Re: [kalon 1338] rooster

Postby avaloafe » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:03 am

      username: ajohanna
      name: akatora
      number: 51
      opinions/critique? i really love the style with the leg fur and the hair swoosh! the only thing that i dislike at the moment are those horizontal lines?
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Re: [kalon 1338] rooster

Postby AboveAspen » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:10 am

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Number: 52

Opinions/critique?: I REALLY adore these soft colours?? Plus the reference to the rooster is super cute! I don't have any complaints about your style!
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Re: [kalon 1338] rooster

Postby saturnus » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:15 am

username: saturnus
name: libra
number: 53
opinions/critique? i think its really nice!! i super love this design and i like how the lines seem to be glowing/blurring! my only critique is maybe lowering the opacity of the horizontal lines?? i really like em and the overall effect it gives but it seems a tiny bit strong
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Re: [kalon 1338] rooster

Postby artemis, » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:16 am

    username: artemis;
    name: gemini
    number: 54
    opinions/critique?: i adore long fur edits! and that hair, gosh??! i've always loved your style.
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Re: [kalon 1338] rooster

Postby tenturo » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:19 am

      username: tenturo
      name: dexter // dex
      number: 55
      opinions/critique?: i really love this bean ! the edits look so nice,, ive seen drawings and such with that kind of style for fur and i absolutely adore it ! i genuinely cant think of anything really constructive , although i do somewhat agree with number 53's thing about maybe lowering the opacity on the horizontal lines , they throw me off a little







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Postby root » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:21 am

    username: sundead
    name: rory
    number: 56
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    i love it!! it's so soft and i really like the simplicity. the lines also add a lot of texture and make it really unique!! i wouldn't change anything
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Re: [kalon 1338] rooster

Postby mango marmalade,, » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:23 am

username: mango marmalade,,
name: isaac
number: 57
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i think that overall the design & muted colors look very nice! the only thing is that the hair seems to fall a bit unnaturally over the eyes? i'm not sure exactly how to describe it but it just seems a little off to me. besides that the design has a beautiful palette and i like the shine & tail!
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Re: [kalon 1338] rooster

Postby persimmon » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:25 am

username: MelonBreeze
name: Jiayi
number: 58
opinions/critique?: I really like this style with the finer lines for the edits and the simplicity in the design. The horizontal lines are also unique, and I like how you mix them in, but I feel like some of the solid colored parts (such as the red in the hair or the brown on the face) might be better without horizontal lines (so that the horizontal lines in turn emphasize the gradient areas). Overall, I find this style very nice, and I also like your old style as well; both are lovely and contain a nice simplicity!
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Re: [kalon 1338] rooster

Postby gravestones » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:29 am

      username: Vyntage.
      name: tba
      number: 59
      opinions/critique?: Ahh I really like this style a lot! It's gotta be one of my favorites you've done. I love the hard lines and how it makes the design look softer yet stand out so much more? I can't really think of anything to change. ^^' Thank you for the opportunity to win this lovely boi <3
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Re: [kalon 1338] rooster

Postby thank my lucky stars » Wed Jan 24, 2018 11:30 am

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number: 60
opinions/critique? honestly i love this design! i like how simple it seems at first glance, very calming color palette as well! i absolutely adore the fur on the two front paws! i like the hair covering the face, the only thing i would critique is the mouth and the lines on the head and tail, it kinda made me squint to see if that was intentional or if my phone was glitching! c:
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