Re: Plumerian #309;open

Postby Lady Sif » Thu Sep 11, 2014 7:35 am

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Her name comes from the Zapotec language and means I love you.

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Personality:
There are many ways to describe Nayeli, though it depends on who you ask. Some would call her a loner, and they would be somewhat right, she does prefer to have extended amounts of time to herself, but she also enjoys spending time with those that she cares about. Others might call her a show-off with the act she puts up about how she's the queen of the forest and how often she preens over her mismatched eyes and how beautiful they make her. You might even call her rude with the amount of sarcasm she uses, but if you really knew her you'd see deeper. Like how she's learned to dislike the company of other plumies, how she's scared of appearing weak and how insecure she really is about her eye.

Quirks
As one might guess, Nayeli is a bit of an odd one. Partly because she's lived out in the forest for so long, and partly because that's just who she is. Of all the odd things she does, these are the important ones:
Because of her blind eye, she moves her head side to side when walking, and she has better hearing.
She's okay with murder. Don't question it.
Being a nomad makes her hard to find.
If someone litters when she's nearby, she'll find their home and fill it with animal waste.


The Story of Her Eye
So you'd like to hear about how I manged to blind myself? Alright then, I've got some time to kill.

It should have been a good day. Everything had started out great, I had met up with a friend, gotten ice cream and gone off into the forest to see what I could find. The only problem being that I couldn't find anything, even the birds were silent as I hiked through the woods. Really though, I should have taken that as a sign that something was wrong, and trust me, something was very wrong that day.

In my boredom, I wandered further out than normal, much further out. I had gone so far that I had left the nature preserve and wandered onto the property of a dye company. Not that I was aware of that fact at the time. No, I was ignorantly bliss at the time.

It was not too long after I left the preserve that I happened upon a creek. At first glance, the creek looked like any other creek would, rocks, water, spongy grass, all that stuff- but had I bothered to look closer I would have noticed that there was nothing alive in the itself creek, not a single cell of life. Unfortunately I didn’t look closer, instead I hopped right in, a scene already playing out in my mind. I was no longer bored, instead I was an amazon queen who was currently fighting a crocodile who had threatened her. So immersed was I in my game that I didn’t take notice of the fact that a burning sensation had start to cover my body. It wasn’t until I splashed most of my muzzle, including my right eye into the water that I realized my mistake.

Immediately, I pulled myself from the water, trying to shake out the poisoned water, but it was far too late. The burning covered my whole body, including my eye which I could barely see out of, trying hurt too much for me to bare. Through all the pain, a single thought pulled itself through, ‘I have to get away from here’. So I began to move, stumbling forward one step at time, away from the gurgling of the creek.

Eventually, I couldn’t take it anymore, and I blacked out.

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To this day I have no idea how long it took me to wake up, or how long it took me to drag myself to civilization. All I can really remember is waking up in the hospital. It was there that I found out three very important things that would change my life forever.

The first was that I had lost my sight in my right eye, which was now completely white.

The second was my fur and feather was glowing. They still do, it makes hunting at night hard.

The third was that I could no longer tolerate most man-made chemicals.

It was the third that lead me to flee society, into the forest. I was hardly able to breath in a city, let alone drink the water or eat any food. Just before I left I was practically living in the hospital, a single whiff of a perfume was enough to send me back.

Looking back on it now, I'm almost glad that creek was there. If I had avoided it, I never would have found this new life.

That didn't stop me from punishing the ones who had dumped the chemicals in the creek.

But that my dear friend is a story for another time.

Interests
Nayeli has two main interest besides surviving; birds, and her flute.
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Even before Nayeli's accident, birds had been something she was fond of, everything from their range of sounds to their flight fascinated her. After her accident and after she ran off into the forest, she found that the birds became an extremely usefully tool to help her survive. A crow could lead her to a kill, and a robin's alarm call could keep her out of the way of a predator. It took her a long time, but she can now understand the meaning of most bird calls and even make a few of her own.

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Finally, she has a flute; it was a gift from a friend it's a handmade, native american six hole woodland style flute, and it's something she treasures deeply. Nayeli is a good player and will play whenever she has spare time. Sometimes people walking in the park will stop to listen if they hear her.
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Re: Plumerian #309;open

Postby jern. » Fri Sep 19, 2014 3:33 pm

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Re: Plumerian #309;open

Postby Lady Sif » Mon Sep 22, 2014 6:35 am

My form is now complete.

Good luck to everyone and I hope she( or he) gets an amazing home!

Side note, the credit section for my form is in order of appearance for the art work.

I also changed it last minute as I misread "5 images" as "5 pieces of art" because I am a derp-face, but it should be good now.

Lastly, if I don't win, the winner is welcome to my art, though most of it is related to her as I've portrayed her so you may or may not want pieces of it. Just please give the artist a heads up that you won it so they don't think you're stealing it or anything.
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Re: Plumerian #309;open

Postby Wulfjaw » Mon Sep 22, 2014 1:25 pm

I only noticed after the contest closed that it seemed it was required you make the plumerian female. I didn't realize this before, and put them down as a male. I was kind of flipping a coin though, and it wouldn't be too bad if I had to change the gender.
I know this sounds silly, but can you pretend that I made Tendai a girl? Thanks, I've just been unable to be very active here because of school and other things taking up my time.
I apologize if this is a big problem.
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Re: Plumerian #309;open

Postby Paro » Mon Sep 22, 2014 1:29 pm

DaringAsh wrote:I only noticed after the contest closed that it seemed it was required you make the plumerian female. I didn't realize this before, and put them down as a male. I was kind of flipping a coin though, and it wouldn't be too bad if I had to change the gender.
I know this sounds silly, but can you pretend that I made Tendai a girl? Thanks, I've just been unable to be very active here because of school and other things taking up my time.
I apologize if this is a big problem.

    It's fine yes owo <33
    I understand personal issues completely, being in some at the moment, so I'll make an exception this time yes.
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Re: Plumerian #309;open

Postby Lady Sif » Mon Sep 22, 2014 1:35 pm

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DaringAsh wrote:I only noticed after the contest closed that it seemed it was required you make the plumerian female. I didn't realize this before, and put them down as a male. I was kind of flipping a coin though, and it wouldn't be too bad if I had to change the gender.
I know this sounds silly, but can you pretend that I made Tendai a girl? Thanks, I've just been unable to be very active here because of school and other things taking up my time.
I apologize if this is a big problem.

    It's fine yes owo <33
    I understand personal issues completely, being in some at the moment, so I'll make an exception this time yes.

Is the contest closed now, or am I still allowed to makes some edits? I think I see a mistake in my form and it's bugging me.
*is still being a derp-face after she said she had finished her form*
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Re: Plumerian #309;open

Postby Paro » Mon Sep 22, 2014 1:37 pm

Lady Sif wrote:
Wyrd wrote:
DaringAsh wrote:I only noticed after the contest closed that it seemed it was required you make the plumerian female. I didn't realize this before, and put them down as a male. I was kind of flipping a coin though, and it wouldn't be too bad if I had to change the gender.
I know this sounds silly, but can you pretend that I made Tendai a girl? Thanks, I've just been unable to be very active here because of school and other things taking up my time.
I apologize if this is a big problem.

    It's fine yes owo <33
    I understand personal issues completely, being in some at the moment, so I'll make an exception this time yes.

Is the contest closed now, or am I still allowed to makes some edits? I think I see a mistake in my form and it's bugging me.
*is still being a derp-face after she said she had finished her form*

    hhh I'll allow edits this once, since I won't be able to judge until the morning atm, unlike with the other few contests that I judged earlier. Please make sure your edits are done by 3 PM EST tomorrow however.
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Re: Plumerian #309;open

Postby Lady Sif » Mon Sep 22, 2014 1:50 pm

Wyrd wrote:
Lady Sif wrote:
    hhh I'll allow edits this once, since I won't be able to judge until the morning atm, unlike with the other few contests that I judged earlier. Please make sure your edits are done by 3 PM EST tomorrow however.

YAY!
Thank you!
I'll finish them up tonight.

Also, I have this spare piece of art from purplepandaj that I can't fit in my form without breaking the 5 image rule (Because I like my title too much.) So if someone else wants to use it, they can.
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Winner!

Postby Paro » Tue Sep 23, 2014 9:34 am

DaringAsh wrote:
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TENDAI
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"like----my
ancestors,
i,---too,---am---on----
journey."
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      --Name, age, & gender
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      ----My name is Tendai. And where I come from, nobody has last names. I'm a female, and I'm in my early
      twenties right now. Pretty young to be starting a new religion, but it's happening.
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      --Background
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    Ancestry

      ----Many centuries into the past, a countrywide drought had sucked up all of the life that had once
      been the home of a strong and mighty people. Controversy began to pull the people apart, and
      they fought over whether or not they should leave their home and set their sights on destinations
      unknown, or stay and pray to their god that the thing their very lives hung on would be returned.
      ----In result, they were driven apart into two. Once divided, they dubbed themselves the Tribe of Home,
      and the Tribe of Life.
      ----Now half of what they were, the Tribe of Life left their land and their home behind. It was a very
      long and grievous journey, and the absence of water made it worse. Many died on the way, and some
      even began to doubt that it was a good idea to aimlessly wander and hope to stumble upon a new
      home in their migration. But they couldn't divide again, for this was the most crucial time to be united.
      The trip home would be greater than just staying, and it would be even more deathly than before,
      because the water had almost gone by then. And so, they had to press on. For fifty nights and
      fifty days, they journeyed and suffered through the dry and torturous planes.
      ----On the last morning, the travelling tribe saw the sunlight illuminate a wet paradise. Water clung
      to every surface, and the wildlife was all kinds of beautiful. They rejoiced. Finally, they had found
      their home.
      ----Their new home of life.

    Personal History


      ----In my youth, my life had been full of confusion and yearning. This is because my people had
      discovered other religions that had been brought to them by foreigners that joined us. Everyone
      was pressured to join a religion, and your family would turn their backs on you and disown you
      if you didn't choose the beliefs that they had.
      ----It was like a war. We were once very peaceful, so this new violent tone that ensnared us was
      many things. It was surprising, new, different... and most of all, scary. I was afraid.
      ----I was feeling lost. I needed to go to a quiet place. To pray, of course. Before this whole religion
      thing started, everybody just had their own beliefs with no labels at all. I knew god was real.
      Everything else... I was confused about.
      ----I went to the trees of silver, where anybody could feel at peace. The moment I set foot inside,
      I felt an overwhelming peace take over. Goosebumps raised up on my arms. There was no way this
      place would help, but just being here would at least calm my nerves and clear my head. I sat
      down and closed my eyes, allowing my arms to dangle limply at my sides.
      ----What happened next was unbelievable. I can barely put it into words!
      ----...God revealed themself to me. And her name was Eywa. She spoke to me, and told me to
      believe in none of the other religions out there-for the true one didn't exist yet. She told me that
      I was the one that had to spread Her truth, and it wouldn't be easy. I didn't understand this part at
      the time, because I was only a teenager then.
      ----Unfortunately, She couldn't help me. And how I wish She could have. Everybody I
      knew and respected were disgusted by my beliefs and my attempts at spreading it, including my family.
      Itwas even more scary than I had even begun with. Because of this, I was only able to convert a shabby
      five people. Soon enough, I was chased out of my home. Bitter that everyone had turned
      on me, I had no choice but to begin a journey of my own to home.
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      ╒════════╕
      --Personality
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      Base traits

      ----Disrespectful. low tolerance, aloof, serious, condescending, manipulative, self preservative,
      lawful, judgemental, passionate, industrious and sadistic.

      Overview

      ----Tendai never really seemed to like authority figures. It may be because she questions most
      everything, even those few that she admires. She likes to believe that she has more authority than anyone.
      She gets pretty bossy at times, though....
      ----But does she lead well? You bet! Tendai is always serious and likes to get
      down to the point. She pays attention to those who follow her (even if she's faking it most of the time),
      because where would she be without popularity? It would be difficult to preach when no one is willing
      to listen to you. She puts forth effort to appear calm and cool, but on the inside, she's stressing out.
      ----Because of that faithful encounter with who she believes to be Eywa, she quite often thinks
      ill of others that don't listen to her words and heed them. There are countless numbers of plumerians
      that she's dubbed 'lost sheep', and goes on long sermons about how she tries to help them. Their
      ignorance is what bothers her most. She hates herself for it, but she feels gratified that punishment
      will be served to them eventually in life. Everything will become balanced in the end. It's what
      Eywa strives for.
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      --Zodiac
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      ----In Tendai's culture, they have what you'd call a 'zodiac'. It isn't determined by time of birth,
      but more upon the way an individual acts around the tribe's Kuchagua. The Kuchagua determines what
      kind of 'energy' you are after observing your actions.
      ----Kuchagua's identity is secret, so, they give the tribe leader a list that's updated
      annually. It's because your energy changes throughout your life.
      ----The energies are light, heat, movement, and weight. The first three are positive energies,
      while weight's negative.
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      Congrats! The backstory and the ideas within this form where fantastic! Not only that, but her character seemed very life like, and I'm looking forwards to seeing her around!

      Honorable mention to Lady Sif; Nayeli was fantastic to read about, and yours was certainly a close second! Not to mention that I got a good feeling for her character while she was story telling! I wish you luck in future contests!
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