Doglady88722 wrote:Username:doglady88722
Name:Jinnia ( nickname is Jin )
Gender: female
Story: Jinnia was walking in the forest with her parents, but when she turned around they weren't there. "Mommy? Daddy? Where are you? MOMMY!" She cried
your stories was ok, but felt bland and i didnt really get a feel of who the foxlep was.
8bit_Shann wrote:Username: 8bit_Shann
Name: Gamel
Gender: Male
Story: Gamel was a little fox in a game, that was beloved by children and adults alike in an arcade. Then one day, his arcade machine was shut down due to technical difficulties, and was forgotten, just like many other titles... he figured out how to make it to the earth we know today, but found himself stuck in a chicken smoothie adoptable forum...
this doesnt really give me an idea of why gamel out and about alone, and he feels a bit 2 dimensional
Broken_ wrote:Username:
Broken_
Name:
Azural
Gender:
Male
Story:
Azural took a deep breath trying to clam his racing nerves. He heaved a sigh and slowly began to crawl back up the rabbits hole. He was just small enough to fit inside of not he would have been snatched up and eaten. Right before he had been chased by a rabid foxlep. It was foaming at the mouth and everything it scared the living out of him. He took a deep breath drawing in a Buch of scents. He continued upward as the rabid foxleps trail seemed to be a few hours old. He stopped right before he was to crawl out. Taking one more deep breath he jumped out of the rabbit hole.
really liked your story, but it doesnt really feel that fleshed out. you get an honorable mention though ;D
Laurara wrote:Username: Laurara
Name: Sage
Gender: Female
Story: Bravery... Stupidity... Some people might argue that there is very little in the difference.
Little Sage here was born with an almost natural need to wander - her poor mother never had a moment's peace with her, always having to get up to snatch her young daughter from the jaws of danger. Her mother knew that, some day, Sage would wander too far, unable to find her way home, but it happened a little too soon for the mother's liking.
At the break of dawn, Sage padded out of her little den, nose twitching eagerly in an attempt to take in the scents of the world around her. She wandered through the familiar territory, something that she had seen every day since she was born... but no... that wasn't enough. Bounding back to the den and her sleeping mother, she bumped her nose into her mother's cheek, a final farewell, and then bounded out, eager to explore. Her natural bravery pushed her farther and farther away, eager to find something that she had never seen before. The world rushed past - some new trees! Unusual animals! Rivers, mountains, lakes, forests, farmland... Sage traveled them all!
But after a few days, she realized her mistake. Now missing her mother, she roams the world at a slower pace, hoping to find some kind of companion to keep her safe.
this was really nice! um.. the story.. not sage losing her mother :c sage is yours! youve also been added if you want the pallet or to add her to your gallery