NO REGRETS.
Except for one. THE PLANET ISN'T A PERFECT CIRCLE.

This is what I mean when I said that I plan on working harder on the comic than I did last time. I mean compare this to the last version.

Reference

"No! Wait!" I wailed as my little brother walked away, hypnotized. "Peaches... Sissy?" he murmured subconsciously. "Yes! It's me, Sissy! Pear? Pear Leaves? Hello?" I said frantically as he murmered, "Going... to real home. Tell Mom and Dad I'm.. in Cloudsdale." "Cloudsdale?!" I said, horrified. "You're an earth pony, like me!! You can't walk on clouds!! You'll fall and break your neck!" He didn't answer, just walked faster. I grabbed his back hoof and he shook me off, still muttering, "Sissy... you can come with if you want.." I nodded vigorously. No matter how ignorant and annoying he was, he was still my brother and I still had to protect him. I'd get the first unicorn I saw to teleport to my parents and tell them that Pear was hypnotized and I was following him and protecting him. It wouldn't be easy, I knew, but somehow I HAD to make him snap out of it. Somehow...

CRAP I FORGOT TO MAKE THIS A COLOR-IN OF THE COVER.
Well there goes that plan.
It started out as what was supposed to be a keyhole on a realistic shiny surface, and I don't know what it turned out to be, but I like it.
Soyeah, 4Key's back, I'm redoing it AGAIN, but there's going to be a lot of revamping this time. Better style, a prologue that's not-so-crappy, and I'm actually going to WORK on it instead of just throwing a bunch of scribbles together and saying "here's a page" (even though that's EXACTLY WHAT I JUST DID). Also slight character, history, plotline, and machinery redesigns, and I added in cool new wyrm-bots, the Captain of you'll see in the prologue.

Rise Of The Packs: chapter 1: Reunion page 5

this was a bit rushed

if you can't read:

panel 1:

??? and storm: attack!

panel 2:

???: allow us

everyone else: 0.0

panel 3:

??? dark will hear of this!

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Rise Of The Packs: chapter 1: Reunion page 4

sorry for the long wait

if you can't read:

panel 1:

???: prince toughclaws

panel 2:

???: hehehe

panel 3:

storm: oh no!

panel 4:

???: why hello

???: hehe

???: hehe

panel 5:

???: heh get ready stripe

panel 6:

???: ready riptide

???: hehe

panel 7:

* thud *

???: hey!

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Rise Of The Packs: chapter 1: Reunion page 3

if you can't read:

panel 1:

* sigh*

panel 2:

???: who are you?

panel 3:

storm: I'm storm and she's Ashleigh

Ashleigh: * whimper*

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Vapor'' YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!"

Vapor" YA WE LIKE WAFFLES! just loving em'!

Vapor says,"will u be famous? IDK... i really don't know..."
( sorry this got here late i was away from home without a computer )

ᵀᵉᵃˡ wrote:

ᵀᵉᵃˡ wrote:

The ~ Four ~ Elements
If you stop, the ceiling can't hold us



<< Cover >>
Prolouge 1
Prolouge 2


Panel << 1 >>
Fire Element: '' We fight until we die.. ''

Panel << 2 >>
Earth Element: '' We won't stop... ''

Panel << 3 >>
Water/Ice Element: '' Keep on running.. ''

Panel << 4 >>
Air Element: '' Never give up.. ''




The darkness has given in, the four have been born. Only now, they are in terrible danger, luckily they will train and combine their elements to become one. Taking battles and fighting over who is worth more then others. It is time...to show what they are really made of.

ᵀᵉᵃˡ wrote:

The ~ Four ~ Elements
If you stop, the ceiling can't hold us



<< Cover >>
Prolouge 1




The darkness has given in, the four have been born. Only now, they are in terrible danger, luckily they will train and combine their elements to become one. Taking battles and fighting over who is worth more then others. It is time...to show what they are really made of.

I'm in a bit of a rush right now, so I'll type something here later.

Cover
Theme Song

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Text/dialogue can be typed here upon request!

Vicissitude (c) Fluffy:3
All art and characters (c) Fluffy:3

This is the cover page of my Comic Journey Of SilverPine with some of the main characters.
Sorry for the bad background T.T
Good at backgrounds?! Message me if you want to do the backgrounds for my comic ( PLease!)

Note: No longer accepting Characters until further notice!

Prologue

Note: AT THIS TIME I AM ACCEPTING APPLICATIONS FOR WOLF/DOG CHARACTERS, WANT TO BE IN THE COMIC FILL OUT THE FORUM BELOW [/size]


Name:
Age:
Gender:
Specise:
Markings:
Scars:
History:
Pack Name (if you had one):
Accessories (Feather, Collar, ect.): [/b]

You can send me a message or post it here. Now for these characters names and owners!

From Left To Right:

Puck :Owner amberheart96
Jinx :Owner amberheart96 (Puck`s sister)
Larain :Owner Moonncloud
Fang :Owner Moonncloud (Larains Older Brother)
Cressa :Owner Wolftooth

Thank You`s too
Thank you amberheart96 and Wolftooth for submiting Puck, Jinx, and Cressa!
Thank you for the help on the name amberheart96!

[size=150]OH By the way the timer is way way way off!!!!

Vapor," me? nah... pfft...