by Eiivanna » Wed Jan 24, 2018 9:48 am
username: Eiivanna
name: Erri
number:33
opinions/critique? The bold outline is a statement but the fact that it is black isn't my cup of tea personally, I think the thick outline is actually quite nice but for a light coloured design like this it looks a tad off because of the black (a light colour would sway me on this), that being said it is very unique and would be a good way to make it more your style. I liked your old soft designs because the lines looked so calm and blended into the design so well, however this new style is expressive and I can see it working well in the future. It definately could be a defining characteristic of your designs. Also im not sure if it's just me but I see a slight halo behind the kal that really makes it pop out of the page, I like that, and the horizontal lines im not sure if they are part of the kalon design or the style but I like them a lot too. (Unrelated the the art style I love the colour scheme of this kid)
That's just my opinion and initial thoughts though c: