Re: Halloween Viscet #1040 - The Guardian Rises

Postby G1 Sunstreaker » Wed Nov 16, 2016 2:23 pm

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Uꜱᴇʀɴᴀᴍᴇ; TILL ALL ARE ONE
Nᴀᴍᴇ; Thera (Title: Vercingetorix (Ancient Celtic;
"king over warriors"))

Gᴇɴᴅᴇʀ; Female
Pᴇʀꜱᴏɴᴀʟɪᴛʏ Tʀᴀɪᴛꜱ; Impatient | Direct | Irritable |
Dry | Hostile

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Mɪꜱᴄᴇʟʟᴀɴᴇᴏᴜꜱ;

    magical abilities
    Thera's fire magic entails several useful abilities.
    The most obvious few are fire summoning and
    projection, as well as near imperviousness to
    extreme heat (and flames). She can also shape her
    fire into illusory images, and depending on the
    circumstances it can possess mild mesmerizing properties.
    She is also immortal, as her task is eternal.

    who she knows
    M ᴄ C ᴏ ʏ
    As a medic McCoy is known by many. In Thera's case their
    relationship barely stretches to business, and she has
    sworn him to secrecy in anything she tells him regarding
    her frequent injuries. She appreciates their shared sense
    of humor, and they can often be heard making dry quips
    at each other when alone--commonly about their similar
    pelts.

    J ᴀ ꜱ ᴍ ɪ ɴ ᴇ
    Thera knows Jasmine by association only. Jasmine is
    McCoy's daughter, and Thera has only seen her once.
    Despite the scarcity of their interaction, Thera respects
    her for similarly upholding her father's vow of silence,
    and they get along well, if not fully.

    general trivia
    •One of her token phrases is "Your point?"
    •She speaks quickly when she's annoyed.
    •She has a bit of a flair for the dramatic,
    oftentimes without realizing.
    •She has an ear-twitching "tick" that is set
    off when she's nervous or anxious about
    something.
    •She adores animals of all kind. It's an odd
    thing to see her stoop to pet a cat when
    moments before she had snapped
    furiously at a mere stranger.

    her task
    Her eternal task is to collect the pieces of her flame.
    She doesn't know its name or why it's even in pieces,
    but all her senses and insticts tell her that she's bound
    to it irreversibly, and she has no choice but to seek its
    pieces.
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Pᴇʀꜱᴏɴᴀʟɪᴛʏ;
    Thera is a hardened character. As a youngster she was
    open with her emotions, wearing her heart on her
    sleeve; now as an adult she has turned to much more
    introverted tendencies, partially due to the necessity
    of secrecy. She maintains up a cold exterior and a
    straight face, and her typical at rest stance contains
    palpable hostility. On a daily basis, she's at worst
    volatile and at best mildly sociable.

    Traveling alone for decades on end has worn down
    her social tolerance down to a hair's width. If you
    don't understand her the first time, she doesn't explain
    it again. She's impatient, snappish, and often very rude
    to anybody who approaches her, seeking to end the
    contact as soon as possible so that she may get on with
    whatever her current task is. Whenever speech is
    necessary it's short, curt, to the point. Her humor is dry
    and most commonly at the expense of another, usually
    whoever is talking to her at the moment. She isn't afraid
    of stating exactly what she's thinking and often ends
    conversation on an offensive note purely by choice. It
    doesn't take much to get on her bad side; she's a walking
    lit fuse.
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Bᴀᴄᴋꜱᴛᴏʀʏ;
    Thera was born on a rainy day.

    Her egg hatched in the middle of the wet season, when flowers were opened and the trees began to look full again. She was born an only viscling to a pair of gritty, but kind viscets. They loved her wholly. Their home was a squat, sturdy building, one surrounded by farmland and nature.

    In those days there was nothing unusual about her; her single tail was tufted like any other viscet's. Her parents taught her how to help around the farm, and her daily duty was to draw water from their well for the family's needs.

    It was on one of their unlucky days that she had been sent to fetch the day's water an hour late. The day was looking to be a busy one, as the sky foretold impending rain and the animals were restless from the storm, making it harder to herd them than usual. Thera's thoughts were nothing but pleasant, however, as she loved the rain and was looking forward to listening to the raindrops drumming on their wooden roof.

    The first few droplets began to fall as she climbed the broad steps her parents had built for her so she could reach the well. She nudged the bucket off the ledge with one paw; it slipped over the worn stone and jerked unceremoniously in the air as the rope caught its weight.

    Grasping the crank, she began to lower the bucket, the wooden mechanism creaking familiarly as she did so. The steady pattern of the regular sound drew her into a peaceful rhythm, and her mind began to wander.

    Snap.

    She looked up in time to hear an echoed splash from deep in the well. A frayed piece of rope dangled uselessly in front of her.

    Her heart sank as she peered over the ledge. She'd have to go through their underground tunnels, the ones that they only used to repair the well. She could reach through the highest hole and grab the bucket from there.

    The trip to the entrance was only a few hundred feet. Stepping inside, she shivered at the cold draft that met her fur, eyes darting nervously about the dank stone walls. She never did like the tunnels.

    The only thing that truly worried her, however, was the tiny underground stream that fed into the well. To cross it she had to jump from platform to platform, and two of them were separated by a seemingly random hole. The hole was black as pitch, with no natural lighting in the tunnels, and she hated having to pass it by so closely.

    Thusly her heart leaped when her paw slipped as she leaped off the first ledge. Her torso slammed heavily onto the corner of the second ledge, and her lower half smacked awkwardly into the wall of the ledge. Her strength wasn't enough to hold herself through the pain, and she slipped into the darkness with nary a sound.

    She struck a gravelly slope in moments. The slide lasted only moments, but in her terror it seemed like hours. Her limbs flailed wildly as she struggled for control, and when she finally came to a stop she was frozen in shock and fear.

    The first thing she noticed was there was light. It was a warm glow emanating from the center of the cavern she had fallen into, and through blinking blearily she could make out the hazy form of some sort of stone pedestal with a bright ball of wafting light hovering above its center.

    After pushing to her feet, she approached the pedestal slowly, every instinct in her telling her to come closer. The light was a floating... flame. Its shape remained oddly stagnant, and small tongues of flame flickered off of its edges.

    She should never have touched it. The moment she did an unimaginable pain rendered her petrified. Images she didn't, couldn't recognize flitted through her head, and the outer silence was deafening as she felt her equilibrium begin to shift.

    When her vision returned she was no longer a juvenile. She staggered, her new form forcing her to adjust to its weight and power. Whispers were echoing in her head, whispers of an eternal undertaking and immortality. She felt the tails swirling behind her and knew at once that her life had just been shattered.

    Her first steps out into the rain were wobbly and feeble. She stared down at her home from atop the grassy rise, the thin dirt trail winding down to where he parents' chimney was smoking. She knew from what she had already heard that she would never be allowed to see them again.

    Turning away from her home, she sucked in a deep breath and began to walk.

    She never looked back again.
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Re: Halloween Viscet #1040 - The Guardian Rises

Postby Mint Chip » Wed Nov 16, 2016 2:42 pm

This is officially closed for judging;

honestly guys I had considered giving an extension to this contest from the beginning but this morning when I checked through the forms for what qualified there was only about 4 forms roughly that even qualified. so I reconsidered it because there wasn't enough to warrant extending it, however if there been 6-7 qualifying forms at the time in which I checked and finally decided I would have extended this between 2-5 days more. so that's something to think on.

anyhow I will begin the judging process and likely there'll be HMs and a potential RU given (tho remember RUs cannot be legendary unfortunately). this will likely take me a few days so be patient and bear with me while I work through it.
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Re: Halloween Viscet #1040 - The Guardian Rises

Postby Hail. » Wed Nov 16, 2016 2:56 pm

Ah! Good luck everyone, all of your forums are so amazing! c:
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Re: Halloween Viscet #1040 - The Guardian Rises

Postby LucidDreary » Wed Nov 16, 2016 2:58 pm

This is going to be a tough comp!
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& Good luck, Mint! I have no idea how I'd judge this, omg 0v0
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Re: Halloween Viscet #1040 - The Guardian Rises

Postby Vixen Luo » Wed Nov 16, 2016 3:03 pm

    yikes that's a lot of surprise forms

    regardless, this was a p stressful comp even though i wasn't trying for this guy haha; the tension is crazy!! good luck to those trying out! c:
    please stop asking me to give you my viscets. thank you!
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Re: Halloween Viscet #1040 - The Guardian Rises

Postby lex » Wed Nov 16, 2016 3:03 pm

Good luck everyone! This is one of the most fun competitions I've had in a while. <3
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Re: Halloween Viscet #1040 - The Guardian Rises

Postby Corvuss » Wed Nov 16, 2016 3:09 pm

Good luck everyone~ I think I'm disqualified, but even if I'm not I know that personality inst getting me anywhere ^^;
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Re: Halloween Viscet #1040 - The Guardian Rises

Postby T h e M a r t i a n » Wed Nov 16, 2016 3:29 pm

the best of luck to everyone. Some great forms and ideas out there. This was an interesting competition, and a lot of fun.
And, best of luck to you Mint. Take all the time you need. X3


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Re: Halloween Viscet #1040 - The Guardian Rises

Postby grifforik » Wed Nov 16, 2016 4:42 pm

G'luck guys! This is a tough comp :)
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Re: Halloween Viscet #1040 - The Guardian Rises

Postby magpiemochi. » Thu Nov 17, 2016 1:11 pm

marking to see the winner c:
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