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Character Help?

Postby Moonblaze-Angel » Thu Dec 21, 2017 3:34 pm

Hey guys! I've been meaning to do one of these for a while now, but never got around to it. I have been making a character with Waardenburg's Syndrome, but would like some help polishing him up before using him on here or online. I have been researching it quite a bit, and I would like some second opinions on what he looks like and how I can help adjust him to fit better to the standard of Waardenburg's Syndrome and still have him be kind of unique. Thank you for any help, comments, or critique provided!

*ADVANCE WARNING* This will be terribly long, but I'm only including the things related to his disorder.


Basic Information:

Birth Name: Alexi Larkin Evans, initials ALE
Origin: Defend, Fierce, Rock . . . Family wished him to fiercely defend those who need it
Nicknames: Alex, Atlas

Birth Date: December 27th
True Age: 17-22
Appeared Age: 15-19 (without beard); 18-25 (with beard)
Horoscope: Capricorn, the Sea Goat

Sex: Male
Appeared Gender: Male, occasionally female
Desired Gender: Male

Race: Western European; considers himself Dutch, Welsh, and Celt.
Ethnicity: Approximately - 50% Dutch, 25% Norse, 12.5% Welsh, 6.25% Egyptian, 6.25% Celtic
Nationality: Generally United States of America, can differ


Physical Appearance:

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Skin Tone: Pale peach w/ red undertones
Body Markings: Cat scars all over body, long ragged barbwire fence scar on right thigh, small eyebrow scar on left eyebrow (covers w/ makeup)
Tattoos: Outside upper right arm has 'tribal' Celtic/Norse tattoo depicting Celtic Knots and Loki's symbols intertwined

Natural Hair Color: Dirty blonde/gold, with a platinum white clump near middle of forehead area
Current Hair Color: Deep blue, black, bright sky blue, and lavender swirls; 'galaxy hair' - white dyed, too.
Hair Length: Chin/shoulder length
Hair Style: Think Thor from Avengers; mostly straight, slightly wavy after shower; usually down or man-bun

Natural Eye Color: Pale grey-blue. Mostly grey with a yellow ring around pupil and a blue ring on outside of iris. Look grey or blue, but stay pale
Glasses/Contacts: Occasionally wears thin-rimmed silver reading glasses
Eye Shape: Wide-spaced eyes, round-almond shaped

Face Shape: Round-shaped face, but not chubby
Body Frame: Tall, athletic; narrow shoulders, slightly defined muscles
Height: 6 ft; 183 cm
Weight: 165 lbs; 75 kg


Medical Record:

Overall Health History: Rarely gets sick, tends to get a cold once a year max. Ear infections are common, though. Has had a recurring case of anxiety and stress-related problems (such as heart pains, low sleep, etc.). Is hypersensitive to looks/can cry over nothing.
Disabilities: Has Waardenburg's Syndrome. Has several of the symptoms, including pigment problems, pale eyes, white forelock, widened nasal cavity, eyes far apart, and hard of hearing. Right ear is nearly deaf, left is fine; wears a hearing aid (small, neutral colored).
Allergies: Allergic to soy, seafood, and coffee. Will still eat them, but will pay later (soy causes vomiting/diarrhea in medium-large amounts; seafood causes vomiting, rashes, and swelling in any amount; coffee causes upset stomach, small rashes, and diarrhea in large amounts).





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