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POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby * frappuccino » Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:30 pm

Yet again, I am providing an adoptable to be won by a grand poem -- this time, however, it does not need to specifically be about the adoptable. It can be whatever you so desire, at any so length and any so style. Show me your creativity and yourself.

This opportunity ends August 25th, and results should be in by August 28th.
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Pharaoh » Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:57 pm

Quick question - can it be an old poem, or does it have to be newly written?
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Saikiyo » Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:59 pm

time takes a way any pain
takes away the feeling
begins the healing
this keeps us all sane

what if there was pain time could not kill
a deed you come to hate
a cruel twist of fate
the sins we committed at our own free will

what could you do?
would you die?
would you cry?
you know nothing anymore is true


you've done all seven
count the ways
count your days
you'll never get to heaven

one: greed
nothings a want, every things a need

two: envy
wanted every thing you can't see

three: lust
self centered pleasures are a must

four: sloth
all the excitement and motivation of a dampened cloth

five: gluttony
gorging on enough food for three

6: pride
the glory for years you ride

7: wrath
lashing out blindly not thinking of the after math
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby bigwig. » Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:25 pm

I'll post something later, when I'm less tired.
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby * frappuccino » Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:26 am

Yummeh ⤬⤬ wrote:Quick question - can it be an old poem, or does it have to be newly written?


It can be both, just so long as you wrote it.
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby * frappuccino » Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:27 am

saikiyo wrote:
time takes a way any pain
takes away the feeling
begins the healing
this keeps us all sane

what if there was pain time could not kill
a deed you come to hate
a cruel twist of fate
the sins we committed at our own free will

what could you do?
would you die?
would you cry?
you know nothing anymore is true


you've done all seven
count the ways
count your days
you'll never get to heaven

one: greed
nothings a want, every things a need

two: envy
wanted every thing you can't see

three: lust
self centered pleasures are a must

four: sloth
all the excitement and motivation of a dampened cloth

five: gluttony
gorging on enough food for three

6: pride
the glory for years you ride

7: wrath
lashing out blindly nothing thinking of the after math


That is epic o;. The seven sins... interesting.
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby cafemochi » Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:30 am

Beautiful design.. might make a poem later ;)
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Chaosin » Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:26 am

When the rain falls on your head, just think of it as me missing you,
When the wolf howls think of me calling your name,
When there is a shooting star think of it as me trying to reach you,
We are too far apart to be touching, yet too close to be inseparable,
When you hold her just remember,
What I think of you.
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby Pharaoh » Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:12 am

This is one of my favorites of all time, and is probably my finest work, ever, as a poet. :3 Touch and you will die.


    Lifeless Limbs
    Might Grasp Me Cold
    And On My Flesh
    Fore'er Take Hold

    And I, Be One
    With Nature's Light
    And Stand A Tree
    Into The Night

    That Maybe Soon
    Away I'll Fly
    My Ka Alight
    In The Eastern Sky

    But Here I Stand
    Root In This Soil
    That This Brown Mud
    Be Where I Toil

    That My Heavy Bark
    And Weighted Boughs
    Might Never Know
    Of Such Soft Clouds

    So Away I Hold
    And Cry To Sleep
    Knowing I Will Be
    Forever Deep

    Rooted In The Ground
    To Never Be
    Nothing More Than
    A Fruitless Tree
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Re: POEM ADOPTABLE

Postby * frappuccino » Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:00 pm

<33.
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