[DecafBunny]

so if we didnt fully finish the play but have some of the wips their and the art is about the whole play will i be disqualified or have points deducted or something like that ;A;

[PolarAzulTigris]

Username:
Juliet.
Name:
Benzaiten
Name of The Japanese Goddess of Love and Beauty
Here is more info on the goddess
Age:
19 Years Old
Story:

(Read Left to right
It was fun doing the art but the markings are a bit hard but Practice makes Perfect right? :'3)

Characters;
Benzaiten-弁財天-The Japanese Goddess of love
Benzaiten-弁財天 [Benny] - Main Character
Aki-明 [Means Bright in Japanese] Benzaiten's Mother - Used to be a Dancer
Haruo-春男 [Means Spring Man in Japanese] Benzaiten's Father - Used to be a Actor
Takeshi-武 [Means Fierce,Violent Warrior in Japanese] Benzaiten's fiance
Kenta-健太 [Means Healthy,Strong,Big and Stout in Japanese] Benzaiten's Best Friend



Act one : The Birth Of A Miracle That Was Cursed
{The young couple tried so hard they tried and tried and they prayed every night for a young child}
Setting: [In their Traditional Japanese House at the table sipping tea quietly and eating rice]


Aki: Bbut Why Haruo?! Whhy were THEY blessed,why?Why not ... us?
Haruo: II-I Don't understand b-but We have to be strong...To show Benzaiten,The Goddess of Love,that we do love each other enough for a young one and that no matter what we will still love one another!Maybe then,maybe,she will convince Amaterasu that We DO deserve one.
Aki: Haruo...Yyou Know what the doctor said though...that...that ...[She Breaks Down Crying and Falls to her knees,using her paws to cover her face]
Haruo: I-I know...Shh Shh It's Gonna Be okay!... [He walks over to her and Hugs her letting her use his shoulder]
Aki: [Sobbing loudly] W-Why Us?!
Haruo: Benzaiten wants us to wait when the time is right then at that right moment ... just the right moment, The baby will come... [Sighs]
[ As Time goes by it quickly turns evening into night fully,As Aki Lay asleep Haruo is Praying to the Gods and Goddesses for a child.He hears someone calling his name out side in his yard.]
Haruo: Who is out there?! [opens his door and sees the sakura tree in full bloom,he is shocked] Whhat?! [He hears the voice again and he looks around to see a woman under the tree who looked like she was glowing.]
Benzaiten: Haruo,Come here,sit with me
Haruo: [Stunned and almost completely frozen] W-who Are you...[He stops and thinks for a moment] Yyou...Yyou can't bbe!Tthis iisnt Possible!
Benzaiten: [Softly laughs and stands up] Shh it is... I wouldn't have come if i would have known you weren't so loyal...[she stopped for a moment] No I would have actually.You Mate,Your sweet depressed Hurting Aki...I came to help her smile.I do See you both Love each other very much.I really wish that I could help more ...I really do but this is all i can do for you...
Haruo: [He just watched the beautiful goddess talk,amazed by her]
Benzaiten: [walks up to Haruo] Where is your wife?
Haruo: Uh...Uh This way! [Leads Benzaiten to his wifes bed]
Aki: [Sobbing lightly in her sleep]
Benzaiten: Oh sh sh sh You poor girl [Wipes tear off Aki's Cheek] You soon shall be blessed with a young child.A girl,but i must warn you that if she dances,she will perish.Now I must go,goodbye and remember no dancing for the young one.
[9 months pass,Aki indeed did get pregnant,it made them both very happy,though when the egg came he was very protective.Aki Got weaker and weaker from the birth...sometimes making haruo break down under the Sakura tree,making him beg the goddess.]

Act Two : Our Little Performer
{Young Benny,Ever so obliviant to her fate,for now though her mind would be on the art of dance.During this Act Benny Realizes that being young does not free you from the pain of loss.}
Benny: Daddy,Daddy! [Runs to her fathers side] Look! [Holds out a Small paper] Its a ... what did she call it again... [She stopped to think]
Haruo: A sli-[He was quickly shushed by Benny's Tail Covering his mouth]
Benny: I know this one! Its urm...Uh..
Aki:[She is leaning on the board that helped stable part of the roof] A slip Perhaps?Are You having a recital?Without me?
Benny: Momma! [Smiles Happily and rushes to her mother,hugging her as she get there] Your back from the hospital!For good?
Aki:[Chuckles] No but just for the weekend,Umpf [Groans in pain]
Haruo: [Runs to aki] My dear,are you okay? Do you need to go back to the hospital,maybe its for the best.
Aki:Nno Im fine just a cramp,thats all it is.[Smiles at Benny] Now Benny may i see that slip of yours?
Benny: Her frown quickly turned into a smile and her ears popped up in excitement as she handed her mother the slip] Ssure Momma!
Aki: Benny,could you please go get momma a pen?
Benny: Ssure! I'll be back soon![Rushes off to go find a pen]
Aki: [Coughs]
Haruo: Aki!My sweet why are you here?! You weren't scheduled to come back tell next week!You know that!You could strain yourself...[Pauses] Even...Kill yourself!
Aki: [she looked down at the permission slip and sighed] I know...But Benny...
Haruo: How are you supposed to get better for benny?
Aki:[Looks at recital date] Im going to the recital,thats final Haruo.
Harou:[Knowing he had no chance of defeating her stubbornness he sighed] When is the date?
Aki: ...The 15th of March ...
Haruo: [shocked] Aaki! That your-
Aki: Shh I know...But this is for Benny...Our little Performer [Smiles faintly and wipes the tears from her eyes]
Benny: I'm Back [Smiles brightly] Here momma the pen,its your favorite![Hands her the pen]
Aki: AH yes this pen IS my favorite and I love it!Oh but i don't know ... I Think I love you and your Papa more. [Signs slip]
{By Signing that Slip,Aki basically Signed her own death}


Act Three : Falling In Deep And Coming Out Broken
{Benny Finds What The meaning of being loved feels like , finding love and also what losing love feel like.She will meet reality,envy,jealousy,loss and abandonment.}
Setting: Benny's Dance Recital,She is the Leading Faerie...so much glitter *A* <3
Benny: [She came out,twirling around,spinning doing flips and looks down and smiles softly at her mother and father.]
Aki:[Smiles back at Benny but when Benny Looks away she lets out a small moan of pain.]
Haruo:[He didn't notice Aki's Grunt,his eyes were on Benny,like all the other eyes were.Benny shined and took away the other kids spotlight.She was very graceful and light.]
{After two hours the dance recital ended and Benny was just getting off stage}
Benny: [Runs to her mother]Momma how did I do?[Jumping up and down in a excited manor]
Aki: Very well! You took away the spotlight,you shined like a star and you were as swift as a feather!
Benny: [Blushes,obviously embarrassed] Why thanks momma but the others were just as great!
Aki: You made me Very proud and your father too!Why I bet he is bragging to his friends right now!
Benny: Thats Papa for ya' [Laughs]
Aki: Are you ready to go?
Benny: [She nodded] Yep,I got everything...wait my bottle!I'll be back in a jiffy!
Aki:[waved back to her daughter as she ran off] Oh my...! No! Please Gods No Not now! Just a few more hours is all I ask!Please![She cried out in pain]I love you...I love you bbennny...I love yo-...[Silence]
Benny: [ runs back with bottle] Got it! [Notices her mother fainted on the ground] PAPA! [she screamed]
{Benny's mother was rushed to the hospital and taken into surgery}
Benny: Papa...you...you never told me what was wrong with ... [she stopped not wanting this to be true...not for her mother...Not for the kindness bean she had ever met]
Haruo: SS-She has been weak every since you were young,her heart is failing Benny...Its...Its your fault!She wouldn't have been this way if you weren't born!
Benny:I...I...M-My ... Fau-...[She couldn't say another word,tears began to roll down her cheeks and she began to sob]
Haruo: [Starts to feel bad that he snapped on her] B-Benny I-I didn't mean it I just...I...[Goes to hug Benny]
Benny: [Flinches and runs away down the hospital hall.She Bumps into someone.]
Stranger:Oh My! Im so sorry! Miss are you okay?
Benny: [Opens eyes,still soaked with tears and looks up] I-Im fine [Stands up quickly,stepping backwards away from the white male in front of her.He Had silver eyes and long white curly fur.]
Stranger: [Looks at her once more and steps closer to her and wipes off her tears] Its gonna be okay,It'll always be okay.
Benny: [Flinches at his touch] How will it be okay?! My Mother is Dying...because of me...my loving father now hates me and I have no other family! How?!How does that make everything okay?!
Stranger: You have to get through the rough times to get to the good times.[Smiles] Here I'll Give you a good time!I'll show you all the cool things about this hospital then you'll forget the bad times long enough that soon enough you'll be back to all your good times.
Benny: Rreally?
Stranger: Really.By the way Im Kenta! I just turned 10 years old today!Whats your name?
Benny: Oh...Happy birthday...I'm Benzaiten but my Paren-...Others call me Benny.
Kenta: I like it [he smiles at her] Now c'mon lets go explore! [grabs her hand and drags her along with him]
{After about two hours of playing benny's father finds her and takes her and Kenta to her mothers room.Her father waits out in the hall}


Act Four: The Forbidden Dance Of The Heart
She is engaged to someone she does not love,someone who wouldn't care for her,someone abusive.She would be beaten every night but that would not break her spirit.She danced the pain away,she danced in the moonlight,under the blossom tree and above the pond on the rocks.She danced in her breath taking kimono and with her beautiful pink ribbon.She danced like she used to dance with him
Act Five : The Final Breath
wip

Her mom dies and her dad never showed her the box of her mothers gift
kenta slips in the pond... and yeah

Dramatic Theme Music:
Eternity
River Flows in You
Kiss the rain
Love Sakura Tree
Four seasons (Reminds me of act three)
Empty Performance trip (Sequel to Four Seasons)

Congrats hun! <3 RU to Ravendarus. She has been posted already.

[Ravendarus]

O_O... m-my heart just burst! I WON A BEAN?! I ACTUALLY WON! AND JULIET! You too! Congrats hon your form was amazing and I loved the art!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH POLAR! AHHH!!

I think my heart might explode right now I'm so excited!

[DecafBunny]

Tthanks so much ;W;
so this is how it feels!
Excitement,fear,happiness,Suffocation and much more ;W;
I just Cant explain how i feel im so happy *Hugs Benny* Mine eue-
I am really surprised I won! The other forms were just so pretty ;W; and soooooo good ;w;
congrats Raven <3
Tthank you Polar ;w;

[Wolf's Spirit]

Congrats you guys! Just realized I missed the deadline... Again. Darned school work, why did I have to take all those tests today, and not a week ago? Again congrats on winning both this one and the runner up! <3

[Sable.]

Oh my, such a pretty bean quq
Congratulations Jules <3333

[DecafBunny]

Oh my, such a pretty bean quq
Congratulations Jules <3333

Thanks ;u;

Congrats you guys! Just realized I missed the deadline... Again. Darned school work, why did I have to take all those tests today, and not a week ago? Again congrats on winning both this one and the runner up! <3

Thank you <3

[Marmoset]

Tthanks so much ;W;
so this is how it feels!
Excitement,fear,happiness,Suffocation and much more ;W;
I just Cant explain how i feel im so happy *Hugs Benny* Mine eue-
I am really surprised I won! The other forms were just so pretty ;W; and soooooo good ;w;
congrats Raven <3
Tthank you Polar ;w;

ohmygosh.. CONGRATS HUBBEH <3

[Ravendarus]

Congrats again juliet XD I noticed you said it in your little speech there!

I picked out Yumemi's Kimono and stuff! I'll show you it later on!

[DecafBunny]

Tthanks so much ;W;
so this is how it feels!
Excitement,fear,happiness,Suffocation and much more ;W;
I just Cant explain how i feel im so happy *Hugs Benny* Mine eue-
I am really surprised I won! The other forms were just so pretty ;W; and soooooo good ;w;
congrats Raven <3
Tthank you Polar ;w;

ohmygosh.. CONGRATS HUBBEH <3

Thankies ;w;

Congrats again juliet XD I noticed you said it in your little speech there!

I picked out Yumemi's Kimono and stuff! I'll show you it later on!

okay thanks again ;v;