- first of all, i would like to very sincerely apologize for how long this has taken me to judge. there is no true excuse really. other than it slipped my mind and i got too caught up in some other obligations. but still, i should have gotten this judged a month ago and i admit that.
there were two forms that really caught my eye from the start.
Angelus Gaston i really loved your idea for Reaper's job. it was unique and something i haven't seen before honestly. i liked the concept behind the story as well, but i was left feeling a bit confused. there were a few places i had to reread it a few times to grasp the message.
ShimmerSolarPets i liked your idea for Nicholas' job as well. perhaps my favorite part of your from was the snippet on his feelings towards his job. the first person pov there really helped to bring him to life. in addition, your story was well written and really kept me engaged. i will admit that your log entry entry reminded me quite a bit of a few storylines i've seen in past contests, but i doubt that was intentional ^^
that said, after some consideration and a bit of outside help from my sister, i'd like to congratulate ShimmerSolarPets! I'll update everything now and add you to the lines ^^ I hope you enjoy your new inventor!
