[koegami]

this is now closed

i will give all entrants exactly 10 minuets to add anything to their forms. after that i will close this and Zandom and i will judge

[koegami]

this is now closed for judging
winner will be up soon, gotta read through the forms and discuss with Zandom

[❌ DYNAMIGHT ❌]

squeee, I would say good luck to all but I think only
one other person even put up the relationships
so good luck to them as well and I'm sure you'll
take care of her if you turn out to be the lucky one
of us c:

❤️

[.starfish]

Good luck to all!
Even though there weren't that many forms
Whoever wins this babe is very lucky <3

[koegami]

winner has been determined.
i will post them later today once my tablet has internet.

[koegami]

i am happy to announce that Zandom and i have agreed on the winner of this Reniam Baby. but first, i want to provide feedback for each of the forms submitted. i am in no way trying to bash other's forms. telling people that their forms suck. I'm only trying to provide feedback of how i felt with the form. and how i believe the parents and bigger siblings would get along together.


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u s e r ● river styx
n a m e ● Cressida
g e n d e r ● female

the art was beautiful, and the theme and set-up was great, the name was beautiful and fitting as well. but there was no relationships. i couldn't get a feel of her character. honourable effort though.

Username:
sexy.vexy ;;

Name:
Wiett Faust
(pronounced Wyatt)

Gender:
Female

Relationship with Parents:
As a general rule of thumb Wiett likes to believe that
she has a rather positive relationship with her parents,
but I will let her tell you more about that.

Military? ;; she hopes to join and earn the
right to be honored like her fathers.

Sexuality ;; Pansexual with a preferance
to masculine types.

Favorite Color ;; Red

Favorite Season ;; Fall

Music ;; Electric/Dubstep and Southern
Gothic

Personality ;;

*Strict
*Serious to a point
*Protective
*Organized
*Helpful
*Dry humor

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”Wiett, how is your relationship with Reno?”

My eyebrows crinkle together just a bit at the question. Who is this person, why do they wish to know about my familial ties and bonds? ”Why is this of any importance?” I answered their question with one of my own, the slight annoyance with the questioning showing through. The only response I received was a silent staring, like they just expected me to continue even without my concerns being addressed. A battle of wills followed suit, me unwilling to just give up such sensitive information and them silently insisting I do. It was my will that broke first, as it always is. ”Fine. I like Reno, love him really as family is supposed to. We get along fantastically in my opinion, though I have this sneaking suspicion that my insistent questions about military life get on his nerves a bit more often than not. Intelligence seems to be a key genetic factor in this family and so we often have little chats about varying subjects. There’s not much else to us though. Little of my relationship with him is more than just obligation. Even with that being said it would ... pain me to see him dead.” I don’t offer them any more of an answer.
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”And the other one? The father by the name of William.”

It takes me a moment to gathering my thoughts on this one. There are so many things I have to say about my father that I can’t possibly describe it all so simply. ”William ... he ... means a lot to me. It’s hard to say exactly. In a way I pity him, but it goes deeper than that. Even though I may not be able to sit and converse with him as I would Reno I feel more at ease around him, like all the things he lacks that would make him normal to others only draw me to him, make me love him more. I know he can take care of himself and he already has Reno for this but I want to protect him. From himself and others. Don’t get me wrong, it’s in no way similar to how Reno feels for him. It’s like I want him to see just how amazing life can be if you learn to trust more than just one person. I hope that one day he’ll be able to be as much at ease with me as I am with him and he is with Reno.”

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Relationship with Siblings:

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”You have two siblings. Do you get along with Eskandar?”
What is with this person? Are they trying to uncover my deepest thoughts? I’m not that remarkable of a person, I just wish they would go away and leave me to my writing. As much as I would love to tell them to go away I figure that the quicker I answer their questions the quicker I can make them go away. ”Eskandar? Hmmmm ... He’s my brother so of course I am attached to him. He reminds me so much of William but he’s easier to get along with. I think out of all my family Eskandar is my favourite. I’ve caught him playing in dads’ uniforms before and I have to be completely honest, I want to join in on his games. He seems a bit shy but that’s alright, I don’t like the loud noises either and I’m always more than happy to stick up for him when those voices start going in his head. wip
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”And the last member of the family? Your sister Israel?”

*Annoyance
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Extras:

i really liked this form, you could really get a feel of the character. although with the lack of art and lack of description for the sister, Israel. i did like your form. i found the name interesting, and uncommon. something i believe that reno and william would like. what i really liked about the form is the fact of how reno seems to be the respected one of the family. and william is memorable. which i have seen throughout the forms. its great to see that flowing relationship. as well as an age that complys to the other siblings. because the older siblings are only a month older, and this baby is just a newborn.

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[b]Username;; ~Caramel~
Owner;; yes. Of three
Will you be active; Absolutely

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Shoot for the Moon
Even if you miss
youll land amongst the s t a r s

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Name; Moira
Meaning; Rebellion
Origin; Hebrew
Gender; female
Sexuality; staright
Crush; none
Age; 15
Birthday; October 27
Birth weight;
Birth length;
Hex codes;
Talking color;

Some legends are told

Some turn to dust or to gold

But you will remember me

Remember me for centuries

And just one mistake

Is all it will take.

We'll go down in history

Remember me for centuries

Remember me for centuries

Can you feel it?

Now it's coming back
we can steal it.

If we bridge this gap,

I can see you

Through the curtains
of the waterfall.

When I lost it,

Yeah you held my hand,

But I tossed it,

Didn't understand,

You were waiting,

As I dove into the waterfall.

So say Geronimo!

Moira is not the kind of girl you would expect. Coming from a military family she should be poised and proper and know to go by the rules and not to question things. If anything, she is the complete opposite of that. She is always messing around and trying to see how many rules she can break. She hates taking sides and fighting for one against the other and she likes being her own source of conscience. If you really got to know her she wouldn't be too bad and she'd be loyal and always have your back but to complete strangers or someone she doesn't like, she could turn on you in an instant if you do as much and simply say the wrong thing.

Moira doesn't like following the rules. She always tries to find a way around them or make up her own. She's not one to try not to get in trouble. If she gets in troubke she sees it as a compliment.

Moira is difficult to understand her thinking sometimes. She purposely tries to mess with someone's mind and try to confuse them. She also loves to play tricks on other pseudos and then hiding to watch them fall into a trap or trick of hers.

Moira is almost always doing something that involves moving around. She can't sit still for very long at all and has to be doing something. She likes being outside and able to run around in wide open areas. She especially likes being outside in the fall when the air is crisp but still warm.

Moira has a special way with words. She can easily confuse someone by mixing up sentences in different ways so that they have the same meaning but just are more confusing to the mind. She can easily get away with a multitude of things this way by making someone say what she wants them to say. She Is also very persuasive in the same way.

She sees herself as in a higher position than most of her family and friends. Mostly because of her way with words and her bad girl attitude. She feels that if she says something it is most likely to be followed than if someone else mentions something.

Moira doesn't get along with many pseudos but the ones she does she would always have their back. She would never leave someone behind if she had a chance to get away. She always keeps her promises and you would be able to trust her not to tell a secret if you don't want her to.

She doesn't like depending on other pseudos because of how easily she can be let down. She provides mostly for herself and rarely takes offers from others.

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~My father~

Moira loves her father to death. If he she respects and listens to him the most. If anyone else asks or tells her to do something she could very well just ignore them and make them annoyed by pretending they aren't there. If Reno told her to do something she would get it done. She looks up to him the most and wouldn't want to live without him.

~My other father~

Moira tries not to be too hard in William, for the most part. She doesn't want him going insane from all her tricks especially with his state of mind. Even with her personality she still loves all of her family and would hate to see any of the them driven away or to insanity, especially if she was the cause of it.

~My big brother~

Moira relationship with Eskandar is like that of his and Israel's. She doesn't see why he always wants to be the protected instead of the protector. She loves him but never shows it. She doesn't speak to him much and when she does it sometimes ends up in her snappy something at him. She does know that he's her brother but sometimes she isn't proud of that.

~My big sister~

Moira gets along pretty well with her sister. She respects her and her choices. She also likes to watch her annoy William. Moira us glad to have a brother and a sister to look up to but sometimes she can't look up to them. If they make bad choices or something that would have a bad influence she knows better than to follow that. Like Eskandar, Moira loves her sister with all her heart but would probably show it more to Israel than her brother.she likes being able to have a role model to look up to even in the worst of times.

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~My best rebellious friend~

Moira and Hecate get along very well. They have similar personalities and interests with help them to understand each other. Moira sees Katie as more of a sister than just a close friend.

~My best friends brother~

Ryker and Moira are almost complete opposites because he and his sister Hecate pretty much are opposites. She treats him almost like another brother though because she is so close to him.

~The devil himself~

Moira sees Spade as a peer but more as the "leader". She gets along with him not because of his evil personality but because they agree on many different things. She doesn't like his sister as much because of her good girl image. She likes Spade more because he is more like her and they get along well

Coding by SoulFireWolf

the coding was great but i wasnt looking for pretty forms. just to note, i myself had a personal issue with the overview perception. most military families are not stuck up and proper. not say they are rude and improper. but their not stuck up. I've had experiences with military families, and this seems off to me. something i myself cant connect with. the personality was very well developed. my concern is of how william and reno are going to take it. yes, certain aspects of it are correct. but others i feel uncomfortable with. i am in no way trying to tell how i want the personality done, i just want it for comparability purposes. i really liked how you chose reno as a respected figure, and william more memorable, as i had said before. i really like that. also, another issue Zandom and i agreed on was the fact of the age. this baby, again was born a month after the first pair. so they -the first pair- would only be about a month old. with your age of 15, it skips the whole childhood. where most of the connection starts. as humans eskandar is only about the age of your average toddler, so isn't israel. as a pseudo, their just newborns. eskandar and israel are a month and 7 days old. while this baby is just starting out. I'm not saying your age is wrong, but it contradicts the older siblings ages. off that note, i really did like the extras you placed. with friends and relationships. i didn't get a feel of their relationships much as i did her personality. and the name is uncommon as well, something i like. all in all, aside from my issues, i loved your form as well. and the art added too was cute.


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So Zandom and i have decided on a winner. the owner of the third Reniam baby, is no other than cryogenicgoddess
i was especially pleased with your form. and although none of the forms were complete, this one really fit in with the family. i love how the relationships connected and flowed throughout the form. and throughout the time i was looking through the progress of the forms, i had taken a liking to yours. so congrats on Wiett. that name is so fitting for her. uncommon, and yet fitting. I'm excited to see you around the forums, and talking with the family. we have a roleplay up between me and zandom about the children, so your welcomed to join in anytime your free. try to keep in contact with the Reniam family and let us know if you have any family-related questions. a warm welcome to the family and i hope to see you around!

thank you all for entering. gifting the art to the winner is common courtesy, but its not mandatory. and please, if you have any comments about my responses, pm me, don't post them here. congratulations and thank you's are acceptable here. but rude and disappointed comments are not. this makes the winner feel bad and the contest judges. and as a last note, my responses to your forms were not to be critizing, just my thoughts on the form. i am happy to explain a little more in-depth of my reasons. so pm me if you want an explanation.

thank you so much guys.
have a nice weekend.

[PerfectWorld]

congratulations c:

[❌ DYNAMIGHT ❌]

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oh my goodness, thank you so much Koi! (:
I feel so honored to have little Wiett and I'm
glad you enjoyed my form enough to think
that she should come home with me c: I will
certainly be jumping in on that RP here soon
because I think all the babes should be played
together c:

<3

[koegami]

.....
oh my goodness, thank you so much Koi! (:
I feel so honored to have little Wiett and I'm
glad you enjoyed my form enough to think
that she should come home with me c: I will
certainly be jumping in on that RP here soon
because I think all the babes should be played
together c:

<3

your welcome cry.
i do like that name. wiett. such a pretty name.

staz, could you add them to this if you havent already please? thank you so much.
and thabk you so much staz for making the third reniam baby.

[PerfectWorld]

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