Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby groenii » Thu Mar 12, 2015 6:55 pm

NOTE: Oshi has an accent, but I’ve put spaces in between letters that would normally be words so they can easily be counted as such.

Username:

Groenii

Name:

Oshi - comes from oshizushi, which is a style of making sushi by pressing rice into a block and putting toppings on the rice.

Gender:

female

Sexuality & Them [first person]:

Huhn? My sexuality? What’s it ta’ you? Well if ya want ta know that bad I guess I ’ll tell ya. I like gals mostly an’ others rarely, homoflexible’s what it’s called I think. If ya dun’ like that, yer ’d better shut yer mouth ‘aight? I’ve met some nasty people before an’ I decided that people like that can get a meet n greet with my fists! I dun’ easily settle with one person, there ’re many fish in ta sea ‘fter all, but I may settle down if I meet ta right one fer me. Howeva I don’ like all those Barbie gals, or anyone like that. most of my mates ’re dudes, since I've got more in common with 'em than with gals.
[126, 26 from extra]

Describe their Bedroom [third person]:

The door opens to reveal a big room with mint- and cream coloured walls. At the back a judogi with a brown belt is laid neatly out over a chair, in preparation for practice, next to an unmade bed covered in clothes and party CD’s. The walls are covered in posters of 80s films, soap-opera actors and a quote “The world is like a box of chocolates”. In front of the room, near a window, stands a desk that holds a pile of judobooks and in another corner stands a ratcage with two rats and the nameplates Forrest and Bubba plastered on it.
[103 words, 3 from extra]

Conversation [script]:

[At the mall]:
Mother [looking]: “Oshi, d’ you have a date fer the schoolparty ‘lready?”
Oshi [annoyed]: “Ma! Seriously I don' need a date fer a party. I'm fine on my own!”
Mother [relenting]: ‘Kay dear, if ye say so. But ye’ll still need clothes.
Oshi [nagging]: “aah really? C’n I not go in ma own clothes? I don' like fancy clothes, ya know that.
Mother [decisive]: “No! lookin’ good ‘s important! Ya gotta make a good impression!”
Oshi: [angry] “Argg! Why c'n ya never let me do what I want? What kind of impression do I make if I'm not me? A fake one that's what!”
Mother [angry] "Fine be stubborn"
Oshi [remorseful] "Ah I'm sorry ma, I'll wear that vest you saw 'kay?"
Mother [smiling] "Ooh yea let's get that!"
[123 words, 23 from extra]


About the Plushie [second person poem]:


You found them years ago.
In the rain you both sat, side by side.
Wet plush against wet fur.
Alone together.

Being alone is frightening, isn’t it?
Oh? Your family returned, you’re no longer alone.
But they are.
Turning back, you claim a friend.
Never to be left alone again.
[52, 2 from extra]

Hobby [third person]:

“I’ll be back!” “hahahaha go get ‘em Schwarzenegger” Oshi rejoiced.
It was Saturday night and for once she wasn’t at some party somewhere. Instead, she had opted to bring popcorn and watch some action and horror films, a hobby she has had for a long time.
[50 words]

How they show Affection [third person]:
(Melinda is my plumerian)

Oshi sees Melinda in the street
Oshi: [energetically throws paw around Melinda from behind] "Eey Gal! Long time no see, how 're ya doing?
Melinda: "HUH? Oh it's you Oshi! I’m fine. You?
Oshi: "I'm fine, I'm fine. Listen up! I heard that one dude ya spoke of is goin' ta give a concert an' lil' ol' me happened to get two tickets. Whaddya say? Wanna go?"
Melinda: "Huh really? I said it once and you remembered? Sure I'd love to go!"
[82 words, 32 from extra]

One Quirk [first person]:

Every time somethin’ bad happens in my life I go through a ritual. I’ve been compared to sushi so I make sushi that looks like me. The piece ‘ve sushi represents sad or embarrassed me. When I eat ta sushi I eat ta bad memories an' I’ll be a new me.
[51 words, 1 from extra]

Breaking Point [second person]:

You run around frantically through the mass of people, unfamiliar faces all around you.
You try to find the path home; to find someone you know.
Your fear suffocates you more and more.
“Aarg!”
With a scream you wake up, trembling heavily.
You don’t want to be alone, you don’t want to be lost
Loneliness is what you want to avoid at any cost
[64 words, 16 from extra]

Childhood [first person narrative]:

I've done many things but what really stood out was my first judo lesson.
I remember silently looking around at the children, all boys, sitting in front of me.
“Hello children, from today on a new student will join us. Say hello Oshi.”
“Hiya! Th’ name’s Oshi, nice to meet y’all!” I said.
Ma mum ’d decided that I lacked manners an' discipline so she made me join a judo club to learn that, but these boys looked like pushovers an' bratty me wasn't impressed.
“Oh a girl? Don’ worry, we won’t hurt you.” One kid said.
“Say what?!” I yelled as I pounced at him, beating him on the mat. "Jus' try saying that again ya weakling!"
“That’s enough! five laps around the dojo, both of you!” the teacher said angrily. I didn't make even two laps, but the boys never taunted me again.
[145 words, 45 from extra]

Irritation [first person poem]:

On and on it goes
It prevents you from sleeping like a log
Whether it’s an alarm or a snore
They’re all equally hard to ignore
I’d rather lie on a hard bed
Than deal with crickets after sunset
No what makes my gears grind
Is sound during the night
[50/50 words]

Goals for the Future [third person]:

Osha is a rather rough and active plumerian, but she is also kind. Her dream is to be a social worker who works with difficult children and helps them through sports such as volleyball or soccer. Through these sports, children not only get rid of excess energy, they also learn about teamwork and friendship, both things Oshi cherishes.
[58 words, 8 from extra]

Extra #1: [written only, 150 word limit]

[26 to sexuality & them
23 to conversation
2 to plushie
32 to how they show affection
1 to quirk
3 to room
45 to childhood
8 to goals]
[143 words]

Extra #2: [1 art piece]

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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby dinkleberg » Thu Mar 12, 2015 7:16 pm

    Username: alter_ego
    Name: Wasabi -common sushi topping-
    Gender: [just the gender, no explanations]
    Sexuality & Them: demiromantic asexual. Wasabi has only ever liked one person, and she was his best friend. it lasted for years, and after getting over her he has not liked anyone since. Wasabi is a little afraid of dating because of the pain of breaking up and the fact that unmarried couples can just end their relationships.
    Describe their Bedroom: you enter a room, with a plain wooden door. on the door, written in children's ABC letters says 'Wasabi'. the letters are pretty old and look out of place, along with the ranom scattered blue-tac. pushing open the door, you look around. the floor is carpeted with white, and the walls are light blue. for some reason there is a fan on the floor, which is so low it only cools your legs. scattered on the floor, half-opened are many, many comics portraying bright colours and angry characters, with big words in an unfamiliar language. japanese? looking up, there is a massive hammock near the ceiling, piled high with blankets. the ladder creaks and a face appears from the top. 'aye aye!! you gotta be the one who wants to look 'round! well, here we are. my humble abode.'
    one question remains: where to?
    Conversation: [between them and someone or something else. try to show character through this! 100 word limit]
    About the Plushie: [what's with the plushie? describe it, explain its background, give it a name, whatever! 50 word limit]
    Hobby: [describe ONE hobby they have. 50 word limit]
    How they show Affection: [describe or show how the character acts when they care about another. 50 word limit]
    One Quirk: [look at and define ONE aspect of their personality/behavior that is uncommon. 50 word limit]
    Breaking Point: [describe what it would take to break the character. what scenerio would they be unable to bounce back from? 50 word limit]
    Childhood: [write one scene from their childhood using first person. 100 word limit.]
    Irritation: [describe one thing that the character cannot stand. 50 word limit.]
    Goals for the Future: [describe one thing the character wishes to achieve in the future! 50 word limit.]
    Extra #1: [written only, 150 word limit]
    Extra #2: [anything you want- Limits: written-200 words, art-1 piece, other-PM syra]




you enter a room, with a plain wooden door. on the door, written in children's ABC letters says 'Wasabi'. the letters are pretty old and look out of place, along with the ranom scattered blue-tac. pushing open the door, you look around. the floor is carpeted with white, and the walls are light blue. for some reason there is a fan on the floor, which is so low it only cools your legs. scattered on the floor, half-opened are many, many comics portraying bright colours and angry characters, with big words in an unfamiliar language. japanese? looking up, there is a massive hammock near the ceiling, piled high with blankets. the ladder creaks and a face appears from the top. 'aye aye!! you gotta be the one who wants to look 'round! well, here we are. my humble abode.'
one question remains: where to?


=room pixel here=

[url]hammock and skylight[/url]

[url]comics and fan[/url]

[url]desk area with diary[/url]

[url]computer and tablet[/url]

[url]coffee table and old couch[/url]

[url]beanbags[/url]
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Sally - The Crazy Sushi Plumie.

Postby wandzie. » Thu Mar 12, 2015 7:25 pm

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Name: I decided on Salmon, a pink fish sometimes inside Sushi c: She goes by Sally^^
Gender: Female.
Sexuality & Them: Sally does not know her true sexuality. Sure, she likes males and females, she loves everyone, but doesn't really love Love. Love is patient, Love is Kind. That's all she believes in. With her job and her passion for other things, love isn't for her, so she has so preference. {50 words}
About the Plushie: Octopoctopus. That's the name Sally gave the little guy when she was just a baby. She had always treated Plushies, but Octo was her most treasured. They did everything together, and still do. {33 words}
Hobby: "My hobby is of course.. Sushi making! Well, I own a Sushi Bar on the beach, and all the hungry people read the menue, order something and I freshly make it. It's great, me and Octo run it together and always have." {42 words}
How they show Affection: Sally shows affection in her own way. Being an over affectionate character, her affection showing ways are kind of crazy. She'll brush her face on you like a cat or smile and giggle, blushing crazily. Affectionate Plumies are great, but Sally sure is a crazy one. {46 words}

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Childhood: She did not live with her family. No one for sure knows why, but she was in an orphanage ever since she was born. It's not a sad story though. Sally had Octo to live with, he was with her when she was left there. No one did adopt her though, she was too different, even though she just needed a chance. It never did get her down because well, if you had never had a family, you would never know what it was like, therefore, you could not miss it. {91 words}

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One Quirk: Being the quirky-est Plumie in the world, it's hard to choose just one! You could highlight how Sally is always talking to her Plushies. At the Sushi Bar, in the house, walking up and down the beach... It's sort of funny yet very strange to watch.
{46 words}
Breaking Point: Poor Sally does have a breaking point. No matter how much she chooses to push it away. Because of not having a family, Sally always collected Plushies to keep her company. She knows they cannot talk, deep down. It's weird how the sweetest of people can have gone through such things. {50 words}
Irritation: "The one thing that irratates me is... Gr! When people don't use manners at the Sushi Bar. I make them something, I try my absolute hardest, but they don't care! They just eat, pay, and go. Why don't they talk to me and Octo? Or talk at all!!"
{48 words}
Goals for the future: Of course, Sally's goals for the future are simple. She hopes that her already fairly well known Sushi Bar will become.. Well, world famous. She is very passionate about making the actual Sushi and it does taste spectacular. A side hope, Sally wishes she could collect the most amount of Plushies.{50 words}
Describe their Bedroom: As you take a step inside,
What wonders will unfold?
Of course, this is Sally's bedroom but,
What it will be like is untold.
You see paintings on the wall,
Of pretty blossom trees.
Sushi posters and cook books,
And a small Plushie Bee.
A bed with soft cuddly pillows,
Head to toe in Plushies.
The wind chime twinkles that hangs from the window,
Beside the dream catcher.
This is Sally's bedroom,
But can your one match her?
{76 words}

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Conversation: This conversation is between Sally and her customer, let's just say it wasn't Octo who ate the sushi...
Sally; "Octopoctopus! How many times have I told you! You must not eat the Sushi! The sushi is for this lovely customer here."
Customer; "Ugh, ugh, I can assure you, it's OK, really, I'll just... Just order something else!" *Flusters*
Sally; "No it's OK my sweetie. Octo eats up orders all the time don't you boy?" *Pats head* "I'll make yours again and THIS TIME Octi WILL NOT eat it!" *Rolls eyes*
Customer; "AH, ugh, OK..." *Stares*
Sally; *Rappidly makes some more sushi* "There you go! See, no problems ever occur in this Bar, I assure you!" *Smiles* {98 words}

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The Sushi Bar
"Ahaha!" The wind whipped at Salmon's fur as she dashed along the beach. It was just dawn, and the Orange Sky lit up the sea, turning it red-y orange. The sand flew up behind her paws as she galloped down the cove, ocassionaly stepping on a shell then screeching in pain. Octo clung to her, hanging from her mouth. Today was like any other. Sally would dash down with Octo and open the bar. They'd begin to cook for the customers who sat around the edge of it, watching, hypnotised at the sight. Sally loved her job, just like she loved everything and everyone... With a bit too much over-load.
She reached her destination and jumped into the middle of the Tiki Bar styled square. Sally began to make her famous Sushi, ocassionaly jibbering to Octopoctopus. She grinned, a lop sided grin. "I see the first customers of the day!"
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Art by me c; Thank you very much for reading!
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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby 10ke » Thu Mar 12, 2015 7:34 pm

Username:
osprey;;
Name:
Tazuna
A shortened version of Tazuna sushi (Rainbow roll). I thought I would choose this because I could see her being obsessed with cute and puffy things, so rainbow unicorns came to mind.
Gender:
Female
Sexuality & Them:
Pansexual
Personally, I adore basically anyone and anything! Though it can be a little awkward, I attempt to share the love with everyone <3
Describe their Bedroom:
Her bedroom is scarily perfect... For who she is, anyway. Everthing is perfectly white, no stains anywhere. She's got a kinda messy personality, so her room would be messy? Nope! She has a few flowery decals stuck here and there, and a sushi beanbag, but that's about it.
Conversation: [between them and someone or something else. try to show character through this! 100 word limit]
About the Plushie: [what's with the plushie? describe it, explain its background, give it a name, whatever! 50 word limit]
Hobby: [describe ONE hobby they have. 50 word limit]
How they show Affection: [describe or show how the character acts when they care about another. 50 word limit]
One Quirk: [look at and define ONE aspect of their personality/behavior that is uncommon. 50 word limit]
Breaking Point: [describe what it would take to break the character. what scenerio would they be unable to bounce back from? 50 word limit]
Childhood: [write one scene from their childhood using first person. 100 word limit.]
Irritation: [describe one thing that the character cannot stand. 50 word limit.]
Goals for the Future: [describe one thing the character wishes to achieve in the future! 50 word limit.]
Extra #1: [written only, 150 word limit]
Extra #2: [anything you want- Limits: written-200 words, art-1 piece, other-PM syra]

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Postby hypnowave » Thu Mar 12, 2015 8:16 pm

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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby dandyLION » Thu Mar 12, 2015 8:26 pm

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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby wickedbvnes » Thu Mar 12, 2015 8:32 pm

Username: Vintage.
Name: Vinegar or Vinny, because vinegar is used in the rice of sushi.
Gender: Female
Sexuality & Them:
Vinny: (takes a deep breath, looking across room) My sexuality has affected my life a lot. (shakes head)
Vinny: I, I've always been.. rather afraid of judgement, and perhaps even considered conceited and popularity-driven by many. (shakily exhales, tucking a loose strand of her behind her ear)
Vinny: (nervously paces, head towards floor) Discovering I was... Well, lesbian, was a very scary, but wonderful experience of self discovery, and finding out who my true friends really were.
Vinny: (shakes head again, wistfully) I wish I had of realized sooner. Realized that.. well, that not everything relies on how popular you are.

Describe their Bedroom:
Simplicity, driven by the desire to be indifferent,
no posters litter the wall, the pink wall paper sufficient,
her bedspread, checkered and perfectly sleek,
her bedroom may even be described as... bleak.
A fish tank glitters against the window,
the fish staring down to the busy streets below.
The only sense of disarray comes from the desk,
tucked away.
It sits in a corner, hidden from view,
it holds flowers, roses, beautiful flora,
for Vinny truly holds dear,
those things that are near to her heart.
The simple things, the beautiful things,
like a feather, fallen from bird's wings.
These too sit on her desk,
among the mess.
Papers strewn, thrown carelessly,
assignments written listlessly.
Petals drift onto the desk,
pink and rosy.


Conversation:
between her and her plushie about people, do not steal/
About the Plushie: [what's with the plushie? describe it, explain its background, give it a name, whatever! 50 word limit]
Hobby:
Vinny is addicted to organization.
How they show Affection: [describe or show how the character acts when they care about another. 50 word limit]
One Quirk: [look at and define ONE aspect of their personality/behavior that is uncommon. 50 word limit]
Breaking Point: [describe what it would take to break the character. what scenerio would they be unable to bounce back from? 50 word limit]
Childhood: [write one scene from their childhood using first person. 100 word limit.]
Irritation: [describe one thing that the character cannot stand. 50 word limit.]
Goals for the Future: [describe one thing the character wishes to achieve in the future! 50 word limit.]
Extra #1: [written only, 150 word limit]
Extra #2: [anything you want- Limits: written-200 words, art-1 piece, other-PM syra]
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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby Evils » Thu Mar 12, 2015 9:14 pm

Username: Evils
Name: Shirasu Inarizushi
Shirasu;; Baby Sardines *rolled into sushi roll*
Inarizushi;; A fried tofu pouch filled with sushi rice.
Gender: Male
Sexuality & Them:
Oh. This question. Well, I find it actually pretty hard to live with my sexuality at times. Lots of men ask me if I am single, I say I am, then they ask me on dates. I however feel odd about it because I am not interested in men, no matter how cute or handsome they may be. I am heterosexual, I like to date women. My life has been affected by this drastically because when I deny going on a date with a man and explain to them I am straight, they take it as an insult. Which then I feel awful.
Describe their Bedroom:
You walk up to a larger than normal door, what is this? A fish tank built into the door? You notice two Chinese Hi Fin Banded Sharks swimming in the large glass frame. Feeling a bit curious, you open the door only to be greeted by glass floor, underneath fish swim gracefully, reflecting light from their bodies brighten up the room with swimming rainbow along the walls and ceiling.
Looking around you spot a large water bed, you walk over carefully... a shark! You see a shark swimming in the glass bed frame something you think as an obvious hazard. A glint of light catches your eye and you look towards it. Fish bowls hang from the ceiling above you, strung up like lanterns the colorful fish gliding swiftly in their glass chambers. You glance down at a book shelf, it is full of fish care guides, horror stories, romance novels, and small fish trinkets; Them being little clown fish and butterfly fish of all sorts. You turn to leave only to be stopped in a jerk of fear. Half a stuffed bull-shark glares at you with cold, dead eyes as it hovers menacingly mantled above the door frame, a harpoon beneath it. You leave in a rush to be safe. [try to show character through this! 100 word limit]
Conversation:
Young Girl;; -waves- Sir! Would you like to buy some sushi?
Shirasu;; -Walks over and looks at selections- Hmm.. Maybe Sake Nigiri. Yes. I will take that.
Young Girl;; -wraps carefully, puts in bag- Here you go sir! That will b- -drops bag-
Shirasu;; -Picks up bag, calming his temper- Its alright, the sushi is fine. How much will it be.
Young Gil;; fourteen forty. But you can take it, I did drop it anyways..
Shirasu;; -Starts angrily, but softens- No. I will pay, you need the money. -Hands over fourteen forty-
Young Girl;; -surprised- A-Thank you! -takes coins- Have a good day sir!
Shirasu;; -nods respectfully- Same to you. be careful next time. -Leaves stand-
[between them and someone or something else. try to show character through this! 100 word limit]
About the Plushie: [what's with the plushie? describe it, explain its background, give it a name, whatever! 50 word limit]
Hobby: [describe ONE hobby they have. 50 word limit]
How they show Affection:
He often will give a tip, be polite, and on occasion a nice smile and/or a hug. If he seems to really like someone, he will try to flirt with them, he will become overprotective of them and may even write them a story.
One Quirk:
[look at and define ONE aspect of their personality/behavior that is uncommon. 50 word limit]
Breaking Point: [describe what it would take to break the character. what scenerio would they be unable to bounce back from? 50 word limit]
Childhood: [write one scene from their childhood using first person. 100 word limit.]
Irritation: [describe one thing that the character cannot stand. 50 word limit.]
Goals for the Future: [describe one thing the character wishes to achieve in the future! 50 word limit.]
Extra #1: [written only, 150 word limit]
Extra #2: [anything you want- Limits: written-200 words, art-1 piece, other-PM syra]
huge wip!
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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby AustrianAce » Thu Mar 12, 2015 10:17 pm

Username: Austriagirl

Name: Maki Tamari

Gender: undecided
(Don't know where I'll put this yet, just jotting ideas down;; just because you look like something doesn't mean you have to like to eat it <-- vegetarian)

Sexuality & Them: [identify their sexuality, then describe how it has affected their life or what people it has led them to be interested in or have relationships with. 100 word limit.]

Describe their Bedroom: [try to show character through this! 100 word limit]

Conversation: [between them and someone or something else. try to show character through this! 100 word limit]

About the Plushie: [what's with the plushie? describe it, explain its background, give it a name, whatever! 50 word limit]

Hobby: [describe ONE hobby they have. 50 word limit]

How they show Affection: [describe or show how the character acts when they care about another. 50 word limit]

One Quirk: [look at and define ONE aspect of their personality/behavior that is uncommon. 50 word limit]

Breaking Point: [describe what it would take to break the character. what scenerio would they be unable to bounce back from? 50 word limit]

Childhood: [write one scene from their childhood using first person. 100 word limit.]

Irritation: [describe one thing that the character cannot stand. 50 word limit.]

Goals for the Future: [describe one thing the character wishes to achieve in the future! 50 word limit.]

Extra #1: [written only, 150 word limit]

Extra #2: [anything you want- Limits: written-200 words, art-1 piece, other-PM syra]
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Re: Plumerian #490 {Sushi Plumerian}

Postby M00N » Thu Mar 12, 2015 10:28 pm

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Username: M00N

Name: Tako Temaki
[Temaki is cone shaped
sushi, while Tako means
octopus, so octopus sushi]


Gender: Female

Sexuality & Them: Tako has questioned her sexuality through the years, especially when she was in middle school and an underclassman in high school, going between straight, bisexual, lesbian, and even asexual. However, by the time she graduated, she came to realize that she was in fact, a pansexual.

She doesn't have too much trouble with homophobia directed towards herself, but occasionally does have to deal with hateful people. Her biggest issue is mainly ignorant people, who don't seem to know what pansexuality is. ("You like cooking equipment?" is her favorite.) Sometimes, she'll call herself bisexual if she doesn't feel like explaining.
[99-3rd person]


Describe their Bedroom: You attempt to find your laptop, wherever it is.

It's probably under your desk, beside your stack of old newspapers and magazines that won't ever be read again... or not.

On top of your unmade bed is just your plushie and some old journals, and underneath is, well, you sure hope it's not under there with the decomposing apple and the rest of your garbage.

Your closet is an unlikely place as well, too many clothes and shoes to begin with.

For a moment you are distracted by your many electropop posters, but at last, you notice a shiny metal object under some YA books on your dresser.
[108, -8 from extra-2nd person]


Conversation: [Tako and boss at Frostie Freez]

[Begin scene: The two stand in the office of the restaurant]

Tako: "Sooo whatcha call me in for? :3c"
Boss: [Audible Sigh] "Temaki, look, you know I don't like having to do this, but I think you know what's coming next. You've been late three times just this week, and after what you did to that hamburger... I just have to--"
Tako: "Wait-- You can't be doing this, boss, look! You know I have to support myself on my own!! D:"
Boss: "I do know, and I have to as well. Get your stuff together, pronto."
Tako: "I can't do this, you don't understa--"
Boss: "No buts, you brought this on yourself."
[119, -19 from extra-play script]


About the Plushie: -Twelve years back, age eight-

I sit on the curb, outside the building that serves as a home to me, where I've lived for my entire life. Today is not so sad, the bus is coming, new kids, new things aboard.
The back opens, and kids fly to empty it, tearing apart the box of trinkets. Girls get dresses, boys: toy cars.

By the time I reach the box, two things remain: cotton balls, toy octopus. I take the latter.
[80, -20 from extra-First person]


Hobby:
Bag upon bag of groceries, lain across the table, some toppled on the floor casually, but at the counter, the focused chef prepares a feast.

If only the judges from "Master Chef" could see her now...

With a lightning-like movement of her hand, the entire row of fish is chopped, with another, so are the vegetables. Tonight, she'll dine like a queen.
[62, -12 from extra-Narrative format(?)]


How they show Affection: They said she gave "a hug too tightly," or maybe it was another unwanted smooch, either way, I think that one girl is abandoned again. God, she should really step off sometimes, girl needs to learn some boundaries. Yeah, I'm talking about the homeless Jap! Who else?
[47]


One Quirk: Sometimes, I just have the urge to dance! I'm not sure why but like, I just have to! Ever since I left the orphanage, life just seems so much happier! People look at me weird a lot of times, but honestly, they just aren't good enough for me if they're low enough to hate on something that doesn't even effect them!

[61, -11 from extra


Breaking Point: [describe what it would take to break the character. what scenerio would they be unable to bounce back from? 50 word limit]

Childhood: [write one scene from their childhood using first person. 100 word limit.]

Irritation: [describe one thing that the character cannot stand. 50 word limit.]

Goals for the Future: [describe one thing the character wishes to achieve in the future! 50 word limit.]

Extra #1: [written only, 150 word limit][-70 words from other prompts]

Extra #2: [anything you want- Limits: written-200 words, art-1 piece, other-PM syra]


Fun notes!!
This competition is going to be almost exclusively creative writing based
and consist of a series of prompts!

At least one must be done in third person, one in second person,
and one [besides the childhood scene] in first person!

At least one section must be answered in poetry form!

At least one section must be written like a script for a play!

At least one section must be written in narrative format.

Be sure to follow the directions in the form for each prompt!
All sections of the form must be done to qualify. (Including extras)
You may rearrange the elements to your heart's content.
Be careful to follow all the limits and expectations though!

Extras may be used to make any section longer,
but you MUST indicate that you used it in that section somehow.
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