Re: Caedil Readoption

Postby mulder » Tue May 13, 2014 12:30 am

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    Name: Caedil - changed to Daedalos
      "Caedil is dead. I'm Daedalos now."
      (More explained in the story.)
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      "It's not like I meant for this to happen, don't look at me like that. Jeez.
      I was just walking home from the park, that's friggin' all. And like any other living thing, I looked around.
      'Cept I happened to 've looked down the wrong alley."
    ...

      "There wasn't actually any reason for this to be separate recordings, I just did it for dramatic effect.
      Ahem.

      Anyway, I look down the alley. At first it just looks normal- skinny kid gettin' beat in an alley by a couple a' punks. Happens every day. But for whatever reason, I decide to look back, an' I swear I feel my fur stand on end.
      I could tell that this guy was pretty high up in the social ladder- just by his clothes, which were now coated in dirt and blood. Something forced me to step forward, made me think that maybe I could help, and that was when they noticed me.
      A girl- small in stature but had a look that could freeze your blood in its veins- came toward me, raised her fist and-
      Bang, bang, baby shot me down.

      She decked me right in the face, then tripped me and just started going all out. Kicking, pulling, the whole nine yards. All I can remember clearly was how much I wanted to get out of there alive.
      When it stopped, I was absolutely relieved. The girl yanked me up by my shirt collar, and looked me dead in the eye. Her amber eyes were colder than the arctic circle.
      "Don't ever step in the way of Tsula Harjo. I'll make you regret it."


      It wasn't even something I had to think about- y'know, like when you're in a race, and once the whistle goes off, you just run.
      You run and run, to the point where you don't even know if it hurts.
      You just go.

      I didn't even know if they were following me at that point, I just wanted to get the hell away. Y'feel me? I could've just witnessed a murder for God's sake. I got more an' more paranoid as I ran, the only thing on my mind was to get home, to Aurorina."
    ...

      "It wasn't much better once I got home.
      Turns out they weren't followin' me, much t' my relief. But that paranoia never left after that, if anything, it'd grown since then.
      Aurorina was worried, at first. I started to stay inside more often, and I kept the blinds shut.
      I didn't answer phone calls. Hell, I hardly read the mail anymore. Rina just thought it was me bein' a grump, and left me be.
      But then I got a letter. It sat on the edge of the dinner table in the pile with other heaps of junk, but during one dinner, I noticed the symbol. That dark red pentagram in the corner of the envelope.

      Everything came flooding back in a span of about half a' second, clear as day. I tugged it outta the pile, a few magazines toppling to the carpet below. It looked just like any other envelope, apart from the lack of a return address on the front and the stamp on the back.
      I remember Aurorina asking if I was alright, and all I did was get up and go to the bedroom. I locked the door behind me and read the letter alone, so that she wouldn't worry about me. Looking back on it now, that probably just worried her even more. Yes, I'm stupid, I know.

      There were only a few words on the page, but they still managed to ignite something in me that I didn't know existed. Sweat beaded on my forehead as I read it over, and over, and over again. All it said was-
      "You're a dead man walking. I'm coming."

      Tsula. Oh, no.
      I started to get up and tell Rina all about what happened and what we had to do, but when I went out, all I saw was the front door wide open and her not there. A little pink post-it note was stuck to the fridge, reading-
      "I'm leaving. Don't look for me."

      Ouch. That hurt.
      First I've got people out to kill me, and now my mate leaves me.
      This is Hell, isn't it?
...

      "These recordings will become less and less frequent.
      I'm on the run, and I don't know if I can stop to do these anymore, uhm, so I'll make this quick. So here's what happened after that.

      After Rina left, I figured that I had nothing left to lose. Mom, dad and all of them would be safer if I didn't say anything to them.
      If they started a friggin' manhunt, so be it.
      I just wanted them to be safe.

      I packed up what little things I needed in a drawstring bag and left a note on the door saying that we were on vacation, so that people wouldn't suspect anything. (At least not at first, I guess.)
      Then I just left on foot, right into the woods.

      I don't know how long it's been, honestly. Even when I was a kid, Dad said that I was never cut out for camping and these kinds of things. If I knew that my life depended on it now, I'd have taken that more seriously. Around the fourth day or so, I lost track of what day it was. I'm so alone.
      But where I am right now...It's beautiful. It's up high, I can tell, and I feel like I can touch the sky.
      These sunrises and sunsets are all I have anymore. They're the only source of hope I have.
      It reminded me of that myth, the one where those two people made wings and flew to their freedom.
      And you know what? So did I. Maybe I am in the sky. Maybe I grew wings.

      As of now, Caedil is dead. I am Daedalos, and I found refuge in the skies."

      [1000/1000]

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Re: Caedil Readoption

Postby Cliffhanger » Tue May 13, 2014 3:20 am

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Re: Caedil Readoption

Postby Zvarjaciely » Tue May 13, 2014 3:22 am

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Broken sunlight shimmered in amber streams through the treetops, dappling the forest floor and illuminating the faded silver-blue spots on a certain Kiamara's back. Caedil stalked through the woods, each inhalation drawn sharply through his nose and huffing out in a long sigh during each exhalation. The cream-colored Kiamara was mad, and when he was mad, he could be devilish, to say the least.

A flicker of light appeared a few yards in front and to the left of him, and his pale silver-blue eyes tracked the slivers of brightness to a small brook that hardly produced any sounds as it wound through the forest. Caedil's eyes narrowed unhappily, but when he drew his next breath, he realized that all of his sighing and growling had caused a dryness in his throat that he greatly disliked.

With an exasperated sigh, he dipped his head and ran his black-spotted muzzle through the cool, clear river water, surprised at how refreshing it was. As he drank, he kept a careful eye on the single green-and-black feather drooping gently over the left side of his face to ensure that it didn't get soaked.

When the tawny Kia looked up, to his rather extreme shock, a dark female Kiamara was staring back at him through a cold orange gaze.

He froze on the spot, not knowing how to react. Worse, he didn't know whether she was hostile. A thousand thoughts raced through his head, and he forgot to focus on her; therefore, he didn't notice her getting a drink herself. When he blinked and he popped back into the present, she was just lifting her head, and a strangled yelp came from Caedil's mouth- he thought she was crouching to pounce.

They stared at each other for a long second, then Caedil took a step backwards- and she stepped forwards, to his astonishment. He would never have dreamed of stepping into any body of water, no matter what size, if only to keep his precious paw feather from getting wet. But she had no such feather on her paw, and apparently no fear of the water, either. Curious now, in a rather mischievous way, Caedil took another step back. Determinedly the dark female took another step forwards. They continued this for several strides, until they were both on the same bank.

Alrighty, thought Caedil, and took one more step back- only to trip over a stick his left hind paw brushed against and fell back on his behind with a low thud.

To his surprise, the other Kiamara started laughing, which only added to the hurt and humiliation of his fall. "I can't believe you tripped over that," she gasped out, and he glared angrily at her.

"Don't laugh!" he growled. "It was your fault, after all!" But deep inside he wasn't too badly hurt. Rather, he was curious- her voice was lovely, and her orange eyes, bright green spots and curling stripes were rather pretty against her dark base coat.

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"You're pretty," he informed her, and she blinked, perhaps surprised by his sudden switch of attitude. But the other Kia didn't react positively or negatively, simply stared at him harshly, waiting for his next move.

"I'm Caedil," he offered, now standing, and she rose with him. "Your name is?"

"Rin," she answered, short and curt, eyes sharp and cutting. It was clear that she wasn't the social type.

"Rin," he echoed, rolling the syllable over his tongue.
"Mmh. A nice name. And what, Rin, are you doing in
this forest?"

"It is my home," she replied, never dropping eye contact with him. Caedil studied her curiously, wondering why this female was so dominant and cut-off. She didn't seem to appreciate talking, but perhaps he could entice her out of her shell with a bit of flirting...

"So cold, for one so hot," he remarked calmly, sitting back down. As though to prove his point, fiery anger began a slow burning in her eyes.

"Excuse me?" she asked in a low, deceptively even tone.

Once more Caedil stood, facing her directly, then stepped forward, curling his tail over her back. With a smarmy, coy smirk, he answered her with another question. "Don't you like company? Aren't you glad I stumbled upon you in this forest?"

Rin didn't answer with words, but her actions were enough. With a glare from her bright orange eyes, she drew one paw back as though to strike him, and stared at him with a mix of horror and disgust.

"I'll be going now," she hissed at him, although he didn't move. Furious, she shoved his tail away from her body, shaking him off as though he were a fly, and quickly dashing back across the river, quickly disappearing into the forest from which she had come.

Shaking his head, Caedil thought, Ah well. It's not like I don't often scare them off... He sighed, then murmured to himself, "Ah. But she was the most beautiful of all...." The black-spotted Kiamara rose, stalking back towards civilization, and repeated, "You are still beautiful, Rin."

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Re: Caedil Readoption

Postby wandzie. » Tue May 13, 2014 3:39 am

Pulled out, congrats to the winner
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Re: Caedil Readoption

Postby rottenmutt » Tue May 13, 2014 3:40 am

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Re: Caedil Readoption

Postby finoodle » Tue May 13, 2014 4:00 am

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Re: Caedil Readoption

Postby gecko » Tue May 13, 2014 4:13 am

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I am a non kiamara owner, hoping to possibly get my first Kiamara. I haven't tried for
many adopts, simply because many of them have very intricate designs and I lean more
towards simplicity in the design while trying out for a character. I hope that we all have a
great time trying out for this handsome boy! Good luck and enjoy the rest of my form.


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The name is too fitting for him to take away, so I decided to leave it as is. I also feel
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Re: Caedil Readoption

Postby Valesfer » Tue May 13, 2014 5:21 am

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Re: Caedil Readoption

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Re: Caedil Readoption

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