Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Sibilant » Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:27 pm

I have a good one. Let me post it later.
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Pharaoh » Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:31 pm

Thorn of Epicville wrote:<33.


I have more, too. xD But I don't need the adoptable, I just like poetry! Wrote this cause I felt like it. Px

    Shadows Around Me
    Flickering Lights Fade
    And Then It All
    Goes Black

    Heaven's Choir
    Couldn't Be Higher
    Down Here I rest
    Among Fire And Flames

    I Focused On Money
    And On Women
    And Cars
    Never My Heart

    Though Hear My Words
    Carried With Wind, And Birds
    I've Never Had So Much
    Fun
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby bigwig. » Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:43 pm

Okay, I'm less tired and I just ate something, and I came up with something pretty good, except for 2 things:
1.There is no way on earth that you can make it rhyme with it still sounding good.
2.It's based off of something from a cartoon. :oops: Well, sort of, except the 'running fox' was never actually killed.

For so long, it seemed like I would win.
For so long, I thought I beat you, and everybody else.
But then you came and took it too far.
You called them in, five desperate bounty hunters,
Infamous for their ability on search and destroy missions.
And that's all this ever was.

They where, to you, five ravenous bloodhounds.
Ever loyal, ready for the command to seek and destroy.
You set them loose, to track me down.
And they did, oh how they did.
They hounded me across the planet.
If they where ravenous bloodhounds, I was the running fox.

Every time I thought I was safe, there they where.
There where, however, many hazards to them.
One by one, these hazards picked them off.
Until only the leader and his show-off assistant where left.
Until the day, that fateful day, when they found me.
Like a ravenous bloodhound, kept from his fox for so long,
The search part was over, now all that was left was to destroy,
He tore me apart like a ragdoll.

And, still loyal, he gave you my head on a platter,
because that is what he had been told to do.
But his loyalty was all in vain,
For both he and his fellow survivor where survivors no longer.

You greedy fool! Now see what you have done!
You greedy fool! Now I watch you from the depths of the underworld.
Because someday,someday, you will follow them.
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Taylor☆Gang » Fri Aug 13, 2010 3:10 am

Awww man. Awsome adoptable. :thumbup: I am terrible at poems though.... :thumbdown:
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby * frappuccino » Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:29 am

All of these poems are gorgeous! Keep them coming ^^.
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Pharaoh » Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:04 pm

P erfect
I n
E very way!

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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Saikiyo » Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:20 pm

brilliant!
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby bigwig. » Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:47 pm

:lol: Awesome, Yummeh! Personally, I think black spot adoptables are the best invention ever! They give me a chance to get them, and that's awesome. Unlike free adoptables, who, even when there are no posts at the time of my arrival, always manage to elude my grasp.
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Taylor☆Gang » Sat Aug 14, 2010 3:50 am

H ate
A all
P lanet
P eople's
Y ams

... :P
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Pharaoh » Sat Aug 14, 2010 4:02 am

Victoriawolf wrote::lol: Awesome, Yummeh! Personally, I think black spot adoptables are the best invention ever! They give me a chance to get them, and that's awesome. Unlike free adoptables, who, even when there are no posts at the time of my arrival, always manage to elude my grasp.


Same here! It's that silly new code. /:

T ruly awesome
H onestly epic
O bviously talented
R eally lovable, and
N ever lets anyone down!

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