Re: Kiamara #216

Postby rainbowdash462 » Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:56 am

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Name: Agent J
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Why does he dislike being blind?: He doesn't like it because, he can't watch Men In Black anymore.
Theme Song: Back In Time For Agent, it means to where he can see!! XD
I draw origonal art of... Kiamara's and JBDs. I'm really good. I really want a fluffy, folded eared JBD. (: I draw art of her all of the time, just without markings.
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Re: Kiamara #216

Postby ArizonaT3a » Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:02 am

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Name:Sam

Gender: Male

Why does he dislike being blind?:Sam hates being blind because he will never be able to see the beauty of life. Or even the bad, he will never fully know the meaning of life without seeing it.

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Welcome to my life, by Simple Plan
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r0U0AlL ... =endscreen
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Re: Kiamara #216

Postby strawbee » Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:43 am

Kage the shadow wrote:
Username:Kage the shadow

Name:Sam

Gender: Male

Why does he dislike being blind?:Sam hates being blind because he will never be able to see the beauty of life. Or even the bad, he will never fully know the meaning of life without seeing it.

Theme Song:
Welcome to my life, by Simple Plan
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r0U0AlL ... =endscreen


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Re: Kiamara #216

Postby strawbee » Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:43 am

-AdventureTime- wrote:Username: -AdventureTime-
Name: Agent J
Gender: Male
Why does he dislike being blind?: He doesn't like it because, he can't watch Men In Black anymore.
Theme Song: Back In Time For Agent, it means to where he can see!! XD


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Re: Kiamara #216

Postby mordacious » Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:46 am

It's open until she closes it. She said either page 4 OR Wednesday. And, as the artist, she could even extend it if she wanted to.
basically quit lol
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Re: Kiamara #216

Postby strawbee » Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:48 am

Mordacious wrote:It's open until she closes it. She said either page 4 OR Wednesday. And, as the artist, she could even extend it if she wanted to.


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Re: Kiamara #216

Postby dragonewe » Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:12 am

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"Living is easy with eyes closed."
-John Lennon
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    Username:
    You can call me pinwheel. or Righteous or Dream (from my old user name)

    Name:
    His full name is Christopher Angel Daft but he prefers his middle name. His parents (and extremely close) friends however, enjoy teasing him by calling him 'Chrissy'
    He seriously does not it enjoy it under any circumstances whatsoever.

    Gender:
    Male (of course :p)

    Why does he dislike being blind?:
    It's just another reminder of the biggest mistake he ever made that cost him his sight and his sister's leg. He especially hates the aspect of asking for help. It tears him apart being so weak and that often leads him to lash out with a spontaneous rage whenever he dwells on it too long. An obvious reason is that he's always in the dark which scares him. He always keeps his eyes open though, just hoping that somehow it's just a dream or he just has his eyes closed. Another thing is that he wasn't born blind and often wishes that he was because then he would have nothing too compare this ever-present darkness too. He often feels that this (his blindness) is what he deserves for what happened to her...

    Theme Song:
    Mumford and Sons: Little Lion Man

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"-rissy...-ssy...Chrissy!"
I opened my tired crusted-shut eyes slowly and looked up into the alert early rising ones of my baby sister, Kate.
"Chrissy! Get up! Dad just came back from hunting and Mom picked some apples! GET UP!" I moaned and rolled over on my warm bed of leaves, cobwebs and cotton fluff.
"A-of-all, call me ANGEL or I will pull your ears. B-of-all stop being so loud when it's so early. It's like, what? 6am?"
"It's noon, dummy."
Well, looks like I wasted half my day already. I fumbled myself onto all-fours, yawned deeply (much to the laughing delight of Kate), and padded down the hall into what you would call a kitchen. "He's alive!" teased my father, throwing me a small deceased mouse. "Yeah, well teenagers need their sleep." I scarfed it down hungrily and walked over to the door. "Chrissy where are you going?!" said Kate, bounding to my side. "Outside while you stay in here with Mom and Dad play-fight or something. I wanna take a walk." Mom scoffed and gave me her,' I'm sorry but you are so taking your little sister with you dangit' look. I got the message, lowered myself down for my little sister down to get onto my back and tromped out of the den with a 30 lb. chatterbox on top of me.

The day was bright and sunny. One of those days that almost makes you want to sing. I could feel the warm sun upon my back and the breeze coming from the mountains. "It's beautiful out here," I voiced to no one in particular. Kate decided she was no one in particular, "Yeah... We should go fishing down by the river!" I shrugged. Couldn't be a bad idea. "Alright." We walked on for a while before finally reaching the bank. I shimmied Kate off my back and then plunged my paw into the water. I shivered and smiled at it's coolness. Noticing the dryness of my throat I took a long drink. "Chrissy? C-can you teach my how to fish?" I turned to Kate who was looking into the rushing the water with a perplexed look on her face. "Yeah, but we're going to need some bait. Feel like digging up some worms?" She nodded eagerly. If there's one thing my sister wasn't it was a frilly girl. "Race you to the old field!" she shouted before heading off westward at full speed. I rolled my eyes. ADHD at its finest.

I followed behind at something of a trot and then noticed the sky became darker out of nowhere. Peculiar. Suddenly there was a loud snap and an ear-shattering scream. Where was Kate? "KATE!" I barked, going into a run. "CHRISSY!," came the reply as a loud pain wrought yell. I kicked it into full speed and almost fainted at what I saw. Kate's back leg was caught in a metal bear trap with blood pouring from the gash from her writhing. "Kate stop it! Stop moving!" I cried, "Let me go get some help I'll be right back!" Through sobs and muffled yelps she shook her head, "P-please don't leave me here!" I grit my teeth with pain for her and then got an idea. Our mother used to sing us to sleep with an old nursery rhyme called Loving Arms when we were little. It went like this:

Lovingly I'll hold you dear
In my arms so please don't fear
Safe and warm
You can't be torn
from my open arms

Buttercups and Daffodils
Summer warmth and Winter chills
Life and Light
I'll hold you tight
have no dark and evil frights
In my open arms

So Lovingly I'll hold you dear
Shut your eyes
let fears be stilled
Angels will watch silently
Dreams so sweet they'll bring to thee
All will be well
better than swell
Just stay in my loving arms.

"Kate, sing Mom's lullaby okay? It'll make you feel better. Pretend I'm here with you til' I get back. "She nodded and gasped for air, trying to stop her tears, "Alright, just go get Dad!" I nodded, took one last look at my sister's face and then the leg before bolting back in the direction of home.

Rain was pouring down now like Heaven's floodgates had been opened and thunder booming as if God had just gotten a strike. I didn't care. My sister was all that mattered right then. The one little girl in the world whom I would die for I couldn't even watch for 30 minutes. The time I could have spent with her. I mean, I wasn't the worst big brother ever I just kind of neglected to spend time with her at times. Maybe now I was paying for it. The words stung me as I ran but I shook them off. I'd have time to mope after I saved her life. I came to the river bed in what felt like forever and realized the quickest way to our den would be to wade through and go into the field. I jumped on without hesitation and began to cut my way through the current. The rocks on the river bed were slippery with algae and my paws kept slipping but I trudged on. Suddenly there was a crack of thunder and a bolt of white lightning hit a weeping willow tree 15 feet away. I jumped from my skin, lost my footing and got swept away with the current. "No, oh no!" I screamed. "Help! HELP! H E L-" There was a sudden sharp pain in the back of my head, a taste of blood in my mouth and then complete soundless dark void.

E P I L O G U E:

The sharp pain in the back of Angel's head was actually a branch that had come off of the willow tree and struck into the occipital lobe of his brain. He went unconscious on impact and floated almost lifeless down the river until his Father found him. His mother took great strides to care for him after the accident but there was no way to save his vision. The blindness was permanent. Kate was soon found afterwards and was unfortunately not able to have her leg saved but was traumatized and barely goes by the river any longer. Angel was never really the same again. He grew colder, more depressed and angrier day by day. The only thing or Kiamara that really brought him any peace was Kate. Her smile, laugh, and childlike innocence was all that helped him through that first year. With time though, Angel became kinder but not by much. All he wants to do is see again and get Kate's leg back. To reverse that heckish day. A most impossible but lovely dream for him.
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Re: Kiamara #216 - Pendulum

Postby knifedoq » Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:53 am

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The worst feeling is isn't being lonely.
It's the feeling of being forgotten by
someone you can't forget.
-anonymous


Username;;
f r o s t
Name;;
Pendulum
Gender;;
Male
Why does he dislike being blind?;;
Pendulum wrote:
I feel after I became blind like this, I feel there is no beauty. No actual reason to
live anymore. So I hide it. I try to look like I can see, but all of them eventually
find out. All I gain are more bullies, and it hurts. I hurt. Sometimes I think
"What if I wasn't here?" I think it would make other things better. I am a
burden on my pack. A bit of unneeded trash.
I barely make it by everyday, just barely finding enough scraps to just
fill my stomach. I don't think there is any reason to live in this world
anymore. Who knows? Maybe it would would be best for all of us.

Theme Song;;
Fix You by Coldplay
This is just what Pendulum thinks of and feels like. If there was nothing, or
anything in the world. A change. It would make the world better.


Pendulum's story;;

The Beginning

Hooded figures dashed through sheeting rain
whispering in hurried voices.
"We should leave him here. Canse, you know that we can't keep him. This
boy needs to leave." The voice was hushed, but rather masculine. "Do we
have to? I mean, we could leave, just two- three of us... but then again
they'll probably track us down." The other voice was soft, low, but
feminine. "I think we will need to leave him. It's the best for him and
for us. Now let's go." The male voice was much stronger, a loud whisper.
The other Kia was on the brink of tears. The female bundled the small thing
in her coat and ran off. "I'll never forget you, Pendulum!"

That was how it started. I was found in a small alley. It was nighttime, and
cold, wet things were falling from above. Drops of silver seemed to fall from
the sky, even as I opened my eyes. A dim light was behind me, giving my a
little more warmth than I already had. A large black cloak was soaked and I
was beginning to freeze. My small frame shook and shivered in the frosty night.
And then there it was, a human. A kind creature, making soft, cooing noises
"Oh, my! You look so cold. I think you need someplace warm. Yes, indeed."
The voice said. It proceeded to shower me and pity me, but it felt good to be worried about.
and making me feel a bit better. It took off the black cloak, which was visibly
bigger than me, but smaller than the nice creature. It took me into it's
warm, dark cloak. I took my paw and stretched it out toward it's head, and
it made a light tone, shaking, but in a jolly way. I took it as a sign of pleasure.
I took my paw again, and then pushed the creatures middle area. The creature
started to move a bit faster, then soon enough, a warm light flooded into my
vision. Dark walls and a golden light were in my eyes. They set me on
something soft, then soon fell asleep.

When I woke up from my slumber, I was within a dark place. No light. No fresh air.
I pawed the walls, and they bent under my touch. My back paws were scrabbling as
well. The floor bent, too. he air got mustier as I stayed inside longer, and then, one
of my claws broke through. Near the top. Light filtered in, then a small breeze shook me.
Again, small breezes came and went, now synchronized with a soft thud thud thud of
the friendly creatures. Suddenly, the top of it opened. A fresh breeze founds its way
in, and never had I felt good being cold. It dumped me on the ground and ran off.
"Thank you!" I cried after it. I didn't think it noticed. And on top of that, I was stuck
here. A cold world. A cold, unforgiving world. I saw things wheeling over me. I began
to move. In the distance, there was a soft cry to be heard, and the snow started to
clog up my paws. Again, the cry sounded. Long and mourning. But this time it was
much, much closer. I could see dark shapes in the distance, and a soft thudding
noise as well. I could see their faces. Angry and sharp, unforgiving, like this place.
They dawned on me, claws long and sharp. The creatures leapt up. All but one. She
stayed behind. And sure enough, the others landed. They raked their claws across my face.
I recoiled, then the last thing I saw was her face. Her beautiful face.


Blindness
I was on the cold ground, a sharp tang of blood in my mouth. I opened my eyes.
Or I thought I did. It was dark. Like a dark night. Like the soft room, but darker. Then it hit me.
I was blind. "A-are you alright? I'm very, very sorry about what my brothers did. I d-don't think
they really wanted to maim you. I'm extremely sorry."
"No, it's fine. I'm fine."

I knew my eyes were turquoise. I knew.
"Err, excuse me, but what color eyes do I happen to have? I know it's a silly question, but
I need to know."
"Well, they're a light turquoisy silver. Are you alright? How about you stand up?
Let's go on a walk, okay? My brothers are out hunting for us, don't worry."

My voice was deeper than I thought. My nose picked up her sweet scent, harmonizing with
her sweet voice. I told her I'd like that. I tried to stand.
"And what's you're name, miss?"
"I'm Vaire. And you?"
"Pendulum."
"Let's go. I need to take a breather. It's rather overwhelming you know, being blind now..."
"What? You're blind? Since when?"
"Since earlier. Don't worry. I need to leave."

Vaire sighed and growled, huffing.
"My brothers... I hate them. I never actually liked them. Ever since my mother
died, they've been treating me like dung."

That's when I felt her voice again. It had a new edge to it. Weaker than my own.
Thin as well.
"You know, we can escape together. Just the two of us. We could get away."
My deep voice broke the silence of the frosty air.
"I can't hunt."
Her voice sounded broken, almost on the verge of crying.
"Neither can I. We're even. Now let's go on that walk, how about it?"
I could feel her tail on my shoulder, so I tried to stand. I staggered, and almost
tripped in my own feet! Being blind is hard. I wonder if I'll be like this forever?
My voice drifted across my mind, silent but loud. Quiet but resonating.
I ran off then, not turning back. I stopped, panting as I lay down to rest.
thoughts started to cloud my mind. I pondered for a long while, not really knowing
what else the earth had in store for me. Days seemed to pass, and a pang of hunger
hit my stomach. I dismissed the thought of it.
And then my thoughts clouded my mind again.
I wonder what would have happened if I died. I think I'd be a smaller
burden.... but then again.... no. I need to stop. I'm too much weight.
Vaire would be a bit better without me. I need to stop myself. Put an end to it
To me.

I staggered around, feeling the ground escalate under my feet.
There should be a cliff around here somewhere...
The sure enough, I found it. Scents of the air rushing past.
They all rushed down from me. I lay my paws down over the air.
A sensation of jumping came over me. But no. It was deeper than that.
The urge to fall.
I took about a dozen steps back.
Then I ran.
snap!
Sharp things bit into my tail. I stopped and whined in pain.
Then Vaire's scent came in.
"What, Vaire, what is it."
I growled and turned on her, I tried to jump, but I couldn't. I couldn't do it.
"You left me. You left me all alone. How could you, Pendulum? Why? I thought we had something...
why, Pendulum? Why?"

I could hear her thud to the ground, and I could hear her sobs.
"I'm really sorry Vaire, but I just feel I've lost the will to live. No love in this world-"
"You have me, Pendulum. I.... love you...."
"Do you think I haven't noticed? I'm doing this for both of us. It's better
that way. And you know it, Vaire. You know it."

I turned around and prepared to jump. I took a step forward, but I just couldn't do it.
"If it makes you feel any better, if you jump, I'm going to jump with you, Pendulum."
Then I tumbled down. Vaire screeches followed me. Then her voice stopped.
"Vaire! Vaire! I... love you, too...."
I shouted. A pang of blood hit my nose, then some water hit me.
It's horrible to survive this world. Without her. Without Vaire.
I've been stuck in this world since.
This cold, unforgiving, cruel world.


Fix you wrote:When you try your best but you don't succeed
When you get what you want but not what you need
When you feel so tired but you can't sleep
Stuck in reverse

And the tears come streaming down your face
When you lose something you can't replace
When you love someone but it goes to waste
Could it be worse?

Lights will guide you home
And ignite your bones
And I will try to fix you

And high up above or down below
When you're too in love to let it go
But if you never try you'll never know
Just what you're worth

Lights will guide you home
And ignite your bones
And I will try to fix you

Tears stream down your face
When you lose something you cannot replace
Tears stream down your face
And I

Tears stream down your face
I promise you I will learn from my mistakes
Tears stream down your face
And I

Lights will guide you home
And ignite your bones
And I will try to fix you



the kiamaras used in pendulums history are completely made up.
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Re: Kiamara #216

Postby guqqi » Mon Apr 08, 2013 11:01 am

I see that alot of people are interested in the boy, and that they are willing to work on their forms even more ^ ^
So i am extending the end day to Friday, and i am allowing ONLY ONE extra per form.

If you are making a story, it coulds as one, but boosts your chance a bit more than other extras, since it takes more effort when writing.

If you are doing art, you may do not more than 3 pieces. The quality of the art boosts your chances. It may be ordered if you'd like.

Personality and Dislikes count as 1 Extra, do not ask if its too much, though try not to make it too shady, add detail so i can figure out how he actually acts.
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Re: Kiamara #216

Postby AWOL » Mon Apr 08, 2013 11:03 am

Thank you BlueAura! I will get started on a story tonight, I have a great idea.
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