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Well I'm on today... So good luck! >u<

[Beatnik]

So I think I know who our winner is! I really liked both of yours.

@.TARDIS
You had a few errors, it was quite wordy here and there and a bit of repetition. It made it a little hard to read!oAo However, yours gave me a feeling of being in that test chamber after I figured out what you meant by some of the things! I thought she fell into the pit when she was getting up on the stairs! Your art is also very cute! She looks relaxed and like she's been working out! >:3 I always thought Chell would be a bit more muscular since she runs around a lot and carries that big gun!

@duckwingz
Let me just tell you, your writing is so nice! I could follow it very easily, and I wanted more! However, there wasn't more and it made me a bit sad. ;w; I wish there was more of it to read because it was fantastic! Your writing was great, but didn't show as much dedication to the Parra! Your art was adorably done with the portal gun included! She looks like she's ready to go!

However, I can only choose one person for Chell.. ;w; Parra Chell now goes to...............

.TARDIS

@duckwingz omg I loved your writing. I would like to give you a runner up! Meet me in a Join.Me. (PM me about them) or just PM me, and we can sort out the details! You don't have to have a PortalPup, but you can if you want! owo We'll sort out which character since some of them are already planned for others!

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Yayy! ovo
Reading over my story, I realize it was confusing. Ehh. I guess my mind is just all befuddled and confused sometimes. I've never really been good at writing stuff.

[claypigeon]

oops.

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@Wannahaveacuppa?, this has already ended.