Re: B #690 — abandoned scorpio

Postby Macyduke » Sun Feb 12, 2017 5:18 pm

name: Brutus Custos
gender: Male
what are they passionate about?: (over 50 words, less than 300)
Brutus is passionate about a lot of things, protecting he loves, making things like stink bombs, attacking those who've hurt those he cares about, playing video games (fighting games in particular), hacking, and personalizing his stuff. His least favorite of which being protecting those he cares about. When it comes to protecting others, he finds that they tend to keep things from him in an effort to keep his temper at bay, which has lead him to digging into their personal lives and invading others privacy more than he'd like to admit it has. There's truly nothing he hates more than clearing his head after he's done something vengeful and realizing how much he enjoined hurting the viscet who hurt someone he cares about. However, there's probably not much he loves more than attacking and humiliating those he deems criminal while he's doing it. The thrill he gets from setting up pranks, uncovering secrets, exposing lies, and destroying bits of others lives truly scares him. In an effort to relax and take his mind off of some of the things he wishes he wouldn't have, he often times throws himself into personalizing his things, whether that be with markers, sharpies, gluing, painting, or stitching; and has done so to the extent of turning everything he owns into either a unique articular of clothing or object. Someday he hopes his passion for personalizing any thing and everything will turn into a good source of income as well as a means of obtaining more than a comfortable way of life. (258/300)
instrumental: boop

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"You know Brutus," Started the white and black viscet, "You're not going to keep many friends if you keep doing what you're doing." The small black viscet glanced at his adoptive half brother.
"You're just saying that because you're loosing." He retorted, easily pulling off a difficult combo through a series of rapid button pushing and joystick moving. His chosen character finishing off Roderick's with a well placed hat through the skull. "You wanna play again?" He smiled smugly at his companion, happy to show him who was boss. Roderick shook his head.
"No, twice is enough. Why don't we play air-hockey or something I'm somewhat good at."
"You're not good at air-hockey." The young viscet rolled his eyes.
"Then let's ditch this place and go play mini golf." Rick shrugged his shoulders, his eyes wandering towards a party room as he did so. "You think we'd be able to sneak into a party and grab some food?"
"You're not good at mini golf, and no." Brutus answered. He pushed a few tokens into the machine.
"Choose your Character!" the machine exclaimed. Brutus reselected his character before moving his brother's character picker to one he thought he'd like and pressing A.
"You're not the greatest at mini golf either." Rick said absentmindedly, his paws returning to the controller.
"Choose your location!" The game exclaimed.
"Wait no." Rick said pulling his paws away. "I don't wanna play this anymore."
"It's too late Rich. I already picked your character. You gotta play." He said flicking the selection to a random arena.
"Who'd you pick?"
"Ready? FIGHT!"
"Oh the little blue ninja guy." Roderick mumbled, well aware of how much his brother hated it when he didn't remember video game character names, and the degree of which he was probably rolling his eyes.
(300/300)
"There are two stars in the sky, and they're both planes."


Really though, just *Incoherent screaming*
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Re: B #690 — abandoned scorpio

Postby magpiemochi. » Tue Feb 14, 2017 12:22 pm

this is closed and I'll have the results posted as soon as i can c:
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Re: B #690 — abandoned scorpio

Postby magpiemochi. » Wed Feb 15, 2017 3:50 pm

I'll be honest and say I've been procrastinating this a bit because I hate to be the bearer of bad news, and seriously all of you had such lovely forms. The music was amazing, the stories were great... I didn't want to have to pick just one.

Real quick, I'd like to thank everyone for these amazing songs! Honestly!! I have new songs to add to my playlist now, and that's a big deal to me. I can really tell everyone put a lot of effort in not only the stories, but in finding the perfect song too so that's just awesome.

There will be two RU's and I'd like to announce those first: Stardew and Macyduke. Stardew, wow. That song got me pumped, tbh. I was ready to punch a seagull in the face I swear. In the story, it was mentioned that the viscling listened to music that made their fur stand on end, and this song made that happen for me, I swear! I wanted intense music and you definitely didn't disappoint! As for the story, I really did love it. Truly. Your writing is definitely something that I admire, okay, and I really really enjoyed the character you created. I truly hope you will be able to transfer this personality to the RU — or maybe you'll come up with something completely different!

Macyduke! Your song was A++, seriously. I thoroughly enjoyed it and it went very well with the story you created for this viscling. I felt bad for him throughout the personality and the story, and since i'm a sucker for the conflicted types, i truly hope you continue with this path with the RU! I'd love to learn more about him and his feelings.

With all that being said, I'd like to announce _Alex_ as the winner of this little guy. I had some community members help out with the judging and then some outside influences as well in case of bias and all that good jazz. Just like everyone else, your song was amazing!! It seriously fit right into the story and personality. And wow... that story tho. lmao. I admit I uttered an audible "oh snap" :') I'm a sucker for angst and dark themes, sue me ///:

Everyone honestly did such an amazing job though, and like I said, I didn't want to pick just one winner, but unfortunately, that's how this works ;n;

As for the RU's, shoot me over a pm with a species of scorpion (just not a bark or emperor scorpion) and I'll get those made as soon as I can! Congratulations, guys and thank you so much for entering!!
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Re: B #690 — abandoned scorpio

Postby serotonin. » Wed Feb 15, 2017 4:05 pm

Wow! Congrats, _Alex_! A beautiful babe to be sure. And congrats on the RU, MacyDuke!
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Re: B #690 — abandoned scorpio

Postby _Alex_ » Wed Feb 15, 2017 4:14 pm

    thank you so much!!! i can't wait to develop this little dude more. his little story was so much fun to write.

    and congrats to you as well Stardew and MacyDuke! I can't wait to see your RUs!
































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Re: B #690 — abandoned scorpio

Postby Macyduke » Wed Feb 15, 2017 4:30 pm

Major congrats _Alex_! Can't wait to see how you continue to develop him. Also super congrats on the RU stardew. Can't wait to see your ru. Thanks for the congratulations you two, this was a hell of a fun comp to be apart of.
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