Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby AloisTrancyLuffs » Sun Aug 22, 2010 2:04 pm

Sweet, we can do multiple!Q!! Okay another one...

The blood, the pain,
the faded glory,
the denim eyes turneds to a dark dark gray,
might as well watch my broken heart decay,
I know that the reaper,
is just around the corner,
following me like a creeper,
but before I slip away,
please just let me say,
I know that we've had some disagreements,
I know we aren't best of friends,
but I love you,
and my dying wish,
please agree,is for you
to love me too.

Mm-hmm, I know this is rubbish and all, but hey at least i tried :/
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby bigwig. » Sun Aug 22, 2010 2:42 pm

I epicly fail at poetry, and anything creative for that matter. I will have something new later...
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby AloisTrancyLuffs » Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:15 pm

Fail? No way. You guys are all amazing poets, I loved reading through all the poems before I posted. Mine sucks, lol
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby elfaron. » Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:14 pm

She looked the cat
Right in the eye
Being careful
Not to cry

She bit her lip
"Oh, kitty please,
Please do not
Be mad at me.

I've tried so hard
to care for you."
The cat meowed.
What should she do?

"I need to say,"
She started shivering.
And as she continued on
Her voice started quivering.

"I love you and all,
but it's for the best.
We're taking you away
and putting you to rest."

She frowned, and then
The cat meowed, seeming
Not To understand, seeing
Her little bro was beaming.

"About time he got some sleep.
He's been awake night and day."
As her brother spoke
She looked away.

The girl let it all out.
She couldn't take it anymore.
She screamed as she
ran out the door.

She cried but she
was comforted
by a stray cat.
She named him Ted.

"What should I do?
My cat is sick." She said.
She slightly smiled as she stroked
the brown tabby she called Ted.

"Ted I have to"
She frowned.
"Do what's right."
Ted meowed.

"I love my cat."
Her cat named Fred.
"But he will be happier
up there, Ted."

Forcing herself
to walk to the door
even though she knew
It wouldn't be as easy anymore.

She took her cat to the vet.
"Goodbye." she said.
Fred blinked and meowed.
"I will see you later, Fred."
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby bigwig. » Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:08 pm

Hrmm...Just reassured myself by realizing I'm less likely to lose here than I am there...
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby AloisTrancyLuffs » Sat Aug 28, 2010 3:11 am

Nobody has posted in a while, and I have a new epic failure. :ugeek: I wrote this a while ago, it's called Overture.

The theater's dark, the music's stopped,
you're the only one onstage,
you won't preform Rock Island,
not either You can Fly,
the overture is over,
and it is not a lie,
believe me,
it's time to preform your life.
You can't hide behind the curtains,
you can't dodge through the balcony,
the finale is far away, my dear,
now go out there and live.
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby bigwig. » Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:18 pm

Wrote a new poem failure, inspired by my doggeh Mothman:
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And my 2nd gens from this month.

Deep in the jungle,
You are free to live and roam.
Deep in the jungle,
And you dare call this your home?

Pups born into this jungle,
You are hardy and strong.
Pups born into this jungle,
You will live here your whole life long.

Each day, I watch you,
No warmth, no soul, no will.
Each day, I watch you,
Broken, silent, and still.

For I am but a crumbling statue,
The remains of what once was,
For I am but a crumbling statue,
Watching what each of you free dogs does.

One day, one of you sees me,
Shocked by a visage of such destruction.
One day, one of you sees my,
Called by a spiritual suction.

My time has come and gone,
for I am not a living being.
My time has come and gone,
Leaving one question:
What is it you are seeing?
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Sibilant » Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:32 pm

Really random poem.

In the dark days of forever,
Where an end comes after never,
And a person's favorite word is ever
Kept a secret,

That is where the fine,
Single roped-in vine,
That forever holds the line,
Of an enemy,

And this enemy has a face,
That always was a base,
For the foundation of the lace,
That forever holds its peace.

Another really random poem that isn't so cheesy.

United we stand,
Or apart we fall,
But always we rise as a nation.

Together we fall,
Or apart we stand,
And always we lose deliberation.

Okay, one more:

What is the panda,
Doing on my rooftop,
During this sunny winter night?



Alright, that last one was odd.....
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby bigwig. » Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:29 pm

I wrote this quite strange Dragon Ball Z poem:

Who is:
The spirit created by the guardian of earth and it's creatures, from birds to fish? (Sort of a cheesy line)
The one who is summoned to grant your wish,
By the Dragon Balls?
It is I, Shenron, the mighty dragon!

Who is:
The one who has come to save us all?
The mighty one who rises, every time they fall,
To save us?
It is I, Goku, the brave defender!

Who is:
The one who seeks to bring about harm?
The one who wishes destroy every town and city, home and farm,
And be immortal?
It is I, Vegeta, the superior saiyan!

Who is:
The one who says himself ruler of the universe?
The one who can't come up with another verse,
Or become good?
It is I Frieza, the annoying villain!

Who is:
The one who quests to take us over,
The one who is cold and unforgiving,
And sacrificed himself?
It is I, Piccolo, the cranky Namekian!

Who is:
The one who smacked Yajirobe in they face?
The one who grows Senzu beans,
And is awesome?
It is I, Korin, the best of them all!
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby AloisTrancyLuffs » Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:15 am

Haha, I'd ask the same questipon. Why is it on your roof? Victoriawolf, I really love reading your poems they are very beautiful. :clap:
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