[eleutheromania]

To win this boy, write a short story (max.500 words) about him as a pup. It can be about anything.

Username: Simonpet
Name: Escher
Gender: Keo/Male
Age: 5 years
Height: 16.0hh
Rarity: Rare
Markings: Reverse
Genotype: SS
Short Story: Escher was in the grass, playing with his friends. It was a lovely day, and the sun was out. Escher ran across the grass as one of his friends chased him. Soon though, he was caught and it was Escher's turn to be It. He looked around, and decided to target Ponti, one of his best friends. Ponti was slower, and so he'd be easier to catch. At least, that is what Escher thought. Ponti was an expert at dodging, as Escher soon learned, and though caught in the end, Ponti was almost impossible to catch. The day passed, and Escher and his friends continued to play. Only when the sun was almost gone did they stop and go home. "See you tomorrow!" Escher shouted to his friends. It had been a good day.

Edits: Allowed
Extras: Not allowed, this includes changing the setup of the form.
End Date: December 25th.

[Simonpet]

Username: Simonpet
Name: Escher
Gender: Keo/Male
Age: 5 years
Height: 16.0hh
Rarity: Rare
Markings: Reverse
Genotype: SS
Short Story: Escher was in the grass, playing with his friends. It was a lovely day, and the sun was out. Escher ran across the grass as one of his friends chased him. Soon though, he was caught and it was Escher's turn to be It. He looked around, and decided to target Ponti, one of his best friends. Ponti was slower, and so he'd be easier to catch. At least, that is what Escher thought. Ponti was an expert at dodging, as Escher soon learned, and though caught in the end, Ponti was almost impossible to catch. The day passed, and Escher and his friends continued to play. Only when the sun was almost gone did they stop and go home. "See you tomorrow!" Escher shouted to his friends. It had been a good day.

Fixed it.

[Simonpet]

What I did is okay, right? I kept all of the components... But I just wanted to check: is my form okay?

[eleutheromania]

@simon; no. You changed the set up of the form so it won't count unless you keep the form the exact way it is when you copy it.

[VampireMessageNinja]

You know what? Can't resist, these eyes ^^

Username: VampireMessageNinja
Name: Millan (randomness, got books of Cesar Millan, the dog whisperer, for christmas)
Gender: Keo/Male
Age: 4 years
Height: 16.0hh
Rarity: Rare
Markings: Reverse
Genotype: SS
Short Story: Millan had been a very quiet pup. Not once he was caught doing something wrong. Whilst growing up, this changed. One day, he became so evil, so weird, that his adoptive parents (his real ones died early, with his father being abusive) left him to fight on his own. Since then, he has lived all alone and became what he is now: One of the most evil, twisted, angry Keakotas you will ever meet.

[Simonpet]

Could you please wait for my form to appear? I fixed it. Also, I will be on my iPod until summer, most likely, so I apologize for any inconveniences. My dad forgot to block me, so I will alert you if he remembers. Then, I'll be on my IPod 'till summer.

[eleutheromania]

Last day for entries

[eleutheromania]

Username: Simonpet
Name: Escher
Gender: Keo/Male
Age: 5 years
Height: 16.0hh
Rarity: Rare
Markings: Reverse
Genotype: SS
Short Story: Escher was in the grass, playing with his friends. It was a lovely day, and the sun was out. Escher ran across the grass as one of his friends chased him. Soon though, he was caught and it was Escher's turn to be It. He looked around, and decided to target Ponti, one of his best friends. Ponti was slower, and so he'd be easier to catch. At least, that is what Escher thought. Ponti was an expert at dodging, as Escher soon learned, and though caught in the end, Ponti was almost impossible to catch. The day passed, and Escher and his friends continued to play. Only when the sun was almost gone did they stop and go home. "See you tomorrow!" Escher shouted to his friends. It had been a good day.

'Grats

[Simonpet]

Username: Simonpet
Name: Escher
Gender: Keo/Male
Age: 5 years
Height: 16.0hh
Rarity: Rare
Markings: Reverse
Genotype: SS
Short Story: Escher was in the grass, playing with his friends. It was a lovely day, and the sun was out. Escher ran across the grass as one of his friends chased him. Soon though, he was caught and it was Escher's turn to be It. He looked around, and decided to target Ponti, one of his best friends. Ponti was slower, and so he'd be easier to catch. At least, that is what Escher thought. Ponti was an expert at dodging, as Escher soon learned, and though caught in the end, Ponti was almost impossible to catch. The day passed, and Escher and his friends continued to play. Only when the sun was almost gone did they stop and go home. "See you tomorrow!" Escher shouted to his friends. It had been a good day.

'Grats

Thank you so much! I'll take good care of him!