side.

An angelic being floated down onto the ground, looking at Vaanni with a stern expression. "Vaanni," the being spoke ethereally, "You had violated our sanctioned rules by learning a forbidden language. We had already warned you to cease your learning, but now we see that you have no intention in doing so. Look upon her, fellow neighbors of Vaanni; have you not noticed her illusions becoming stronger each and every day? Doesn't that strike fear into your hearts? She hasn't shown you what she is truly capable of yet, but I will tell you all now; she has the ability to control others for her own bidding. Just like how she controls her summoned beings, she can control you all like puppets as well. Do you all want that for your village?"

The citizens all let out an audible, worried gasp and quickly gazed towards Vaanni. Parents could be seen hugging their children close to them, hiding their young faces in their own clothing as if it would prevent them from being controlled by her. Vaanni shook her head at the accusations being thrown her way, but it was far too late; everyone feared her now. As quickly as her summons disappeared, so did she, as the angelic being sealed her away in the ancient text before grabbing the book and leaving.

As the winged being made their way back to the skies, the illusion surrounding Priscilla had faded away, leaving Vaanni standing before her. Her face at first was grim after recalling the situation that led to her ultimate demise, but when she made eye contact with Priscilla, she gave her a small smile. "It has been a while since I remembered the reason why I was here. Thank you, Priscilla; I know it sounds odd but, I do feel a little bit more hopeful that we'll escape together one day. Perhaps not today, nor tomorrow, or anytime in the coming months, but one day."
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Congrats! The story was absolutely lovely, and I adore the character you created in Vaanni - enjoy ^^
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Re: Viscet #1692 - Closed

Postby ~Ash Wolf~ » Thu Aug 24, 2017 6:20 am

Congrats! Your form was amazing. You can't have my art c:
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Re: Viscet #1692 - Closed

Postby Yugi » Thu Aug 24, 2017 6:49 am

Ah, oh gosh, thank you so much, Shady! ;u; I was really nervous about this comp honestly, as there were a couple of other very strong forms entered in it. I'm really excited to weave Vaanni into the story I've created for my other viscets!

Ash, your form was lovely as well; Bowman's story was sad to read through, but I'm glad that he was able to successfully live out his childhood dream of flying to the moon at the end. I really did enjoy reading through Abraxis' form too; I thought it was a super adorable short story ^u^
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Re: Viscet #1692 - Closed

Postby Samsherwoodc » Sun Oct 17, 2021 10:41 am

This viscet was transferred to me
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Name: Rynth
Pronouns: He/They
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