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Khuma #66

Postby Fork » Sat May 10, 2014 4:11 am

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A Khuma, is possibly the cutest thing you have ever seen.
Khumas', as you could probably already tell, are very small.
They have short hairy legs, fat hairy bodies, and gently arched backs.
Females and Males have distinct differences.
Females are smaller and have goats' udders.
Males are bigger and have small horns with poison sacks inside of them.


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Re: Khuma #66

Postby Tayrisha » Sat May 10, 2014 4:43 am

Khuma´s name

Mikaila

Her Personality

- well, sorry, that I broke a rule and didn´t write her personality into story, but I didn´t know, how to add it into it, because to me it just didn´t fit to it xP alright, I understand if you will disqualify me or something like that for it, but it really seems better to write it separately to me ^.^ -

She is a type of girl, which never follow rules and prefer to do things herself. It is very bold and 'rough girl', but can also be sensitive - sometimes crazy. Basically is friendly, you just need to more know her. Anyway she love dangerous things, hunting and 'sports' - she´s very competitive and it´s difficult to bear defeat for her. Over most Khumas from her camp, she love water - swimming. She´s also amazing to climber, but has a secret that is known only she and her best friend Timi - she has afraid of heights. However, she can be a reasonable and prudent /this not happen often xD/ too, but most of time she´s /a few/ crazy, sassy and unfettered girl. Her mindset is something like: Someone don´t agree or have problem with me? Well, I don´t care. It´s THEIR problem!
In fact, she is peculiar girl who will not let you jump on her head and is not afraid to say what she think /her own opinion/, for what her surroundings doesn´t has her very much in love, but on the other hand, they admire her for it.



Her Story

I ran under low bushes in the forest. Everywhere I heard rustling in the leaves when I saw movement in the bushes.
I froze on the spot and sniffed. I recognized the smell and I grinned.
,,I know it´s YOU!" I spoke to a bush ,,Get out!".
The bushes moved again and then I looked into the big blue eyes.
,,Alright. You got me!" said Timi and a little guilty looked down.
,,Why did you follow me?" I said a few annoyed.
,,Well...we are best friends since when we know, but...recently you still walk away from the camp alone and...where exactly do you go? I really want to know that, because I don´t think, it´s fair to me, that you never say me anything!"
I sighed...I know, it´s not nice from me, but...NOBODY can know THAT. However...he´s my best friend and...
,,Alright! I´ll tell you!" I said finally ,,But you must promise, that you never tell it anyone, ok?!"
He nodded and he looked at me a curious. Last time I looked at him and then I whispered to him.
,,I go to down river near the city."
,,What?! Are you crazy?! We mustn´t go there! It´s dangerous and...blablabla."
Arrgg, he´s so annoying sometimes! ,,I know, I know, alright! But I really like that place! Oh, you must promise, you don´t tell anyone that I go there! Please!" I knew, that he not resist, because he hate, when I´m sad. Sorry Timi. I know, I´m not good very friend right now.
,,Oh...ehm...*sigh*...alright, I promised." I was jumping all around him by happy.
,,Aaawwww, thank you!!! You´re really the best! I don´t know what I would do without you."
,,Well, I don´t know it too" he laughed. ,,Ok, shall we go?"
,,Where?" I asked in surprise.
,,Oh gosh. Yet the river." rolled his eyes.
,,Sure!"

*****Later*****

,,Are you sure, it´s safe? My grandma told me, that manz dangerous animals live there..." he asked a few scared.
,,Of course it´s safe! And if nothing else, you´re with me or not?!" I confidently extended her head, but even here it was not pleasant to me. Something was in my place other ... Something has changed .... Something...
,,Mikaila! WATCH OUT!" shouted Timi and before I knew it, I flew air. The impact was hard, because I am full weight slammed into a tree. Ouch, that hurts! I didn´t know, what happened. Grrrrr....grrrrrr. What´s that? I turned my head.
,,Oh, no...NO!!!" I glimpsed a terrible scene. There were three big dogs and...Timi! He lay on the grass and not move. One of the dogs grabbed his tail and yanked him. He whined and landed near me. I heard him breathing heavily and slowly.
,,Timi...Timi, are you alright?" he wasn´t and I knew it, but but I wished so much to he say that. That he sprang up again and was fine. That I woke up from this stupid dream and started to laught with him on it! But that wasn´t dream...it was real!
,,Oh Timi...Timi I´m so sorry! I´m really so sorry! It was a big mistake to go there! It was my mistake! Please, wake up, PLEASE!" I cried and three dogs were still coming closer and closer to us.


- Oh god, sorry for my horrible english, but I only lear it -.-" :"D
Anyway, here´s the story ^^
I hope you will like it and and if you would like to know, how it will end, I can write it full :D - however it will be long xD

- and sorry, that the form is too long too -.-" -

Tay <3
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Re: Khuma #66

Postby angeltears. » Sat May 10, 2014 4:44 am

THYME'S POV

Rain splattered on the ground ahead. Of course it did. That always had to happen after someone died. Why is it that water just seems to be against us at the worst times? Thyme stepped forward, his old paws screaming in agony against the cold, rough street. His daughter Tesla had drowned just a week earlier. He had been visiting her grave often, leaving willow branches. It had been her favorite 'discovery.' Being very young, things like that had never seised to amaze her. He cringed at the thought, and he started running faster. The rain was stinging his skin, and he couldn't bare being near water anymore. The only water that didn't actually bother him were his own tears, as they streamed down his face, silent as wind. Finally, he was there. He set the branch down, and sat by the grave. And he had a break down. He cried and screamed, asking why god would ever do this to him. When he finally calmed himself down, it had been at least an hour, and he seemed to have cuts all over him. He rested his head on his paws and just waited. Waited for something. He didn't know what, just that he needed to wait. So he did. His ears perked up. Some where in the distance, and faint caw of a bird sounded. He got up and stretched. He didn't know how long he had been there, but now that he had looked at the sky, he knew it must have been a long time. Then there was a rustling. A baby khuma peeked it's head out of the bushes. It was white with purple spot-like dots around its body. It had blue gray eyes. Thyme's eyes flamed with delight, a tear of silent joy running down his cheek. Tesla had the same eyes, and the light had always caught in the same way, making it look like moonlight lived in her eyes. "Hi, Im Tesla!" The kit said. "Who are you?"

TESLA'S POV

"Hi, I'm Tesla! Who are you?" I walk closer to the other khuma, a little confused but all the more curious. I'm like that. It's odd, my feelings are often mixed or I'm feeling two of which are exact opposites. Earlier I felt cautious but excited at the same time. I don't know why this happens, but I guess that's just my life. It takes me a while to realize that he had already responded to my question. "Thyme? Isn't that an herb or something?" I ask him. It makes me feel a little rude, but I feel I can be myself around him. He just seems so familiar..... "Yeah, sure. Are you hear by yourself? You know that kits aren't aloud to be walking around alone!" He gives me a stern look, and I don't feel mixed emotions anymore. At the moment, I feel nothing. "Um... Sorry. I ran away. My old parents kicked me out." His look softens and he turns around. "Follow me." He says then bounds off. I follow him to a far away clearing, where he stops. "Would you like me to be your new parent?" My eyes sparkle with excitement. "Yes." I whisper.



The end! I hope that explains her personality good... I'm not sure though. So, yeah...
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Re: Khuma #66

Postby Horse » Sat May 10, 2014 8:06 am

When does this end? c:
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    horseback ride, which explains the username.
    I'm not too active. I may be slow to respond.
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Re: Khuma #66

Postby Fork » Sat May 10, 2014 8:12 am

monday~ so get all your forms in~~
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Re: Khuma #66

Postby seraphs » Sat May 10, 2014 3:49 pm

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Re: Khuma #66

Postby Fork » Tue May 13, 2014 3:40 am

four more hours until closing time get the forms in quickly!
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Re: Khuma #66

Postby Fork » Wed May 21, 2014 1:45 am

Oh My Gods wrote:THYME'S POV

Rain splattered on the ground ahead. Of course it did. That always had to happen after someone died. Why is it that water just seems to be against us at the worst times? Thyme stepped forward, his old paws screaming in agony against the cold, rough street. His daughter Tesla had drowned just a week earlier. He had been visiting her grave often, leaving willow branches. It had been her favorite 'discovery.' Being very young, things like that had never seised to amaze her. He cringed at the thought, and he started running faster. The rain was stinging his skin, and he couldn't bare being near water anymore. The only water that didn't actually bother him were his own tears, as they streamed down his face, silent as wind. Finally, he was there. He set the branch down, and sat by the grave. And he had a break down. He cried and screamed, asking why god would ever do this to him. When he finally calmed himself down, it had been at least an hour, and he seemed to have cuts all over him. He rested his head on his paws and just waited. Waited for something. He didn't know what, just that he needed to wait. So he did. His ears perked up. Some where in the distance, and faint caw of a bird sounded. He got up and stretched. He didn't know how long he had been there, but now that he had looked at the sky, he knew it must have been a long time. Then there was a rustling. A baby khuma peeked it's head out of the bushes. It was white with purple spot-like dots around its body. It had blue gray eyes. Thyme's eyes flamed with delight, a tear of silent joy running down his cheek. Tesla had the same eyes, and the light had always caught in the same way, making it look like moonlight lived in her eyes. "Hi, Im Tesla!" The kit said. "Who are you?"

TESLA'S POV

"Hi, I'm Tesla! Who are you?" I walk closer to the other khuma, a little confused but all the more curious. I'm like that. It's odd, my feelings are often mixed or I'm feeling two of which are exact opposites. Earlier I felt cautious but excited at the same time. I don't know why this happens, but I guess that's just my life. It takes me a while to realize that he had already responded to my question. "Thyme? Isn't that an herb or something?" I ask him. It makes me feel a little rude, but I feel I can be myself around him. He just seems so familiar..... "Yeah, sure. Are you hear by yourself? You know that kits aren't aloud to be walking around alone!" He gives me a stern look, and I don't feel mixed emotions anymore. At the moment, I feel nothing. "Um... Sorry. I ran away. My old parents kicked me out." His look softens and he turns around. "Follow me." He says then bounds off. I follow him to a far away clearing, where he stops. "Would you like me to be your new parent?" My eyes sparkle with excitement. "Yes." I whisper.



The end! I hope that explains her personality good... I'm not sure though. So, yeah...


Oh My Gods wins.
Tayrisha your story was beautiful, but I felt like Oh My Gods had a little more detail.
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Re: Khuma #66

Postby Tayrisha » Wed May 21, 2014 6:14 am

Fork wrote:
Oh My Gods wrote:THYME'S POV

Rain splattered on the ground ahead. Of course it did. That always had to happen after someone died. Why is it that water just seems to be against us at the worst times? Thyme stepped forward, his old paws screaming in agony against the cold, rough street. His daughter Tesla had drowned just a week earlier. He had been visiting her grave often, leaving willow branches. It had been her favorite 'discovery.' Being very young, things like that had never seised to amaze her. He cringed at the thought, and he started running faster. The rain was stinging his skin, and he couldn't bare being near water anymore. The only water that didn't actually bother him were his own tears, as they streamed down his face, silent as wind. Finally, he was there. He set the branch down, and sat by the grave. And he had a break down. He cried and screamed, asking why god would ever do this to him. When he finally calmed himself down, it had been at least an hour, and he seemed to have cuts all over him. He rested his head on his paws and just waited. Waited for something. He didn't know what, just that he needed to wait. So he did. His ears perked up. Some where in the distance, and faint caw of a bird sounded. He got up and stretched. He didn't know how long he had been there, but now that he had looked at the sky, he knew it must have been a long time. Then there was a rustling. A baby khuma peeked it's head out of the bushes. It was white with purple spot-like dots around its body. It had blue gray eyes. Thyme's eyes flamed with delight, a tear of silent joy running down his cheek. Tesla had the same eyes, and the light had always caught in the same way, making it look like moonlight lived in her eyes. "Hi, Im Tesla!" The kit said. "Who are you?"

TESLA'S POV

"Hi, I'm Tesla! Who are you?" I walk closer to the other khuma, a little confused but all the more curious. I'm like that. It's odd, my feelings are often mixed or I'm feeling two of which are exact opposites. Earlier I felt cautious but excited at the same time. I don't know why this happens, but I guess that's just my life. It takes me a while to realize that he had already responded to my question. "Thyme? Isn't that an herb or something?" I ask him. It makes me feel a little rude, but I feel I can be myself around him. He just seems so familiar..... "Yeah, sure. Are you hear by yourself? You know that kits aren't aloud to be walking around alone!" He gives me a stern look, and I don't feel mixed emotions anymore. At the moment, I feel nothing. "Um... Sorry. I ran away. My old parents kicked me out." His look softens and he turns around. "Follow me." He says then bounds off. I follow him to a far away clearing, where he stops. "Would you like me to be your new parent?" My eyes sparkle with excitement. "Yes." I whisper.



The end! I hope that explains her personality good... I'm not sure though. So, yeah...


Oh My Gods wins.
Tayrisha your story was beautiful, but I felt like Oh My Gods had a little more detail.


Congrats Oh My Gods. :D

Thanks Fork. <3 I´m happy you liked it. :D Well...I agree with you about details. They really added more. ^^
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Re: Khuma #66

Postby angeltears. » Fri May 23, 2014 10:02 am

THA YOU SO MUCH :o
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