by persimmon » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:25 am
username: MelonBreeze
name: Jiayi
number: 58
opinions/critique?: I really like this style with the finer lines for the edits and the simplicity in the design. The horizontal lines are also unique, and I like how you mix them in, but I feel like some of the solid colored parts (such as the red in the hair or the brown on the face) might be better without horizontal lines (so that the horizontal lines in turn emphasize the gradient areas). Overall, I find this style very nice, and I also like your old style as well; both are lovely and contain a nice simplicity!
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