[Strudel]

Owner: Mokastar712
Name: Erato
Greek mythology; the muse of lyric poetry
Gender: Female

Alright, so I know some of the other artists have been making simple viscets, but I wanted to release one too.
I really like how this one turned out.
Anyhow, this will be a simple contest.

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[b][u]Username[/u][/b]:
[b][u]Viscet Name[/u][/b]:
[b][u]Viscet Gender[/u][/b]:
[b][u]Haiku[/u][/b]:

-No extras
-Only up to two haiku are allowed per form (only one is required)
-If you were not the one to write it, please cite that.
-I'd like it to describe your feelings toward this viscet, this viscet's feeling toward something/someone/ect, or for it to be about something this viscet reminds you of.
-You may, in parenthesis or small text, state your reasoning for using/writing a certain haiku if you think it is unclear.
-If you have any questions, feel free to ask~

End 2/4/16

For those that do not know, haiku is a form of poetry. It is simple, consists of three lines. Each line has a certain amount of syllables. The first line has five, the second has seven, and the third has five again. Picking simple concepts makes it easier.

I wish good fortune
To all of you who enter
Have fun and good luck!

That totally had the right amount of syllables but was a horrible example lol

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[doglover947]

Username: doglover947
Viscet Name: Hunter
Viscet Gender: male
Haiku: wip

[Razors]

Username: Razors
Viscet Name: Evergreen
Viscet Gender: Female
Haiku:
1) (by me)
Child of the forest
Virtuous and true to me
Come home and be free.

2) (by me)

Your eyes remind me
Of a forest so lovely
I can't help but smile at you.

[dox.]

Username: мιкαєℓα нуαкυуα
Viscet Name: Fuego
Viscet Gender: Male
Haiku:
The voice of the wind
Whispers quietly to me
Telling me to run.

Racing through the woods
I grin as I run away
From all of my fear.
he doesn't want to be where he is so he runs, only yo be dragged back.

[Xelinator]

Username:
Xelinator.
Viscet Name:
Alec.
Viscet Gender:
Male.
Haiku:
Sunlight-bathed forest
Leaves tremble in the soft breeze
Birds call in the wind.
Haiku:
Time slowly runs out
A smile makes it last longer
May happiness last.

[ShadyBro]

Username: ShadyBro
Viscet Name: Indiana
Viscet Gender: DMAB Genderfluid

"In The Outside World
Where The Sun Always Shines Bright
The Rain Stings My Pelt"
________________

"Whether It Is Fate
Or This Petulance In Me
I Am Simply Cursed"

(Indiana is cursed with a bout of constant
bad luck, making him a very pessimistic and
sarcastic Viscet.)

[Fox,]

Username:

Fox,

Viscet Name:

Bean - reminded me of a coffee bean, with the gorgeous colors

Viscet Gender:

Female - Straight

Haiku:

colors of coffee,
always wanting to have fun,
sometimes she is cray.
[she's always fun, but can get out of hand sometimes]


bean is very kind,
loving, gentle, and funny,
life of the party.
[one of the nicest viscets you'll ever know]

[Sullivan Maurus]

Username: Amxen no.XV
Viscet Name: Defrosted
Viscet Gender: Male
Haiku:
(Reminds me of chocolate, so...)
Chocolate tasty
So delightful and so sweet
And my only weakness
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(Game grumps style haiku, not a serious one.)
This Viscet is sweet
Just like the sweet chocolate
Its snowing on mt. Fuji
(They end every hiaku with 'its snowing on mt. Fuji'.)

[Lillybear]

Chocolate brown locks,
Flow down his majestic self,
Will he be my first?

[My feelings towards him.]

Username: Lillybear
Viscet Name: Tyler
Viscet Gender: Male

'Tis another day,
My sun is shining above,
Showing us her love.

[His feelings towards life and the sun.]

[Edited because I forget to mention that I made both of these.]

[mokastar712]

Username: Mokastar712

Viscet Name: Erato
Greek mythology; the muse of lyric poetry

Viscet Gender: Female

Haiku:

If the sun dies now
You'll always be there for me
A smile on your face
{Erato's very reliable and has never betrayed anyone. She's also an optimist, no matter what happens}

A flame burns inside
Brightening up the whole room
Warmth glows on her pelt
{She's kind and brings a warm atmosphere wherever she goes}