username: Alonzo
name: Brandr
gender: Male
story:
His axe was lightning, catching the moonlight as it cracked back and forth, making its mark with every swing. His breath hissed between parted teeth, billowing sharply along either side of his face like screaming wisps of storm cloud. His feet pounded the frosty earth like swift aftershocks.
His confidence was volcanic. One target, then the next. He was godlike.
He was surrounded by enemies, desperate to strike him down. But Brandr was unmatched in speed. He was a storm, doing all striking.
In such a rush, he lost focus.
Bark splintered in his face.
He staggered backward, blinking pine needles from his eyes.
Stupid tree.
Glowering, Brandr sat heavily. That was unexpected. He was an unstoppable fighter! No way he should have missed that tree...
It must have moved, he decided with a huff. This absolutely had to be the only tree in the forest that could move. He snarled at the offending plant, lips peeling back over his dry teeth.
“Hey, elves, stop that! I was doing so awesome that time!”
“Are you shouting at a tree?”
Brandr nearly fell onto his axe. Fitch was so silent on his feet that the wind could have carried him over.
“I was training! And this tree moved!”
Fitch gazed at the tree. “I’m surprised it didn’t flee, with your noise.”
“Hey! Some elf is messing with me.” He huffed again, pouting at the ground.
Fitch had the audacity to laugh. "You’re blaming your faults on an elf.”
Brandr bristled. “What else could it be?”
Fitch didn’t meet his eyes. “Perhaps you.”
“What?”
“Your strength is admirable. You were aptly named… ‘firebrand.’”
“See?! There’s no way—”
“You cannot dance through life on your toe-tips without taking blame for your faults.”
“My… faults?”
“Everyone makes mistakes, no matter how brave. If you're to be a true warrior, you must lower your pride. Some things are your fault.”
“Fitch, I have to die honourably to go to Valhalla!”
“Being honourable doesn’t mean being self centred.”
Brandr spluttered, but his face burned curiously. “Well, what does it mean, then?”
Fitch’s eyes were full of the moon. “Being honourable means protecting what you love. Your family. Your homeland. You don’t have to win to be worthy of Valhalla.”
Brandr was silent for a long while. He let his axe fall into the frost with a dull thud.
When he spoke again, he seemed tentative, a far cry from before.
“Do you think I can learn to do it? Be honourable… for real.”
“You must know what you’re fighting for.”
Determination flashing in his eyes, Brandr sat up straighter. “I’ll fight for my homeland! And family!” He shifted his feet. “At least… I’ll do my best.”
Fitch gave an almost invisible nod. He stood, and started to walk away.
Brandr sprang to his feet, afraid he’d said something wrong. “H-hey! Where are you going?”
Fitch didn’t turn. He simply paused.
“I’m proud of you, Brandr. You found humility.”
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(Context: This is a viking story.)
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