HM wrote:
tiny little box, I thought your form was great! It was a bit hard to follow, but I seriously enjoyed reading through it. The idea you had was refreshing and the stories you provided certainly kept me on my toes. You honestly have some real talent here, both artwork and writing! I'd like to award you with a stub! <3
RU wrote:
true knight, I really loved your form! I loved the description of the ranks and getting a good visualization of the types of jobs these angels do was really neat. I also really enjoyed how the artwork flowed so well with the form itself. It was a very nice touch in order to give me better visualization. I only wish I learned more about the character itself! There's obviously nothing wrong with using other viscets in your form, but I feel like the focus was on Avariel more than viscet you were trying out for. But like I said, the form was still amazing and there was obviously a ton of effort put forth!
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RU wrote:
Matreats, wow! Honestly, if there was just a little more content in your form, you'd have been toe to toe with the winner. I really enjoyed and appreciated the amount of development in your form. It was very obvious to me and the other judges what kind of character you created and the story definitely pulled me into wanting to know more about this viscet. I thoroughly enjoyed reading through this form and it even had me cringing a few times as she was running with her injuries. You made the entire fight scene incredibly realistic — the pain was real for me through visualization. Your artwork definitely added something amazing to the form too. Amazing job!
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WINNER wrote:
Mint Chip, okay, your form was just.. So powerful. I loved the stories you provided and the art was such a nice touch. That little August bb loaf had me feeling all warm and fuzzy inside. Heck, the entire form had me feeling all warm and fuzzy. I love the direction you took it. The idea was original, the content was refreshing, and I just seriously thoroughly enjoyed what you came up with for this character. Through all of the ups and downs, twists and turns, I was hooked. I felt bad for the poor boy and his family who couldn't seem to get a break no matter how hard they tried, and I found myself smiling like an idiot when that prim and proper businessman noticed him. You definitely deserve this win, Mint Chip! Congratulations!
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