Renate; Turning Over a New Leaf

Postby PsiKenzie » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:13 pm

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    Hello there. I'm PsiKenzie. You might have seen me around trying out for other kias. I would love to have this beautiful kia as my first . If she were my first, she would surely be spoiled.
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    Renate.
    Renate is a German name that means rebirth. I felt like this name would fit this kia.
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    Female.
    Something about the design struck me as more feminine than masculine.
Story;;

    -----The refreshing autumn breeze ruffled my hair and sent a small flurry of crisp leaves gracefully floating down until the rested gently against the ground. I rubbed my arms as an attempt to warm myself up a bit. I was wearing my usual clothes, a white tank top, a camouflage hat and pants, and a pair of black combat boots. Need to say I was not dress properly. "First order of business is to find my jacket." I slung my small duffel bag over and picked up a small box carried it into the house. Sighing I opened up my bag and tore through it looking for my jacket. I slipped it on and pushed the box into the corner.
    -----I went to retrieve the other boxes when I heard the the door slam shut. I turned my head, " Must have been the win-" I fell backwards and looked up. There was someone there. He looked about my age with dirty blonde hair, golden eyes, and cheetah print spots. He held a hand out to me, " You alright there cadet?" I took his hand and hoisted myself up, " Ja, I'm fine." Still holding my hand he introduced himself. " I'm Leon." "Renate," I say shaking his hand, now. " You, uh, need any help?" "Help would be nice," I smiled as I turned and grabbed a large box off of the ground. " Oh, just set them down anywhere."
    -----After an hour of moving things into the house we were finally done. "Pretty small house. You live by yourself?" He asked gazing around. I nodded, "This is my first time away from my parents." "In that case you want me to show you around?" "Um, sure."
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    -----We walked to his car and got inside. He started it up and pulled out of the driveway. The first few minutes of the tip was quiet, however Leon broke the silence. " So, cadet, first time away from your parents, huh? Where're you from?" I look over at him, "Germany." " Germany, hmm. That's a long ways away. What made you come here?" I frowned slightly at this question and decided to evade it, "Personal reasons."
    After a tour of the city, he drove me home and said goodbye. I went inside to start unpacking.


    -----In these two years, I grew close to Leon. He became my best friend and my first one I met after the move. I had no idea how he would take this...
    -----I hesitantly knocked on his door and took a step back. After a few moments, the door slowly open. " Hey there, cadet! Come in." I bit my lip slightly, "I-I can't Leon." He tilted his head, "What do you mean?" " I have to go back to Germany. My, mother passed away, and I have to go to her funeral." He gave me a small hug, " I'm so sorry, Renate. Do you need a ride to the airport? I'll take you there." I nodded, " Thanks."
    -----The ride to the airport was nothing but silence and a few sniffles from me. He parked his car in the parking lot and stepped out. I got my things out and gave him a hug. "I'm going to miss you Leon." "You're telling me." "I'll see you again someday," I tried to reassure not him but myself. My arms dropped and I left.

    -----I bounced with excitement as I literal ran through the airport. It's been years since I've seen him. There in vast sea of faces I saw him. "Leon!" I yelled as I pushed past others. "Cadet! Man I missed you!" he exclaimed. We walked out of the airport after we got my stuff and climbed into his car. As we were talking about what we had been doing over the years, Leon's face seemed to sadden a bit. "Hey, Renate." "Ja?" He sighed, " I don't want this to affect our friendship." He paused. " I met this really nice girl. Her name is Sadie. We're dating." Something in my chest hurt, but I decided to laugh and play it off. " Well, I'm happy for you! Honestly I can't see myself dating anytime soon?" As long as it doesn't hurt our friendship, I'll be fine...
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Relationships;;

    Leon;
    Leon is her best friend. She love to hang out with him and just talk. He was her first friend she had when she first came to America. She knows that if she need a shoulder to lean on, Leon is her guy.

    With Boys;
    Renate prefers to hang out around the guys more than the girls. She especially likes the laidback or the sporty/outdoor guys. She says it's because is pretty competitive.

    With Girls;
    She usually doesn't hangout with them, but she can tolerate them. However she can't stand the girly-girl or the "I want everything and I want it now" kinds.

    With Children;
    The little ones are her weakness. Something about their innocence and cuteness makes her heart melt.

    In General;
    Renate will tolerate almost anyone, but she will some more than others. She tends find herself in the laidback people and the boyish/tomboyish crowd.

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Re: Kiamara #359

Postby Doodles » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:16 pm

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Back of the car
Blankets and me and you
We're running on perfectly wasted youth
I'll hold you close
We'll call this home tonight

And the fake tattoo that you drew on my arm
Had an X and an O
Never change who you are
Throw our hearts in the air
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Re: Kiamara #359

Postby toady » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:20 pm

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Re: Kiamara #359

Postby eugenides » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:25 pm

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Re: Kiamara #359

Postby Kenn » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:28 pm

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Re: Kiamara #359

Postby Ray. » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:42 pm

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Re: Kiamara #359

Postby wolf ;; » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:44 pm

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"Hello, and welcome to my crib."

My username is { shannon, short and simply. I chose it because its my first real name, and apart from that, I had no idea what my username could've been when I changed it anyway, and my username isn't changing anytime soon.

"Whatever floats your boat, do it."

I have decided to give this handsome kia the name of Rasha, which some might consider a female name, but I think it fits a muscular type of character.

"You want to ask me some questions? That's fine, I guess."

When I first saw this kia, 'male' sprang into my mind instantly. The natural colours make him look like more of a male then a female. So he is a brute, guy, male, whatever you want to call him.

"Now, sit back and let me tell you a story, instead of answering the question simply."

In the forest, all was silent. No birds were singing. It was one of the few quiet days, until a ear-splitting yelp split into the quiet air. The yelp full of pain or sorrow and loss. A brown and white kia, barely two years old, was staring at two bodies with wide, pale eyes. The two kia's they lay at his paws were both brown and white, like him, and he was a perfect mix of both of his parents, no one forgot their appearances. Blood was gushing from wounds on both of them, their eyes dull and showing no life. Rasha whimpered, his legs buckling under him, and he fell to the ground, staring sorrowfully at his dead parents. Its all my fault...its my fault they're dead! If only I hadn't of wondered off, they wouldn't have had to of come after me, and we all would've been safe, and still a family! He thought to himself, blaming his parents deaths on himself. They had been attacked by a group of badgers, and his mother had already been sick, so they stood no chance, his parents died saving him. But he didn't deserve to live, is what he though. He should've died instead of his parents, why did his parents get taken and not him? Was he suppose to suffer for the rest of his life, knowing it was his fault they died?
Rasha buried his head under his paws, not moving. He didn't want to move. He wish he could just die here, and be with his parents, so they could be a family once more. He wished this had never happened, he had been stupid to go, especially without telling his parents where he was. And now they were gone, because of him. But, the kia soon snapped out of his thoughts, ears twitching as he heard the sound of something coming towards him, and he scrambled onto all four paws. "Whoever you are, come out! I have teeth and claws and I'm not afraid to use them!" He yelled. But, instead of seeing a badger of fox, out came a elegant deer. It was a buck, and the deer looked at Rasha, his large horns giving off the appearance of a leader, and Rasha backed away a little bit. Was he in danger? Was he suppose to kill it? What should he do? Even if he tried to kill it, he wouldn't be able too, especially after seeing his parents die like they did. The buck continued to stare at Rasha. The male kia noticed that its eyes were the darkest of blue, like the blue of a sky in dreams. The buck then gracefully made his way over to the dead bodies of Rasha's parents, before looking at Rasha again.
Rasha tilted his head slightly, wondering what the deer was waiting for. Why wasn't it running? Why was is here in the first place? There were so many questions on his mind. He continued to stare at the buck, the two almost seemingly have a staring competition, except for the fact that both creatures were blinking, and then Rasha seemed to understand. He wasn't the only kia, or animal, to go through pain like this, and others sometimes got worse. He couldn't let this control him. Is that what the buck was here for? To teach him a lesson, even if they couldn't communicate verbally? The buck seemed to understand his pain, and kept looking at Rasha for a few moments before turning its gaze away, nudging the body of the kia's mother. Rasha just watched it, before he went to a nearby tree, the branches twisted around each other, and he began to dig a hole. It must've taken him hours, but he did it, the hole was big enough to fit both of his parents, and he dragged his parents bodies to the hole, first his mother, and then his father, their bodies side by side before he put the dirt on top of them. When he was done, he looked for the deer, but couldn't find the buck anywhere.
"Thank you for the lesson, my friend, I hope we meet again."


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"You're going now? Alright, bye, and I might see you next time, get ready to see the last answer."

Believe - Linkin Park (Nightcore version)
Why, do you ask, is this his theme song? Well, it describes him of when he was younger, when he thought he had done everything wrong, until his friend made him believe that he could be good, and that he was.
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Re: Kiamara #359

Postby paperman » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:44 pm

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    the human spirit
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    rearranged by man

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Re: Kiamara #359

Postby cece. » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:44 pm

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Hello there, Swurk. I am cece., currently a non owner in the Kiamara community. I'm hoping that that changes soon, though! I've tried out for many Kias in the last, but dropped out because I lost the connection with them. With Sequoia on the other hand, my connection won't break. Ever <3

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This Kiamara would be named Sequoia. I chose this name because I read once that sequoia means something like brave and strong in Native American. I think it fits hind well.

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Sequoia is a male. I couldn't picture him as a female.

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ᴛʜɪs ɪs ᴍʏ sᴛᴏʀʏ...
I was born and raised in the town of Fresno, California. I lived with my mother, who was a single mother. She had no husband, nor did she want one. I was unexpected, but she didn't care. She still loved me like a mother does.
When I was a young pup, I was obsessed with nature, especially trees. My mother told me that she named me Sequoia because I reminded her of the beautiful sequoias at the national park she used to work at. Every night I would throw myself on the couch with a bottle of water, and turn on Animal Planet and watch until my eyes could no longer stay open. My mother would come in and stroke the hair off of my face and carry me upstairs to my petite sized bedroom. She would tuck me into bed and kiss me gently on the forehead.
On my 8th birthday, mother had a surprise for me. A surprise I can never forget. My mother told me she was going to take me to see a sequoia tree. I stood there, shocked and surprised, and I started to cry. I've waited my whole life to hear this!
I hugged her tightly, sobbing into her baby blue t-shirt. When I looked up at her, her dark green eyes looked down on me and she smiled lightly. I smiled back, and said 'thank you.'
All mother did was smile back and kiss me on the head. I couldn't understand why mother was sing this way, but all I cared about at the moment was getting to see a sequoia tree. Later that evening, we packed our clothes and went to bed extra early so we could get up early in the morning and drive to Sequoia National Park. Early in the morning, about 5:00, we got our luggage and hit the road. On our road trip there, we saw many deer and one brown bear. I showed mother, but I don't think she cared.
When we got to Sequoia National Park, I was in awe. When we first entered the park, hundreds upon hundreds of sequoia trees scattered the area. My mouth was wide open when I heard my mother laugh at me. "Close your mouth, or bugs will fly in there." I quickly closed my mouth, my face flushing red. I was too busy looking up at the trees when I heard my mothers voice breast he silence. "Come on, Sequoia. I didn't drive 3 1/2 hours to see you sit in a car and drool all over the car. Get out and admire their true beauty." I obeyed my mothers command and exited the vehicle. Looking up, I about feel backwards. "Mother, t-there s-so tall!" She laughed lightly, and wrapped her arm around me. "Now, go touch it. Feel its smooth bark. Try and see if you can wrap your arms around it." I nodded quickly and sprinted over to a nearby tree. Lighting my hand, I placed it on the sequoia. I closed my eyes, and wrapped my arms around the tree. Well, what I could reach.
My mother came over to me, and lightly tapped my shoulder. Alarmed by the touch, I turned around. My mother was smiling, holding out her hand, and in the palm of her hand was a necklace with a tree on it. But not any tree. A sequoia tree. I took it from her and placed it around my neck. "Thank you mother." I said quietly, and gave her a hug. She wrapped her arms around me and herded me to her car. I got in, buckled my seatbelt and we drive off, away from the national park. I felt tear rush down my cheek, but quickly wiped them away. We reached a small motel and we stayed there for the night. That night, I held the necklace close to my heart. "Today was, magical." And indeed it was. It was the day I came face to face with a sequoia.

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I'd like to say thank you to everyone that has commissioned me art or supported me throughout this competition. The competition here is very hard and it makes me happy to see people supporting me. I do hope this Kia goes to a loving new home and the owner will spoil him with art and make him feel loved.
Also, Swurk, this is my extra.

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Re: Kiamara #359

Postby tea! » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:55 pm

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