Re: Viscet #1582 - Open

Postby funderful;; » Mon Jul 03, 2017 8:16 am

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Are they a hero or a villain: (Minimum of 100 words; maximum of 1,000 words)
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Re: Viscet #1582 - Open

Postby Fukase » Sat Jul 08, 2017 2:54 pm

Username: Fukase
Name: Corvo (I'm sorry, he reminds me too much of the game Dishonored for some reason...)
Gender: Male
Gender for breeding: Male
Are they a hero or a villain: He started as a hero, saving people and doing everything right, everything that was asked of him. But that all changed when he realized that fighting against everything wrong in this world was a losing battle. Why should one conform to society and fit its standards. Is he a hero? Most definitely not. Is he a villain? Well, he doesn't commit mass genocide but...if someone dies here or there, no biggie. If he witnesses a woman being defiled, of course he would save her. If a granny needs to cross the street, he might go out of his way to help her if he feels like it. If saving someone is in his best interests, he wouldn't hesitate to do so. He does have some morals, after all. But aren't there heroes and villains in all of us. They are such relative terms.
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Re: Viscet #1582 - Open

Postby Glitch.Drowned » Sun Jul 09, 2017 11:44 am

Username: Glitch.Drowned
Name: Balthazar
Gender: Male
Gender for breeding: Male
Hero or Villain:
Balthazar is no hero and yet he doesn't see himself as a villain neither. He is known to the viscet community as an outcast, and a danger to others, because you see Balthazar has a very keen taste for the flesh of other viscet's. What do you do when you're on the brink of starvation, when your mind become overpowered by pure instinct to feed. The pack members you once called family are no longer seen as family, they are seen as an opportunity to silence the pain in your gut. Have you ever been so hungry that you would eat anything you could get your hands on? Balthazar is known as a murderer, a cannibal who killed and ate his entire family. A viscet who was chased into the tundra for the crime he committed. Balthazar is known as a villain throughout the region, at least that's how the story goes, no one has ever asked for Balthazar's side of the story.

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- Story - 574 words

"Can I come with you this time Dad?" Oscar asked before I could make it out of the den. "I'd rather you stay with your mother this time around, maybe next time." I told to him but he wasn't taking it from me this time. "But Dad, you said that to me last time." He replied pinning his ears back in frustration. With a sigh I turned around to face him. "Look son, I'm just going out to gather some fruits and nuts for us tomorrow morning. It'll be nightfall soon and I'd rather you be safe if you stayed home this time." I told him with a gentle smile. "I promise, tomorrow you can come hunting with me, does that sound like a plan." A smile spread across Oscar's face at the statement. "Alright Dad, I'll see you when you get home!" He gave me a hug before running back into the den. With a smile I turned to see my wife smiling back at me. That was the last time I would ever see my son and wife alive again.

I remember I had collected almost two handfuls of nuts and berries before I decided to make my way back home. The sun had disappeared behind the horizon and the moon had taken it's place in the sky, it was peaceful at least for a while. Suddenly there was a blood curdling sheik that shook the sky, I quickly took action. I ran the fastest I could back home as the scream came from the south. When I came to a clearing the smell of wolves invaded my nose, I quickly head towards the scent. I came upon the pack eating away at their freshly killed game, but before they could finish it I was able to scare them away. I had turned to see what kind of game that had made such a scream, what I saw made my heart stop.

There right before me was both my mate and my son, dead and mostly eaten. "N-No this can't be .." I remember staying out loud as my eyes started to water. I ran over to where my son laid, I tried to pick him up and tell him he was going to be okay, I tried to stop his wounds from bleeding, but I knew .. it was too late. I screamed into the night sky, angry that the lives of my family were taken from me. I held my mate and my son in my arms, tears streaming down my face, my heart and mind broken.

Not shortly after the rest of my pack came as they had heard my scream. They stared blankly at me, I hadn't noticed I was covered in they're blood when I tried to hold them. " Y-You .. " The alpha started, staring at me then back at the bodies. " He's a cannibal .." One other viscet said out loud. "He killed them!" Another shouted, growling at me. "W-What no I-I didn't!" I pleaded, my eyes were red from crying. "Cannibal!" The alpha hissed, running at me with full force. "You murderer! I do not what to see you're face here ever again, do you hear me cannibal!" The alpha clawed at my face as a warning. Whimpering I turned and ran, ran as fast and as far as I could. That was the day I last saw my family ... and the day I became known as a murderer.
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Re: Viscet #1582 - Open

Postby CCrow » Mon Jul 10, 2017 3:53 am

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Re: Viscet #1582 - Open

Postby CO1LD » Tue Jul 11, 2017 7:53 am

Username: oneinthecold
Name: Cole
Gender: Male
Gender for breeding: Male
Are they a hero or a villain:
"To be honest, I don't know.."
Cole walked down the ashen village, his mask, a sign of death, was shielding his face from the dust. What happened here? His mind was lost for thoughts, as memories blanked from his mind. Over and over, every paw step he took, the memories evaporated into nothing. He couldn't remember. His cloak made the light swishing sound, speaking to the light breeze that blew over the ruined town. He stopped and reached a tentative paw out to pick up a toy, a stuffed, small bear. He felt it in his paws, his claws gently grazing the face of the bear. Innocence was lost, he thought, as he returned the bear to its abandoned home. He kept walking down the cobblestone street, nails clicking lightly as he did, faint echoes adding to the chat of wind and cloak. He stopped at a fountain, no water of life appearing out of it for it was in a crumbled heap. He took off his mask, the bandages sweeping over his fur as he did so. Finally, a memory came to him. Vicsectlings laughing and playing in the fountain, the sun shining down on the others that worked. The sky turned to grey, then the ground began to shake. In the distance, was a cloud, rising into the air. There was terror, screaming and bells going around. All the sudden, a wave of dust and heat crashed into the area. Then it was silent. He gasped as he opened his eyes, catching his breath. A bomb. A weapon of war did this. Suddenly there was a crackle, a static voice came from within his cloak. 'Commander do you copy whats the situation down there over?'. He reached slowly in and grabbed the walkie talkie. After clearing his throat he said 'There is no sign of life. Nothing.' He put away his device and sat on the ground, staring at his mask. What have I done. Viscets with the same cloaks came rushing by his sides searching the crumbled houses and streets. Voices all saying the same word buzzed in his ears. 'Clear' 'Clear' 'Clear'. Tears brimmed his eyes. How could I?
What have I done?


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Re: Viscet #1582 - Open

Postby Yugi » Sat Jul 15, 2017 7:08 am

One day warning!
This contest will come to a close tomorrow at 8:00 PM PST.


If there's any need for extensions, please PM me before tomorrow rolls around ^^
If you need a PST clock, please click here!
The time featured on this clock is accurate to my time zone.

Please make sure that all of your links and images are working.
When the competition officially closes, there won't be extra time allowed for the fixing of forms.
Any edits after the closing date will disqualify your form.

I wish you all the best of luck!
I'm loving how the forms are looking already, and I'm thoroughly excited to be able to read through them soon.
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Re: Viscet #1582 - Open

Postby Yugi » Sun Jul 16, 2017 5:13 pm

Alright, I'm a couple hours late, but this contest has come to a close <3

Thank you all for entering! I'll have the winner announced and posted soon!
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Re: Viscet #1582 - Judging

Postby Yugi » Mon Jul 17, 2017 10:56 am

Alright! Thank you, once again, to everyone who's entered this competition ^o^
It was a lot of fun to read through all of the completed forms due to all the different, unique ideas that were present in each and every one of them.

To begin, I would like to write down some shout outs ^^
These won't award you stubs or a runner up design, but I felt the need to compliment your form!
Shout Outs wrote:Fukase
I liked your idea and how you tried to pair up a song along with it to further explain his character! It was a really good start on answering the prompt for this contest c:

Glitch.Drowned
I must admit that I was a little bit fearful when I initially read your prompt answer, but reading his side of his story made me feel both relieved and sad for Balthazar. The story that you crafted also made me very intrigued in learning more about the character,
especially his life after he was falsely ostracized from his pack.

oneinthecold
Your form was really nicely written and quite intense; the twist at the end truly did help explain his character, as well as drawing me into wanting to learn more about him. I do like how you included the accessories and what they stood for this character in your form as well; I thought it was a neat way to include them overall ^^


Last, but certainly not least, is the winner for viscet #1582!
Winner wrote:Mihrianth
Your form definitely went above and beyond!

Her story was interesting, and you answered the prompt nicely, despite her character living in quite the different world. Your writing was skillful, and although you were concerned about it ending abruptly, everything made plenty of sense; the ideas presented in the form flowed nicely with each other, and her character was easy to understand. The coding you did for your form was quite lovely, while also allowing for an easy read through.

The art Placebo did for your form is also astounding too; I love how much expression was presented in the piece ^^)/

I hope you all have a fantastic week, and I wish you all the best of luck in any future contests you may enter!
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Re: Viscet #1582 - Winner Announced

Postby serotonin. » Mon Jul 17, 2017 10:59 am

    Ahh! Thank you so much, Yugi. <3 I loved this lady from the first time I set eyes on her, and I am so happy that she has a place among my viscets~
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Re: Viscet #1582 - Winner Announced

Postby Glitch.Drowned » Mon Jul 17, 2017 11:36 am

    Thank you for the compliment Yugi ;v; It really means a lot, like a lot you have no idea.

    Congrats Mihrianth! I'm so glad that you won this viscet, I was honestly rooting for you to win her ;v;
    I enjoyed reading through your form myself as I took the time to read everyone's form, and my goodness I loved your story and how you explained it and ahhh I loved it so much ;v;
    Take great care of her!
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