You're so very welcome as always Ash <3
And honestly I dont see what coukd be changed, it all sounds perfect to me ;3
Aww, I'm glad too then c:
Of course how could I not comment on your writting skills? Its outstanding n.n
Oooo, I would really love to see the next bit.
Take your time though ;B
You m'dear have inspired me to continue my abandoned story.
Here it is,
Chapter Four of 'Why The Whelkon Cry'.
I already have an idea what will happen in the fifth and final chapter of my story so hope you like it so far o-o
BAH, still, I feel like its all just descriptions and the endless nonsence of Alni's thoughts, barely anything has happened in it! ID
Oh well, too late now :B
P.s. I'm sure the commas are used to it by now, I abuse them so much its hilarious, as you can see xB Love em really :FFFFF

















