Lenarion #3 - Check by Metallic Dragon

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Lenarion #3 - Check

Postby Metallic Dragon » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:03 pm

What is a Lenarion?

Lenarions are large and dangerous beasts that resemble a kangaroo in build. They have long pointed ears with a small curl of fur at the tip. Their forepaws only have two long and seemingly delicate fingers with razor-sharp claws used for ripping and tearing. The beak that serves as their mouth is equipped with strong pincers that hold their prey tightly once caught, leaving almost no chance of escape. Lenarions are carnivorous and therefore only eat meat, preferring it raw. Their tail is thick and muscular, though it is used more for keeping them balanced while sitting. Lenarions never move about on all fours, hopping like their kangaroo counterparts instead.

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A pair of green eyes stare at you from behind the twenty foot tall fence. The lenarion hops along the fence as you make your way toward the gate, seemingly unaware of the dangerous beast trailing a short distance away. From your pocket, you pull a ring of keys, slipping a large brass one into the padlock and turning it.
The lenarion's ears twitch at the click of the lock and it crouches slightly, preparing to attack. It's clawed fingers curl in anticipation of the hunt as you open the gate and take a step inside, closing and locking it behind you. You don't make it a single step before you find yourself lying flat on your face as a thick tail swats at your knees. You start to try and push youself to your feet, but that same tail presses against your spine as the beast's pincers click anxiously. You manage to lift your face from the dust and come eye to eye with the beast, its hot breath blowing into your face as it exhales.
You suck in a breath, and then begin to laugh, "Got me again you silly thing, I swear one of these days I'll catch you sleeping." An excited clicking chatter fills your ears and you smile as the weight eases off your back, allowing you to sit up.


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Story:
It was a normal day, except for being way too hot for my tastes. Oh well. I'll get used to it eventually.I told myself. Well, I hoped I would. Truthfully, I probably wouldn't, and I would be overjoyed when this vacation ended. I looked down at the worn list of things to do in my hand. 3: See at least 3 awesome wild animals I read. "Well. I guess I can start with that." I didn't really think it would be a problem - in fact, I was terrified I might step on something. But of course, that's just the way I am. I had another problem - I could hardly see, being unable to look up at the sky. I hated that problem with my eyes. Sometimes, I wonder why they're like that. Even the sunglasses didn't help all that much. I managed to glance quickly to the side as I heard something loud. Vultures on a carcass? I guess that qualifies. At least I'd never even seen a real live vulture before. Cursing my terror, I stomped through the grass, as close as I could get. It looked like the dead thing was a small kangaroo. Why would there be a kangaroo here? I wondered, walking away again. I decided to go through the grass for a while. Maybe it would help a little with my fear. It was in this way I found a snake, weaving its way between the grass stems. I hope it's not venomous . . . I thought worriedly as I walked a few steps behind it. Following it for a short distance, I found what it was searching for: a warm, flat rock where it could lay in the sun. That's two - just one more . . . I thought. Of course, three had really been my minimum, but if it was all I could find, I would be mostly satisfied. Mostly. I heard a high-pitched chirping. Well, I don't know what it is, but I do know what an animal sounds like! I walked in the direction of the sound, wondering what it was. Eventually I came on something small and Tiger-striped sitting on a mound of dirt. "And that's a check . . ." I murmured, drawing a checkmark on my list. "Three animals." Then I realized what the animal actually was. My mind flew back to the carcass the vultures had been feeding on. "Oh, no . . . no ..."
I murmured. I knew what an animal sounded like - and what one in danger sounded like. "Well, you look dangerous . . . But I'm going to give it a shot, because your mom isn't coming back, and I doubt your father is." I picked him up warily. He made no resistance. "Poor thing . . . you need a name . . . Check. That's what I'll call you, little tiger." I carried Check home with me, or rather, back to the cottage with me. It wasn't really home - but it looked like he'd be coming home eventually.


This will be a slightly longer contest. As you should know, an adult lenarion cannot be taken wild and tamed. Your job is to write a convincing short story(probably no more than 500-700 words) about how you finding this guy as a joey and raising it. Please do make sure you're at least somewhat familiar with the general species information before you start writing. If you have any questions about the species, feel free to PM me, I'd be happy to answer them. This will end on July 2nd.

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Re: Lenarion #3

Postby kitty kat. » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:35 pm

Username: hush, hush
Name:虎 pronounced-Tora
"tiger" in Japanese
Gender: male
Story: (max 500-700 words) i ran down the dusty road away from the only home i ever knew. it was hot and i didnt know what to do. they were so infuriating i couldnt stand it. i couldnt stand my parents judging me, having these expectations i couldnt live up to. i looked back hoping my parents werent there. i shouldered my pack and kept running towards the unknown world ahead of me. i stoped running after a mile and started walking. no thoughts filled my head just the sight of the empty deserted road. i continued till i came to a beautiful creature i had only heard of in books. "A Lenarion," i whispered. it looked up at me and and slowly walked toward me. i acted calmly and took some food out of my pocket and offered it to him. he carefully took it and sniffed it and ate it. he looked back like expecting someone to be there. maybe hes a run away like me i thought. after he swollowed i started and he followed. we became traveling buddies and helped each other out
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Re: Lenarion #3

Postby Ben Kenobi » Sat Jun 29, 2013 11:23 am

Username:デス・ザ・キッド
Name: Frigo
Gender: male
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I was walking along the snake like dunes if the desert the blazing sun glaring down on me. My water supply and food rations were exhausted and I barely had anything left in me. I was stumbling and my vision was blurry twisting the world around me. I was searching for an oasis I had yet to find. Every passing second felt like hours as I tripped along the sand. Dead bushes and rocks were all I had seen for miles. I stumbled up a large sand dime when I saw it. A medium sized pool of water with trees hanging over it. Now driven I stumbled towards it crazily. If I had been hydrated and fueled I would have noticed some thing was following me. As I'm inches or less away from the water a small creature pounces on me causing me to fall. I couldn't move and found myself being squished. The creature sniffed me and made strange clicking sounds. It got off me and I crawled slowly and quietly to the water and filled my water up. I grabbed the solution and began I purify it. I sat back on one of the tree trunks as the creature came up and inspected me. It made several clicking sounds and tried to nip at me. I attempted to call it a freako but it came out Frigo. The creature perked its ears and leaned into my face. I got up to check the water an agonizing hour later an the creature pounced on me again. I have up and admitted that this was the end. The creature got off of me and went to the water. He took a sip and clicked again. I was thinking he thought I was dead so I crawled slowly and quietly to the water bottle and took large gulps of it. I leaned back again as night fell. The creature fell asleep and so did I. I decided to fill my wage bottle up purify it then et out while it was asleep. When about an hour past I got up and attempted to get away but the creature woke up and clicked. I sighed and went back grabbing my bag. I noticed the creatures foot was shaped odly so I went up and cooed to it. I inspected its leg and found it to be broken. He must have been hungry the whole time, mut have wanted something in my back pack. I shrugged an undid my back pack and grabbed the source of the food. A small energy bar. I gave it to the creature and it clicked happily. I shrugged and yelped as it picked my bag up in its arms. He jumped off me and followed me as I fed it the remainder if my food. We traveled for hours until we found my camp. Ever since Frego has stayed with me.
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Re: Lenarion #3

Postby Neb » Tue Jul 02, 2013 9:01 am

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Name:TigerClaw
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It was a bright day and I was helping out at the Lenarion adoption center. I was feedi them, washing them(which is very hard to do) and watching them get good owner...all but one which was a
Slient, quiet but deadly joey Lenarion. I liked to call him Tigerclaw...I know it sounds
Kinda lame but it fit with him well.

One morning I was heading out to help at the adoption center and saw Tiger. He was trying to hunt and I watched. He stalked his prey which I could see now was a small mouse. He crouched low and stalked. And then he pounced with a limp mouse in his pinchers. I smiled I tryed to let him but he ran off
To the other side of the gate.

I watched him grow over the months, he was gething taller and his pincers grow sharper and his hunting skills better. He finally let me pet him every time I fed him. But he still felt kinda far away...


I was walking around the wilderness for my break. The area is we're
Most wild Lenarions could be found. I felt kinda stupid waking around without any type of protection. But it was a hot day and hopefully nothin wanted to bask out here. I walked for a few
Mins and saw a wild Lenarion...and it stared at me clicking. It's fur blended in with the yellow grass do I didn't see it until I was face to face with it. I backed up slowly. It followed me slowly and clicked. I'm guessing you should never run from a wild one but I turned and ran back screaming.
Then I saw another Lenarion and almost ran into...Tigerclaw! He clicked at the other Lenarion to back off while I hid behind him.

The wild Lenarion clicked and started to circle Tigerclaw who was younger than the wild one. He clicked back and rammed into the wild one. The wild Lenarion rammed and bit him. Tiger rammed the wild one and bit him back clicking. The wild one fell and got up running the other way back.

"Thanks Tigerclaw...wait how did you get out of your cage?" I asked him petting him
All he said was "Click"
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Re: Lenarion #3

Postby Umbrakinesis » Wed Jul 03, 2013 3:25 am

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Name:
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It was a normal day, except for being way too hot for my tastes. Oh well. I'll get used to it eventually.I told myself. Well, I hoped I would. Truthfully, I probably wouldn't, and I would be overjoyed when this vacation ended. I looked down at the worn list of things to do in my hand. 3: See at least 3 awesome wild animals I read. "Well. I guess I can start with that." I didn't really think it would be a problem - in fact, I was terrified I might step on something. But of course, that's just the way I am. I had another problem - I could hardly see, being unable to look up at the sky. I hated that problem with my eyes. Sometimes, I wonder why they're like that. Even the sunglasses didn't help all that much. I managed to glance quickly to the side as I heard something loud. Vultures on a carcass? I guess that qualifies. At least I'd never even seen a real live vulture before. Cursing my terror, I stomped through the grass, as close as I could get. It looked like the dead thing was a small kangaroo. Why would there be a kangaroo here? I wondered, walking away again. I decided to go through the grass for a while. Maybe it would help a little with my fear. It was in this way I found a snake, weaving its way between the grass stems. I hope it's not venomous . . . I thought worriedly as I walked a few steps behind it. Following it for a short distance, I found what it was searching for: a warm, flat rock where it could lay in the sun. That's two - just one more . . . I thought. Of course, three had really been my minimum, but if it was all I could find, I would be mostly satisfied. Mostly. I heard a high-pitched chirping. Well, I don't know what it is, but I do know what an animal sounds like! I walked in the direction of the sound, wondering what it was. Eventually I came on something small and Tiger-striped sitting on a mound of dirt. "And that's a check . . ." I murmured, drawing a checkmark on my list. "Three animals." Then I realized what the animal actually was. My mind flew back to the carcass the vultures had been feeding on. "Oh, no . . . no ..."
I murmured. I knew what an animal sounded like - and what one in danger sounded like. "Well, you look dangerous . . . But I'm going to give it a shot, because your mom isn't coming back, and I doubt your father is." I picked him up warily. He made no resistance. "Poor thing . . . you need a name . . . Check. That's what I'll call you, little tiger." I carried Check home with me, or rather, back to the cottage with me. It wasn't really home - but it looked like he'd be coming home eventually.
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Re: Lenarion #3

Postby Metallic Dragon » Wed Jul 03, 2013 7:32 am

Bump, Just a reminder that this is ending a little later today^^
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Re: Lenarion #3

Postby Metallic Dragon » Wed Jul 03, 2013 2:18 pm

Midnightbird wrote:
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It was a normal day, except for being way too hot for my tastes. Oh well. I'll get used to it eventually.I told myself. Well, I hoped I would. Truthfully, I probably wouldn't, and I would be overjoyed when this vacation ended. I looked down at the worn list of things to do in my hand. 3: See at least 3 awesome wild animals I read. "Well. I guess I can start with that." I didn't really think it would be a problem - in fact, I was terrified I might step on something. But of course, that's just the way I am. I had another problem - I could hardly see, being unable to look up at the sky. I hated that problem with my eyes. Sometimes, I wonder why they're like that. Even the sunglasses didn't help all that much. I managed to glance quickly to the side as I heard something loud. Vultures on a carcass? I guess that qualifies. At least I'd never even seen a real live vulture before. Cursing my terror, I stomped through the grass, as close as I could get. It looked like the dead thing was a small kangaroo. Why would there be a kangaroo here? I wondered, walking away again. I decided to go through the grass for a while. Maybe it would help a little with my fear. It was in this way I found a snake, weaving its way between the grass stems. I hope it's not venomous . . . I thought worriedly as I walked a few steps behind it. Following it for a short distance, I found what it was searching for: a warm, flat rock where it could lay in the sun. That's two - just one more . . . I thought. Of course, three had really been my minimum, but if it was all I could find, I would be mostly satisfied. Mostly. I heard a high-pitched chirping. Well, I don't know what it is, but I do know what an animal sounds like! I walked in the direction of the sound, wondering what it was. Eventually I came on something small and Tiger-striped sitting on a mound of dirt. "And that's a check . . ." I murmured, drawing a checkmark on my list. "Three animals." Then I realized what the animal actually was. My mind flew back to the carcass the vultures had been feeding on. "Oh, no . . . no ..."
I murmured. I knew what an animal sounded like - and what one in danger sounded like. "Well, you look dangerous . . . But I'm going to give it a shot, because your mom isn't coming back, and I doubt your father is." I picked him up warily. He made no resistance. "Poor thing . . . you need a name . . . Check. That's what I'll call you, little tiger." I carried Check home with me, or rather, back to the cottage with me. It wasn't really home - but it looked like he'd be coming home eventually.


I don't know why, but this story just struck a cord with me. Love it <3 Congrats!
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Re: Lenarion #3 - Check

Postby Umbrakinesis » Wed Jul 03, 2013 2:46 pm

Oh, wow . . .
Just . . .
Thank you. I'll love him forever.

All of my posts sound weird when I win something . . .
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