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haemon --
I absolutely loved the creativity of the life goal -- especially with the fact that it involves the fact that they had no element! ;w;
WolfwithWings38 --
I quite liked the quote, and the life goal was nice as well! I especially enjoyed the emphasis on the fact that an individual alone counts towards changing the world.
SmileChild --
The overall layout of the form was very nicely put together, and I really REALLY loved how he was associated with a dandelion & the lil' nickname he'd been given by his friend omg ;v;; <33
♠Trollish♠ --
ahhhh I really loved the character development in your form, and how the GG reacted to the restrictions his parents had given him!! qvq I enjoyed the origin of the GG's life goal very much, too.
iBrevity --
Your form was very beautifully worded, and really explained to me the life goal in depth. The bit of personality that you've included in the life goal was a nice addition as well! The goal certainly went along nicely with the GG's personality, and I absolutely adored the vivid examples of nature that the GG would admire. quq
viixen --
Ahhhhh I really loved the effort in your form!! The life goal really reflected upon the GG's personality, and the relationship between the gator and Elswood was quite nice. I enjoyed reading through your form as well - it was nicely organized and I could definitely picture the GG being salty towards "dumber" individuals |''D
If you had won a RU, you are free to suggest ONE color you'd like me to work around or request copper instead!
Okay, honestly, I was very torn between viixen's and your form (and took me quite a bit of time to decide on that alone tbh), but in the end, I really felt the depth of your form a bit more. ;o; Your form was very well written, despite its short length (which I find quite admirable!), and I really could see a developed personality in the way you've written the GG's life goal. It isn't that alone, however -- I really REALLY loved the vividness of the description behind the life goal, as it really allowed me to feel like the individuals that are missing the 'wonder' of fairytales and fantasies are really missing the most significant elements of their childhood.
Please take good care of Apollo!!






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