[Keyblade]

Username: Keyblade
Equid's name: Flyr
Height: 12 hh
Age: 3
Story:
Flyr started inching into thicker, more stomach-filling pasture and began nibbling. Her sensitive ears directed her to the right, and her eyes immediately located a small ball of fur with a bouncing nose. The creature, now wondering why its solitude was interrupted, began a stare-off. It moved in closer to investigate, and Flyr's nostrils let out a treacherous sneeze that frightened the small terrestrial. It made a hasty retreat, while Flyr, unbothered, went back to her grazing.

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Username: Adventure Time!
Equid's name: Shine
Height: 12 hh
Age: 3
Story: Shine looked up, startled, as she heard the high pitched cries of a woodland creature. She wondered to the edge of the trees to find a young rabbit, trapped under a small rock. I must help him! she thought, instantly trotting over the tiny creature and moving the rock away with her hoof, nuzzleing the frightened bunny to calm him. When the rabbit was free he climbed up Shine's neck and onto her back, snuggling into her soft hair. Shine whinnied in delight, glad to have helped the bunny.

[Ourpawprints]

Username: Ourpawprints
Equid's name: Chezzie
Height: 12 hh
Age: 3
Story:
The soft whispering of the breath ruffled the mane of the equid, temporarily shooing the flies that consistently bothered her away for a few moments before they returned to biting the flesh. The breeze cooled the mare but the heat from the sun still pounded hard on the mare. She examined the land before her, searching for some source of hydration. No rivers or steams in sight she forced herself to keep walking along, discouraged. The chirping of the birds rang in the exahsted mare's ears over and over again, she attempted to ignore the painstaking screeches but simply couldn't bare to. She flicked her long tail in agitation, her throat scratchy and her tongue as rough as sandpaper. The happy sounds of the equids no longer filled the land, instead it was silenced by the pain of the drought. The mare slowed to a walk, chewing on the sun bleached blades of grass below her and savoring each droplet of dew.

Suddenly a sound caught the mare's attention. It was a chattering sound almost, one completely alien to the equid. She perked her ears at the noise, her golden yellow eyes gleaming with hope. If something was there maybe it had some sort of water source to keep it from dying out, like most of the others prey animals around this area. The mare searched intensely into the grass, seeing a ball of russet brown fluff. It's large ears and big feet stood out, it's fur softer then anything she had ever seen before. It was a rabbit, it seemed. Not just any rabbit though. It was a very healthy, lively rabbit as it binkied about. Hope gleamed in the mare and she trotted after the bunny as it bolted away from her. It lead her into the woods not far away and inside something caught the mare's eye. A pond! She bolted over the crystal water and lapped up the clear water then let out a whinny for the others to come. Before long the rest of the herd was here, happily enjoying themselves with their new found water source while the bunny galloped off, a smug expression across it's face.

its supposed to be a short story

Oh... was that too long? Sorry. I didn't know the limit of how much we could write.

[AmigoGirl]

Username: Ourpawprints
Equid's name: Chezzie
Height: 12 hh
Age: 3
Story:
The soft whispering of the breath ruffled the mane of the equid, temporarily shooing the flies that consistently bothered her away for a few moments before they returned to biting the flesh. The breeze cooled the mare but the heat from the sun still pounded hard on the mare. She examined the land before her, searching for some source of hydration. No rivers or steams in sight she forced herself to keep walking along, discouraged. The chirping of the birds rang in the exahsted mare's ears over and over again, she attempted to ignore the painstaking screeches but simply couldn't bare to. She flicked her long tail in agitation, her throat scratchy and her tongue as rough as sandpaper. The happy sounds of the equids no longer filled the land, instead it was silenced by the pain of the drought. The mare slowed to a walk, chewing on the sun bleached blades of grass below her and savoring each droplet of dew.

Suddenly a sound caught the mare's attention. It was a chattering sound almost, one completely alien to the equid. She perked her ears at the noise, her golden yellow eyes gleaming with hope. If something was there maybe it had some sort of water source to keep it from dying out, like most of the others prey animals around this area. The mare searched intensely into the grass, seeing a ball of russet brown fluff. It's large ears and big feet stood out, it's fur softer then anything she had ever seen before. It was a rabbit, it seemed. Not just any rabbit though. It was a very healthy, lively rabbit as it binkied about. Hope gleamed in the mare and she trotted after the bunny as it bolted away from her. It lead her into the woods not far away and inside something caught the mare's eye. A pond! She bolted over the crystal water and lapped up the clear water then let out a whinny for the others to come. Before long the rest of the herd was here, happily enjoying themselves with their new found water source while the bunny galloped off, a smug expression across it's face.

its supposed to be a short story

Oh... was that too long? Sorry. I didn't know the limit of how much we could write.

its on the front page

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Its really tricky to write a good story in 5 lines! I ended up with 6 so I had to merge some lines together XD

[Ourpawprints]

Username: Ourpawprints
Equid's name: Chezzie
Height: 12 hh
Age: 3
Story:
Chezzie wandered along the ground, the raging heat hitting her hard on her sides; step by step she making her way forward, dehydrated from the drought. Suddenly something caught the mare's golden eyes, a small ball of fluff before her; doing binkies around her before bolting off. Bewildered, Chezzie followed the hare reluctantly, her throat hurting horribly from thirst. She followed the rodent as it lead her into a lush forest with a large lake in the center, the shade of the treetops protecting the land from the rays of the sun. Filled with hope when she saw the glimmering water Chezzy cantered over to the lake and lapped up the cool water, whining to the rest of her heard to quench their thirst with this new water source that may be their savior from the drought.

Fixed it =)

[opti-mism]

Username: goldenrose7
Equid's name: Fire-Blossom
Height: 12 hh
Age: 3
Story: Blossom lifted her head, hearing a sharp crack in the brush besides her. She poked her head curiously into the bush, sniffing around until she flicked her tail, coming nose-to-nose with a mousy-gray bunny. She laughed, as she bunny hopped closer, his white tail flicking behind him in excitement as he nudged her nose, trying to lead her towards... something. Pricking her large chestnut ears, she let him lead her towards the small patch of trees, a whole mass of bunnies hopping around inside. Laying down, Blossom greeted the bunnies with soft whuffs and snorts, letting them hop all over her, and life was great.

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Wow o . o Those are long sentences!

[Wifflebee]

Username: She-Hound
Equid's name:
WIP
Height: 12 hh
Age: 3
Story:
WIP

[VampireMessageNinja]

Username: CrazyWolfFreak
Equid's name: Summer Dream (Summer for short)
Height: 12 hh
Age: 3
Story:

Summer never had seen a creature like that before...
Well, with long ears, like she had, but... What kind of body? So tiny, could it be? - "Uncle Roberto, Is that you?"
FAIL xD

Well, I'm German, and English isn't that easy... Did my best ^^